Ancillary Peer Assessment

Level 1 0-3Level 2 4-6Level 3 7-8Level 4 9-10

Newspaper Advert

1 2 3 4 Has the person completed their advert in a standard newspaper size?1 2 3 4 Is there a thin black line surrounding the whole advert?1 2 3 4 When you look at the advert overall, does it communicate its intended idea/message? 1 2 3 4 Is the advert appropriate for the target audience?1 2 3 4 Selection of image: mise-en-scene; colour, figure, lighting, objects, setting1 2 3 4 Do they manipulate the photographs appropriately to the context for presentation, including within text such as cropping/sizing/special effects/filters etc.1 2 3 4 Is the main image appropriate and communicate the right message?1 2 3 4 Framing of shots: including and excluding elements as appropriate1 2 3 4 Appropriately integrating illustration and text?1 2 3 4 Do they show awareness of the need for variety in fonts (but also keeping consistent) and text size?1 2 3 4 Overall text: using accurate and appropriate style of language?1 2 3 4 Is the title clear?1 2 3 4 Is the style of font appropriate and consistent?1 2 3 4 Is there information about the channel, what time and date?1 2 3 4 Are the colours appropriate?1 2 3 4 How creative has the person been with their idea?1 2 3 4 Is the layout design effective? (clear and simple) Is there clear hierarchy? (small, medium, large)1 2 3 4 Have the clearly been inspired from existing adverts?1 2 3 4 Does the person have the correct indesign file saved?1 2 3 4 Does the person have a PDF file saved as ‘newspaper advert Draft 1’?

Overall level: _______ 1/2 Overall Mark /10: _______3

Targets to improve:-----------

Double page spread

1 2 3 4 Has the person completed their double page spread in the correct size? (should be A3 landscape)1 2 3 4 Is there a thin black line surrounding the whole advert and a thin line though the middle to identify there is 2 pages side by side?1 2 3 4 When you look at the double page spread overall, does it communicate its intended idea/message? (the flavour of their documentary)1 2 3 4 Is the advert appropriate for the target audience?1 2 3 4 Selection of image: mise-en-scene; colour, figure, lighting, objects, setting1 2 3 4 Do they manipulate the photographs appropriately to the context for presentation, including within text such as cropping/sizing/special effects/filters etc.1 2 3 4 Are the images appropriate and communicate the right message?1 2 3 4 Framing of shots: including and excluding elements as appropriate1 2 3 4 Appropriately integrating illustration and text?1 2 3 4 Do they show awareness of the need for variety in fonts (but also keeping consistent) and text size?1 2 3 4 Overall text: using accurate and appropriate style of language?1 2 3 4 Does the main title stand out and clear?1 2 3 4 Does the subtitle come secondary to the main title and reveal a little bit more information about the article?1 2 3 4 Is the style of font appropriate and consistent? Is it readable?1 2 3 4 Are the paragraphs (text boxes) easy to read and appropriate size?1 2 3 4 Do the images have captions if necessary?1 2 3 4 Are the colours appropriate?1 2 3 4 How creative has the person been with their idea?1 2 3 4 Is the layout design effective? (clear and simple) Is there clear hierarchy? (small, medium, large)1 2 3 4 Have the clearly been inspired from existing double page spreads?1 2 3 4 Does the person have the correct indesign file saved?1 2 3 4 Does the person have a PDF file saved as ‘double page spread Draft 1’?

Overall level: _______1/2 Overall Mark /10: _______2/3

Targets to improve:-----------

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Newspaper mark ______ /10 Double page mark _______ /10 = __________ /20 Overall mark ⨪