Eng101 SP15 PeerReview ComparativeAnalyses Apostrophes

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Eng101_SP15 APOSTROPHES

PEER REVIEW COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS


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Apostrophe

Only 2 uses1. ownership

2. omission


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Apostrophe - Ownership

Use possessive nouns to show that someone ownsomething

◦That is the nose of Mary.

◦That is Mary’s nose.

◦Those are the toes of Gary.◦Those are Gary’s toes.


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If 2 people own the same thing, use an apostrophthe second person

◦The marriage of Jim and Mimi

◦ Jim and Mimi’s marriage

◦The father of Kate and Meg◦Kate and Meg’s father


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If the noun is already plural (boys) just add an apo◦One boy and one car

◦The boy’s car

◦Two boys and two cars

◦The boys’ cars


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Apostrophe - Omission

Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦10 o’clock

◦‘93

◦Let’s

◦It’s


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Apostrophe - Omission

Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦Both boy’s and girl’s are invited to try out for the

team.

◦Tomato’s are for sale.

◦I grew up in the 1990’s. ◦There are three 9’s on this page.


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The good doctor’s newsletters

RememberPossession

omission


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Comparative Analyses


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Groups 9:30AM

1. Bobby, Lori, Ty, Renaldo2. Mike B, Gene, Cody B, Matt

3. Chantel, A’neeshea, Jenna, De’maun

4. Mark, Drew, Sara, Chaunte

5. Meagan, Brittany, Cody W


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Groups 12PM

1. Lyndsey, Ryan M., Carina, Chris2. Kayla, Adrienne, Arionna, Chaymaa

3. Morgan, Tyler, Aaron, Billy, Brittany

4. Zach, Jesse, Ventrice, Brian

5. Julian, Ryan C., Sarah, Lauren, Jake


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Discuss sample essay

Decide the criteria for a good comparative anRate essays from best to worst

Write order on board


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Jigsaw!

Each group will have at least one membeknows the essay of Student Five, StudentStudent Seven

Discuss essays

Rank essays from least effective to mosteffective…write on board


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Each body paragraph should…

* Identify element (topic sentence)* summarize part of essay illustrating that element

* give direct text from essay (quote)

* Explain how this example shows the element’s effect

(concluding sentence)


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Works Cited pageA Work in an Anthology, Reference, or Collection

Works may include an essay in an edited collection or anthology, or a chapterbasic form is for this sort of citation is as follows:

Lastname, First name. "Title of Essay." Title of Collection. Ed. Editor's Name(s

Publication: Publisher, Year. Page range of entry. Medium of Publicatio


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Peer Review Comparative AnaOn peer review sheet, write

Reviewed by: (insert your name)Summary author: (peer’s name)

Exchange essays.

Read the essay and complete the peer review sheet.Give both to author (your peer).


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9:30AM For Thursday…

Essay #2 rough draft for peer review Read pgs 232 – 246 about causal techniques

Be ready for commas

Essay #2 will be due Tuesday 3/17


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12PM For Thursday…

Essay #2 final copy due (comparative analysis)Order of materials for submission –

rubric, final copy, prewrite (freewrite done in class, notes owritten for homework and class discussions), plan (outline)peer review

Read pgs 232 – 246 about causal techniques

Be ready for commas

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