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Everything you know about technology copywriting is wrong. David McGuire

Everything you know about technology copywriting is wrong · SECRETS FOR SOFTWARE BUYERS Ubiquity. Volume 2007 Issue November I BY SANJAY KUMAR PAL Full citation in the ACM Digital

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Page 1: Everything you know about technology copywriting is wrong · SECRETS FOR SOFTWARE BUYERS Ubiquity. Volume 2007 Issue November I BY SANJAY KUMAR PAL Full citation in the ACM Digital

Everything you know about technology copywriting is wrong.David McGuire

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Instinct #1:

A bigger audience is better.

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Rule #1:

Target until it hurts.

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Instinct #2:

Our audience is educated; we need to use big words.

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Source: “The Public Speaks: An Empirical Study of Legal Communication” Christopher R Trudeau, 2012

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Rule #2:

The harder the subject, the simpler the language.

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Instinct #3:

We should be consistent with our competitors.

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Rule #3:

Use language that shows what you’re like to work with.

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Let’s chat…

@mcguiredavid

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(Pssst… we do a discount for Software Cornwall members)

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Thanks.