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IELTS Writing - Overview The IELTS Academic and General Writing Modules are similar in some ways and different in others. Whichever test you do, you have one hour to complete two tasks. It is the nature of the tasks that makes them different. You can see this clearly in the chart below: General Academic Task 1 Minimum 150 words Writing a letter in response to a situation – informal, semi-formal, or formal Minimum 150 words Interpreting, describing, or comparing information presented in graphic form - a diagram, bar chart, line graph, pie chart or table Task 2 Minimum 250 words Writing a more personal essay possible informal style Minimum 250 words Writing an essay on a general academic topic – formal style In both cases, your score is based on three fundamental criteria: Content: How well do you r present your arguments, ideas and evidence? Quality: How effectively are you able to communicate your ideas and thoughts? Technical Aspects: How correct is your grammar? How rich is your vocabulary? How varied are your sentences? To complete an organized, coherent piece of writing, you need to take 2-5 minutes to plan. During this time, you can consider what position you will adopt, how you're going to expand on the topic and in what order you will present your ideas. You should skip the planning activity only if you have very little time left. In such a case, you can work directly on the task itself. Of course, grammar and vocabulary will also be assessed. Make sure you check your writing for verb tense agreement, prepositions, word order, sentence patterns, sentence structure, and range of vocabulary. Avoid using the same verbs, nouns, or adjectives more than once. Do not use slang at all. In the academic section of the IELTS, avoid contractions, which are a clear symbol of informal writing. IELTS_LETTER WRITING Page 1

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IELTS Writing - Overview

The IELTS Academic and General Writing Modules are similar in some ways and different in others. Whichever test you do, you have one hour to complete two tasks. It is the nature of the tasks that makes them different. You can see this clearly in the chart below:

General Academic

Task 1 Minimum 150 words

Writing a letter in response to a situation – informal, semi-formal, or formal

Minimum 150 words

Interpreting, describing, or comparing information presented in graphic form - a diagram, bar chart, line graph, pie chart or table

Task 2 Minimum 250 words

Writing a more personal essay – possible informal style

Minimum 250 words

Writing an essay on a general academic topic – formal style

In both cases, your score is based on three fundamental criteria:

Content: How well do you r present your arguments, ideas and evidence? Quality: How effectively are you able to communicate your ideas and thoughts? Technical Aspects: How correct is your grammar? How rich is your vocabulary? How varied

are your sentences?

To complete an organized, coherent piece of writing, you need to take 2-5 minutes to plan. During this time, you can consider what position you will adopt, how you're going to expand on the topic and in what order you will present your ideas. You should skip the planning activity only if you have very little time left. In such a case, you can work directly on the task itself.

Of course, grammar and vocabulary will also be assessed. Make sure you check your writing for verb tense agreement, prepositions, word order, sentence patterns, sentence structure, and range of vocabulary. Avoid using the same verbs, nouns, or adjectives more than once. Do not use slang at all. In the academic section of the IELTS, avoid contractions, which are a clear symbol of informal writing.

IELTS General Writing

The IELTS General Writing section measures your ability to communicate about common, practical issues and expand on topics of personal interest. You may be asked to provide factual information, make suggestions, express likes and dislikes, or present complaints, opinions, or views. This section lasts for 1 hour and includes 2 tasks. Task 2 carries more marks than Task 1. Therefore, you may wish to divide your time as follows:

Task 1 – 150 words – 20 minutes

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Task 2 – 250 words – 40 minutes

According to the makers of the IELTS exam, assessment of General Writing tasks is based on the following criteria:

Task Achievement - how thoroughly you do what is asked Coherence and Cohesion - how organized your letter is Lexical Resource - the range of vocabulary you use Grammatical Range and Accuracy - how correct your grammar is

IELTS GENERAL WRITING - TASK 1

You are asked to write a letter to a friend, government agency or interest group. The level of formality depends on who you are writing to and how well you know them, so the style may be formal, semi-formal or informal. You are given a brief description of a problem or situation, followed by bulleted instructions on what to include in your letter. Make sure you write about each and every one of the points mentioned. Also use appropriate grammar, capitalization, and punctuation.

It will also help to read through several sample tests in order to both familiarize yourself with the type of situations presented, and to learn how to write these types of letter answers easily, correctly, and quickly. Sample Task 1 tasks include:

writing to a college administration officer about problems with your dormitory writing to a landlord to resolve problems with the heating system writing to a friend to invite him/her to a surprise party

IELTS GENERAL WRITING - TASK 2You have to write a minimum 250-word essay on a topic of general interest. You might have to solve a problem, present your opinion, or compare differing viewpoints on a given topic.

The usual rules of good essay writing apply. Plan before you write, use varied sentence structure, utilize linking words to connect ideas, use dynamic and rich vocabulary to put your thoughts across, be careful of your spelling, capitalization, and punctuation, and organize your essay into about 4-5 paragraphs. A sample structure is shown below:

Paragraph 1 Introduction Restate the topic, indicate your position

Paragraph 2 Body Main idea, supporting idea, examples

Paragraph 3 Body Main idea, supporting idea, examples

Paragraph 4 Conclusion Summarize ideas, restate position

 

Sample Task 2 tasks include:

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whether it is possible to take a vacation from your problems whether families today are closer than they used to be. whether smoking in public should be banned whether old people should go to nursing homes

Write as many practice essays as possible, within the 40-minute time limit, so you can do so with ease and confidence on the day of your exam.

IELTS Letter Writing Tips - 10 Ways to Get Higher Marks on the IELTS Letter Writing Task

1. Identify the type of letter you are being asked to write. Is it a formal, semi-formal or informal letter? The entire tone of your letter is based on your answer to this question. Adjust your style and choice of words according to the type of letter you have been asked to write.

2. Open and close the letter correctly. Remember that each type of letter requires a different opening and closing. The chart below will help you remember this:

Style Characteristics

Opening

Ending

Formal

To someone you have not met, whose

name you don't know

Dear Sir /

Madam

Yours faithfu

lly

Semi-formal

To someone

you may or may not

have met, whose last name you know &

use

Dear Mr

Brown,

Dear Ms

Stone

Yours sincer

ely

Informal

To someone you know

well, whose first name you know and

use

Dear JohnDear Anita

Best regard

sWarm wishe

s

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3. Open a formal and semi-formal letter with a formal sentence. Don't try to be friendly, as you do not know the person you are writing to. Get right down to business and indicate the reason you are writing, as shown below:

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to inquire about / I am writing in connection with...

Dear Mr Jones,

I am writing to inform you ... / I am writing in connection with...

4. Open an informal letter with a general, friendly paragraph. With friends whom we know, we care about the whole person. We have a broader relationship in the context of which this communication is taking place. So it is best to acknowledge that friendship first, before getting down to the reason for your letter. In fact, the first paragraph could be purely friendly small talk, unrelated to the reason for your writing. Look at the example below:

Dear Jane

I hope you and your family are all well. It was such a pleasure to see you again last summer. We sure had a great time catching up with each other after so many years. You have always been a cherished friend, no matter how much of a gap there has been since we met.

Anyway, the reason I'm writing is that I have some good news - I am getting married this summer...

5. Identify the main purpose of the letter. Are you asking for help, apologizing, inviting someone, complaining or thanking someone? Learn appropriate and polite expressions that will support what you need to say.

6. Learn and use standard written phrases. Students sometimes struggle to finish their writing in time. This happens when you are trying to write every sentence from scratch. The fact is, in conventional letter writing in English, we use a number of standard expressions and phrases and add on to them the specific information we wish to communicate. By learning how to use these expressions, you will find the letter writing task much easier and will never have to fight for time.

7. Make sure you write at least 150 words. Practice writing letters till you know what 150 words feels like and looks like. You will lose marks if you write less. You will not lose marks if you write more; the only restriction on writing more is in terms of time, not the number of words.

8. Learn the correct spelling of commonly used words. It is surprising how many IELTS students make a mistake when spelling words such as "sincerely", "faithfully", "in connection with" and so on. You can prevent yourself from losing marks by learning the correct spelling of these words and expressions which you are highly likely to use on your exam.

9. Stay on topic. In order to complete your letter within 20 minutes or less, practice writing letters where you stick to the point. The General IELTS Task 1 does require you to make up a bit of a story to complete your letter, but don't make your story so complicated that you run out of time.

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10. Include all three bulleted points. If you exclude even one of the points given to you in the question prompt, you will lose valuable marks. Practice writing letters that include the three points and go back and check that you have included them in each practice exercise you do.

IELTS Letter Writing - Useful Words & Expressions

To complete your IELTS letter writing task within 20 minutes, it is helpful to know some common phrases and set expressions. Being able to use these will allow you to express your ideas quickly and effectively, without thinking about each and every word. While you're learning their meaning, also make sure you can spell them perfectly. Finally, try the quiz at the bottom of the page to see how well you know these important expression.

