6.2 Peer Editing Worksheet

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PeerEditingWorksheet

Readthenarrativethoroughly,makingnotesinthemarginthatdescribeyourimmediate reactionstowhat'swritten.Thenanswerthesequestions: 1. Didthenarrativefocusonaspecificmomentofthetimelineorsumuptheentirelife storyofthebrownfield?Wasthismethoddoneeffectively? 2. Didtheopeningparagraphcatchmyattention?Howcanthisbeimproved? 3. Doesthepaperflow?Whattransitionsneedtobeimproved? 4. Didyourpartnerutilizepersonificationtechniquesattemptedimagery?Citeexamples. 5. Istheretoolittleinformation?WhatdoIwanttohearmoreabout? 6. Whatcanbetakenoutofthenarrative? 7. Arethereanygrammarorpunctuationerrors?Wherearethey? NOTES: