Draft Stage Audience Feedback

Draft stage magazine cover

• really amazing stylized look. The font looks top and love the logo

• Perhaps add the name of the movie• Potentially use an aceent colour to

draw attention to key elements• Conveys the indie style well• Eye contact from key image is

definitely needed• the bar code perhaps is a little too big• Eveything works together really well

and it all matches• The drawing is awesome though

perhaps add some more colour• Looks different to other magazines in

the class, sets genre well• Nice monochrome colour scheme

Draft stage poster

• Font looks really good maybe add tagline• The credit block needs to be slightly stronger• Make use the text is readable and have the

actprs names large on the poster• Perhaps add a tag line to explain the movie• The credit block is too small• The image is off really good quality and the

muted colour scheme works well• The font matches the film very well• The poster looks vey vintage • Overall its awesome• I really liked the overall look and how the

typewriter font is used to coordinate with the typewriter

• Really stylish and good image positioning

Draft stage trailerhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jhbdUUK-RQ

• Need to add music and match shots too it

• Very good stylised shots• Filming needs to be completed as

soon as possible • There is a camera wobble in the first

sequence try and edit this put• I do not understand t=he

narerative, titles or voiceover definitely need to be added

• Perhaps put his or her shots in b and wto distinguish a difference between them

• Some shots are blurred and need to be re shot like her eye, sharpness needs to be retained

• I would do all the titles by hand on the typewriter to establish continuity.