ApologizingI'm sorry about...

I am sorry that...

I'm very sorry about...

I'm very sorry for...

Please forgive me for...

I'd like to apologize for...

Please accept my apologies.

Please accept my sincere apologies. (very formal)

Asking for Help

I'd be grateful if you could...

I would be grateful if you could...

I would appreciate it if you could...

Could you please...

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I was wondering of you could help me.(informal)

I would like to know...

Asking for Information

I am writing to enquire about...

I am writing to find out about...

What I am looking for is...

I would like to know about/if...

Closing

I look forward to seeing you.

I look forward to hearing from you.

I look forward to meeting you.

Complaining / expressing dissatisfaction

I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction with...

I'm writing to express my annoyance with...

I am not happy about...

...was very disappointing.

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Conveying regards

Please give my best regards to your family.

Please pass on my best wishes to your wife and children.

Please give my regards to your parents.

Expressing satisfaction

I was delighted to hear that...

I was very happy to learn that...

I was thrilled to find out that...

I was glad to hear that...

...was very enjoyable.

Expressing concern / sympathy

I was sorry to hear about... (your accident/ illness)

I am writing to express my concern about...

Giving bad news

I regret to inform you that...(semi-formal)

I am sorry to tell you that...(informal)

I regret to advise you that...(formal)

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I am afraid I have some bad news.(informal)

Giving good news

I am pleased to inform you that...(semi-formal)

I am delighted to tell you that...(informal)

I am happy to advise you that...(formal)

I thought you might like to know that...

Giving reasons

This is because...

This is because of...

This is due to... (formal)

This is as a result of...(formal)

This is owing to...(formal)

Making suggestions

Would it be a good idea to...

Perhaps it would be a good idea to...

Thanking

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Thanks.

Thank you.

Thank you very much.

Thank you kindly.

I can't thank you enough.

No words can express my gratitude.

I am extremely grateful for...

I very much appreciate your ______ing

QUIZ

Match the following:

1. Thank you kindly.

2. I am pleased to inform you that...

3. Please give my best wishes to...

4. This is due to...

5. I look forward to hearing from you.

6. I would like to know...

7. I'd like to apologize for...

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8. I regret to inform you...

a. Apologizing

b. Conveying regards

c. Giving bad news

d. Giving reasons

e. Closing

f. Thanking

g. Giving good news

h. Asking for information

Answers:1-f, 2-g, 3-b. 4-d, 5-e, 6-h, 7-a, 8-c

IELTS Letter Topics - Formal

1. Asking for Information

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:

Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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2. Applying for a Job

You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:

explain why you are writing describe your qualifications and experience explain how they can contact you

Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Kaplan IELTS 2009-2010 )

3. Making Suggestions

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Instant IELTS by Guy Brook-Hart)

4. Applying for a Job

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:

introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Instant IELTS by Guy Brook-Hart)

5. Complaining to a Bank

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

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explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

6. Informing an AirlineLast Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:

where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Kaplan IELTS 2009-2010 )

7. Applying for a Job

You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:

say what experience you have ask what the work involves enquire about conditions

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Action Plan for IELTS by Vanessa Jakeman and Clare McDowell)

8. Making Recommendations

You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:

say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Instant IELTS by Guy Brook-Hart)

9. Applying for a Job

You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter:

explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your personality say what experience and skills you have

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Instant IELTS by Guy Brook-Hart)

10. Complaining about a Product

You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter:

tell the store where you live & what happened explain the problem with the laptop state what action you would like the store to take

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Sample Formal Letters

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Complaining to a Hotel

Below is a sample letter response to Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is official, business-like and serious the use of Dear Sir / Madam the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions (I am writing in connection with...) the closing salutation ( "Yours faithfully" instead of the more informal "Yours sincerely" or

"Best regards")

General Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write your own address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing in connection with my recent stay at the Four Seasons in London, England. Unfortunately, due to a malfunctioning heater in my room, I spent three miserable nights at your hotel from April 26 – 29, 2010.

When I arrived in London, there was an unexpected snowstorm. I understand it does not usually snow inApril; however, when I got to my room, there was no heat. After complaining, a technician was sent up, who informed me they had to install a new heating unit. When I asked to be moved to another room, I was told the hotel was completely booked. Unfortunately, each night after work I returned to discover the problem had not been rectified. Eventually, I spent three horribly uncomfortable nights, wearing my coat to bed, wearing socks around the room and ending up with a bad cold from the unheated room. I had no time to complain as I had to catch a flight home right after my conference.

