MY WRITING PROCESS

By. Ryotaro Iwamura

Pre writing

Mind mapI will go to choose about football player or world cup. Anybody knows

the world cup. But I have no ideas what I have to make questions for world cup. So I will choose about football player. But that football player needs to be very famous. I will talk about that football player child hood, football life and how many times he got titles. 

Gathering Grid

Subject: Cristiano Ronaldo

Source1www.cristianoronaldo.com

Source 2http://www.transfermarkt.com/cristiano-ronaldo/profil/spieler/8198

Source 3http://www.ronaldo7.net/

Question 1Birth of Cristiano Ronaldo.

His birth is Feb. 5th, 1985.

He was born in Portugal and he was lived in Funchal Madeira

His mother gave him name, “Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro

Question 2About His football life

Pro league2003-2009: Manchester United2009-: Real Madrid

Junior league1993-1995: Andorinha1995-1998: Nacional Da Madeira1998-2003: Sporting Lisbon

He stared football at 8 years old.

Question 3How many times Cristiano Ronaldo got titles?

In Manchester UnitedEnglischer Meister:3Champions League-Sieger:1Englischer Ligapokal-Sieger:2FIFA-Klub-Welmeister:1Englischer Pokalsieger:1

In Real Madrid Champions League-Sieger:1 Spanischer Superpokalsieger:1 UEFA-Supercup-Sieger:1 Spanischer Meister:1

Individual  74 titles

WritingOut line

#1Cristiano Ronaldo

Cristiano Ronaldo is famous football player.

B. there is 3 important parts of C, R’s life

C. Birth, titles and his football life.

 

#2 Birth of C,R.

Feb 5th, 1985.

He was born in Portugal and he was lived in Funchal Madeira.

His full name is Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro.

 

#3 about his football life.

Pro league

2003-2009: Manchester United

2009-: Real Madrid

Junior league

1993-1995: Andorinha

1995-1998: Nacional Da Madeira

1998-2003: Sporting Lisbon

He stared football at 8 years old.

 

#4 Titles of C, R.

In Manchester United Englischer Meister:3 Champions League-Sieger:1 Englischer Ligapokal-Sieger:2 FIFA-Klub-Welmeister:1 Englischer Pokalsieger:1  

In Real Madrid Champions League-Sieger:1 Spanischer Superpokalsieger:1 UEFA-Supercup-Sieger:1 Spanischer Meister:1

 

Individual 74 titles.  

#5 conclusions

He has a best free kick (FK) shooting skills and dribbling skills. He’s kind to supporters and team mates. And, his football skills make us feel excited. If Cristiano Ronaldo will retire, he will come up to football legend and any football supporters won’t forget him forever.

1st draft Histories of Cristiano Ronaldo Cristiano Ronaldo is famous football player. Birth, Titles and

football life, there is 3 important parts of C, R’s life.   Birth of C, R He was born on February 5th, 1985 in Portugal and he was

lived in Funchal Madeira. His mother gave him name “Cristiano Ronaldo Dos Santos Aveiro”

  About his football life. He started football at 8 years old. On 1993-1995, he was in

junior teams of Andorinha, on 1995-1998, he was in junior teams of National Da Madeira, on 1998-2003 he was in junior teams of Sporting Lisbon, On 2003-2009, he was in Manchester United and now, he is in Real Madrid.

 

Titles of C, R. In Manchester United, he got 3 Englischer Meisters, 1

Champions League-Sieger, 2 Englischer Ligapokal-Siegers, 1 FIFA-Klub-Welmeiter and 1 Englischer PokalSieger.

  In Real Madris, he got 1 Champions League, 1 Spanischer

Superpokalsieger, 1 UEFA-Supercup-Sieger and, 1 Spanischer Meister.

  And he got 74 titles for individual.   C, R’s characters and football skills He has a best free kick (FK) shooting skills and dribbling skills.

He’s kind to supporters and team mates. And, his football skills make us feel excited. If Cristiano Ronaldo will retire, he will come up to football legend and any football supporters won’t forget him forever.

Revising

Editing

3 goals

1. sep 22th

I’m going to pick one topic. And researches that topic. And make grid and write questions, answer and sources on grid.

2. Oct 10th

I’m going to finish concusions of out line and1st draft for today. After finish that, I will check grammars, words wrong and do words choice

3. Oct 22th

Yesterday night, I worked for my final draft but it didn’t finish it yet. So today, I will finish my final draft, final essay and start to work on my PPT.

The End