FEEDBACK ON MY MAGAZINE.

I got two if my friends to give me feedback on my finished media product.Joan who is an 18 year old media student in Lewisham college and

Stephen, a 21 year old advertising and broadcasting student in university.

FINAL FRONT PAGE.

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The masthead is looks loud because of the poker dots, therefore anchors the text “aloud”.

By Stephen.

This tell you that it is a music magazine. it is near the masthead as well, so it is one of the things you

see first. By joan.

Most music and fashion magazine has the plus sign to show relation

between the cover story and sub cover story.

By Joan.

The strap line and the cheap price is catchy.

By joan.

-- everything about the front page is good. The best thing

about this page is the masthead the catchy headlines. By Joan.

--the front page is good but can improved if the picture is edited

well. By Stephen.

FINAL CONTENT PAGE.

The masthead is constantly being repeated on all

the pages. By Joan.

The Editors letter makes feel more connected to the

magazine. By Stephen

This was not relevant because it meant that I had to read

about her twice. By Stephen.

--the best thing about this page is the editors note , the credit at

the bottom and the masthead/logo. By Joan.

--the worse thing about this page is the text about the model. I think that there's not point for it. This page can be improved if the text about the model was

deleted and replaced with another picture.

By Stephen.

This was good because it

introduced me to the model before I read about her inside the

magazine.

FINAL DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD.The caption with a

speech mark is convection of most

music magazine.By Joan.

The credits makes it look like it's being done by

professional people. By Joan.

The magazine logo

(masthead)is constantly on the different

pages, it makes the pages similar.

The main picture looks professionally done and the

editing makes it look professional as well. By stephen.

most music and fashion magazine normally have a column that looks like this.

By Joan.

--the page is perfect and I can

see this work getting published. This looks a real

page in magazine. by Joan.

--this page is the best out of the

three. It looks like an actual cut out

from a magazine. I can't fault this

page. By Stephen.