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I am shocked by this terrible service. This is not what anyone expects for $400 a night! To compensate me for this tremendous inconvenience, I ask that you refund my money right away and offer me a free, more comfortable stay in one of your finer suites in the future. If not, I am prepared to take my complaint to a higher authority.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest,

Yours faithfully,

Mr John McFee

(236 words)

Explaining to a Bank

Below is a sample letter response to Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is formal and business-like and serious the use of Dear Sir / Madam the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions ("Thank you kindly in advance.") the closing salutation ( "Yours faithfully", etc.)

General Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing in connection with a missing or stolen debit card from your bank. This is an urgent matter as the bank card could prove dangerous in the hands of the wrong person.

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Just yesterday, I received a letter from your bank's head office. It stated that my new bank card was enclosed and asked me to acknowledge receipt. However, when the envelope arrived in my mailbox, it was in a tattered state. More importantly, the debit card which was supposed to be included, was missing. I checked and rechecked around the mailbox, but found nothing. I am concerned that someone has gone through my mail and possibly stolen the card.

For this reason I request that you cancel the existing debit card immediately. The debit card in question is related to my account number 64729401 at your Bay and Bloor branch. After it has been cancelled, please arrange to send me a new one, as I need to travel overseas next week and will need to carry the new bank card with me.

Thank you kindly in advance,

Yours faithfully,

Ms Brenda Holster

(172 words)

Making Recommendations to a Magazine

Below is a sample letter response for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is straightforward and direct the use of Dear Sir / Madam the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions ("I am writing in connection with...") the closing salutation ( "Yours faithfully", etc.)

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

Write at least 150 words.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing in connection with our college cafeteria. Since almost every student spends some time here every day, I believe it is in everyone's best interest to find ways to improve the quality of this central eatery.

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The cafeteria itself is modern, spacious and attractive. The newly painted murals of the seaside give the seating area an open, airy, outdoor feeling which makes it very pleasant to eat meals there. This is further enhanced by the large green plants and flowing water fountains.

The main problem with the cafeteria is in the food served! First of all, there is a very limited selection available. Each day offers up only standard North American fare of hamburgers, hot dogs, chicken nuggets and french fries. Not only is this selection unhealthy, but also uninteresting day in and day out. We have so many international students on campus, it would be wonderful to have some curries, burritos and falafel added to the menu. Secondly, since this is a student cafeteria, prices need to stay low. We have unfortunately seen two price hikes in the last two years.

I am sure if we offer a wider range of foods, at better prices, the cafeteria will continue to run profitably as more students choose to eat there.

Yours faithfully,

Daniel Bernard

Making Recommendations to a Magazine

Below is a sample letter response for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is straightforward and direct the use of Dear Sir / Madam the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions ("I am writing in connection with...") the closing salutation ( "Yours faithfully", etc.)

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:

explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

Write at least 150 words.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Sir / Madam

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I am writing in connection with our college cafeteria. Since almost every student spends some time here every day, I believe it is in everyone's best interest to find ways to improve the quality of this central eatery.

The cafeteria itself is modern, spacious and attractive. The newly painted murals of the seaside give the seating area an open, airy, outdoor feeling which makes it very pleasant to eat meals there. This is further enhanced by the large green plants and flowing water fountains.

The main problem with the cafeteria is in the food served! First of all, there is a very limited selection available. Each day offers up only standard North American fare of hamburgers, hot dogs, chicken nuggets and french fries. Not only is this selection unhealthy, but also uninteresting day in and day out. We have so many international students on campus, it would be wonderful to have some curries, burritos and falafel added to the menu. Secondly, since this is a student cafeteria, prices need to stay low. We have unfortunately seen two price hikes in the last two years.

I am sure if we offer a wider range of foods, at better prices, the cafeteria will continue to run profitably as more students choose to eat there.

