Feedback of First Draft

Front cover looks a bit random. Doesn’t look professional

Alot of white space. Fill it up

See how it will look with the black background just on the headings of the editorial pillars

Negative Feedback of First Draft

These are two different pages so keep them separated

Positive Feedback of First Draft

The setting out of this is professional and looks attractive

Good images and pages matches with the editorial pillars

The use of resizing images and page numbers to make it stand out is really catchy

Use of colours are good. Coordinated with the front cover

Looks attractive and professional

From looking at the feedback there is a lot to improve I will start by:• adding next to the title whether the magazine is weekly or monthly. It will be weekly so I will add in pink ‘THIS WEEK:’ and behind this can go my front cover image so it don’t look too random• I will only have the black background on the ‘FEATURES’, ‘REVIEWS’, ‘NEWS’ and ‘GIGS’ and make my white text black instead• next to my film tape I will add a black background describing what the images are from and contact details