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FEEDBACK ON MY MAGAZINE. I got two if my friends to give me feedback on my finished media product. Joan who is an 18 year old media student in Lewisham college and Stephen, a 21 year old advertising and broadcasting student in university. . FINAL FRONT PAGE. . gg. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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FEEDBACK ON MY MAGAZINE.

FEEDBACK ON MY MAGAZINE.I got two if my friends to give me feedback on my finished media product.Joan who is an 18 year old media student in Lewisham college and Stephen, a 21 year old advertising and broadcasting student in university. FINAL FRONT PAGE.

ggThe masthead is looks loud because of the poker dots, therefore anchors the text aloud. By Stephen.

This tell you that it is a music magazine. it is near the masthead as well, so it is one of the things you see first. By joan. Most music and fashion magazine has the plus sign to show relation between the cover story and sub cover story.By Joan.The strap line and the cheap price is catchy.By joan.-- everything about the front page is good. The best thing about this page is the masthead the catchy headlines. By Joan.

--the front page is good but can improved if the picture is edited well. By Stephen. FINAL CONTENT PAGE.

The masthead is constantly being repeated on all the pages. By Joan.The Editors letter makes feel more connected to the magazine. By StephenThis was not relevant because it meant that I had to read about her twice. By Stephen.--the best thing about this page is the editors note , the credit at the bottom and the masthead/logo. By Joan.

--the worse thing about this page is the text about the model. I think that there's not point for it. This page can be improved if the text about the model was deleted and replaced with another picture. By Stephen. This was good because it introduced me to the model before I read about her inside the magazine. FINAL DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD.

The caption with a speech mark is convection of most music magazine.By Joan. The credits makes it look like it's being done by professional people. By Joan.The magazine logo (masthead)is constantly on the different pages, it makes the pages similar. The main picture looks professionally done and the editing makes it look professional as well. By stephen. most music and fashion magazine normally have a column that looks like this. By Joan. --the page is perfect and I can see this work getting published. This looks a real page in magazine. by Joan.

--this page is the best out of the three. It looks like an actual cut out from a magazine. I can't fault this page. By Stephen.