IBT Writing 张丹纾

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综合写作 0-5独立写作 0-5

3.5-22 分

综合写作 独立写作 写作成绩5 4 4.5

4 3 3.5

3 2 2.5

评分系统独立与综合写作的平均分

写作总分 独立与综合写作的平均分

写作总分5.00 30 2.25 15

4.75 29 2.00 14

4.50 28 1.75 12

4.25 27 1.50 11

4.00 25 1.25 10

3.75 24 1.00 8

3.50 22 7

3.25 21 5

3.00 20 4

2.75 18 0

2.50 17

课程分类• 1 Independent writing• 2 Integrated writing• 3 language

Integrated Writing

实际上是考的不是写作能力 而是听力和听写能力以及基本逻辑判断能力。

　

Altruism is a type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interest for that of another animal or group of animals. Altruism is the opposite of selfishness; individuals performing altruistic acts gain nothing for themselves.

Examples of altruism abound, both among humans and among other mammals. Unselfish acts among humans range from the sharing of food with strangers to the donation of body organs to family members, and even to strangers. Such acts are altruistic in that they benefit another, yet provide little reward to the one performing the act.

In fact, many species of animals appear willing to sacrifice food, or even their life, to assist other members of their group. The meerkat, which is a mammal that dwells in burrows in grassland areas of Africa, is often cited as an example. In groups of meerkats, an individual acts as a sentinel, standing guard and looking out for predators while the others hunt for food or eat food they have obtained. If the sentinel meerkat sees a predator such as a hawk approaching the group, it gives an alarm cry alerting the other meerkats to run and seek shelter. By standing guard, the sentinel meerkat gains nothing—it goes without food while the others eat, and it places itself in grave danger. After it issues an alarm it has to flee alone, which might make it more at risk to a predator, since animals in groups are often able to work together to fend off a predator. So the altruistic sentinel behavior helps ensure the survival of other members of the meerkat’s group.

Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading.

Independent Writing

考查学生实际的写作能力，包括对问题的想法，遣词造句的能力等。

独立写作的模式 Do you agree or disagree with the following

statement? [A sentence or sentences that present an issue

appear here.] Use Specific reasons and examples to support

your answer.

2008.8.16 10 年 6 月又考Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 　

课程流程Introduction Structure of

essays Brainstorm

Main pointArgumentDevelopment

MaterialsIntegrated

writing

Vocabulary, Phrases Sentence varietyProofread

老美喜欢什么样的语言？

Language

摘自 New York Times

Ms. Alt, tall, lanky and often dressed in skinny jeans and a fashionably worn leather jacket, worked at a number of French women’s magazines, usually in a freelance capacity, before joining French Vogue. In life as well as in French Vogue’s pages, her almost boyish, rock ’n’ roll style was a counterpoint to Ms. Roitfeld’s sexy, frankly materialistic look. They were a team, however, representing the magazine in the front row.

• My father, however, didn’t agree with my proposal.

• My room is small; however, it is comfortable.

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