Yours faithfully,

Daniel Bernard

Sample Semi-formal Letters

IELTS Letter Topics - Semi-Formal

1. Arranging Accommodation

You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter:

explain the situation describe the kind of accommodation you would like provide the dates you will need it

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Samson,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

2. Asking for Permission

You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter:

Request time off Explain why you need to leave early Reassure him / her that your studies will not suffer

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Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _______

(Question taken from Action Plan for IELTS )

3. Complaining to a Landlord

You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter complaining about this to the landlord. In your letter:

explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _____________,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

4. Making a Suggestion

You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to Mr Koto, the manager. In your letter:

explain who you are describe the problem exactly make suggestions to improve the gym

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Koto,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

5. Booking Accommodation

You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:

explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms __________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

6. Explaining to a Neighbour

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You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:

explain what will be happening offer your apologies in advance invite her to join the celebration

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

7. Asking for permission

You are supposed to hand in a mid-term project for your psychology class by November 1st. However, your brother is getting married in Hawaii at the same time and the entire family is traveling there for the occasion. You would like an extension on the due date for submitting the project. Write to your professor. In your letter:

explain the situation remind the professor of your fine academic record to date ask for an extension of the due date

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

8. Making a Suggestion

You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. There are many washers and dryers there, but even more residents. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up. Write to the Property Manager, Mrs Williams. In your letter:

explain how long you have been a resident describe the problem propose your solution

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mrs Williams

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

9. Asking for Permission

You have received a job offer for a position you have wanted for a long time. You are expected to start on July 1st. However, you can only start a week later due to personal reasons. Write a letter to Mr Jackson, your new boss. In your letter:

show your enthusiasm for the job offer

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explain the problem suggest what you can do

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Jackson,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Requesting a Letter of Reference

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a semi-formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is a mix of politeness and warmth the use of the last names (Dear Mrs Sweeney) the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions (I would appreciate it if...) the closing salutation (Yours sincerely)

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school.

Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter:

say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

Write at least 150 words.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Mrs Sweeney

How are you? I hope everything is fine at the school and that you have been well. I still remember the dynamic way in which you taught grammar to me and all of the teacher trainees in your English class. Thanks again for those important lessons.

I am writing in connection with a letter of reference that I need for a job that I have applied for recently. As I am due to graduate next month, I have applied for a position as an ESL teacher at a private language school in Tokyo, Japan. You might remember my telling you how very much I looked forward to teaching and traveling around the world. Now I have the chance. I am confident that I can make a difference in the lives of students who need to learn English.

In the letter of reference, I would appreciate it if you could include information related to my trustworthiness, my enthusiasm and my cross-cultural awareness while in teacher training college. As the job is in Japan, they do not have the chance to interview me and will base their

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decision largely on my letters of reference. I would need to have the letter in two weeks, by July 1st.

Thank you kindly in advance,

Yours sincerely,

Grace Smith

Requesting Accommodation

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a semi-formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is a mix of formality plus warmth the use of the last names (Dear Ms Walker) the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions (I would appreciate it if...) the closing salutation (Yours sincerely)

Writing Task 1

You are going on a short training course at a college in Sydney, Australia. You need somewhere to live while you are there.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:

explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Mrs Walker

I am writing in connection with my upcoming training course at your college in Sydney, Australia. I will be there to attend the Brain- Based Learning program at Victoria College for a period of three weeks from July 2st to July 22st, 2010. I am hoping that you will be able to assist me with my accommodation arrangements.

As I am slightly older than most of the other participants, I would appreciate it if you could find a private studio apartment for me, close to the college. It would be ideal if I could walk to school

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each day, but if not, I would need access to public transportation. I understand some of the events on campus finish quite late so I would prefer not to walk in an unfamiliar neighbourhood after dark. In terms of the apartment, all I require is a bed, a desk, a TV, an Internet connection, a kitchen and a bathroom. My budget is around US $1000 for 3 weeks.

As I will be arriving on July 1st, I would need the apartment to be available from that night until the day of my departure, which is July 23rd. My last night in the apartment would be July 22nd.

Please let me know if you are able to find such an apartment and if not, please suggest other suitable arrangements. I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours sincerely,

Jane Goodwin

(236 words)

Complaining to a Landlord

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is a semi-formal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is a mix of formality plus warmth the use of the last names (Dear Mr Shah) the absence of contractions the use of formal expressions (I would appreciate it if...) the closing salutation (Yours sincerely)

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you.

Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:

explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

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Dear Mr Shah

I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing in connection with a problem I have with the new tenant, Jack, who has moved in downstairs. Unfortunately, his habits and needs appear to be quite different from my own.

The issue is that Jack is a professional musician who plays his electric guitar late into the night. I understand he is in a band and needs to practice; however, I think he cannot do so in a residential building such as ours. As I mentioned to you when I signed the lease to the apartment, I am a full-time writer who works from home. For me, it is essential to have silence so I can concentrate on my work. With Jack playing at all hours, I have been unable to get any of my writing done, except when he is out. In some cases, I have even been forced to leave the apartment and work at a nearby coffee shop or library as the guitar playing was causing such a disturbance.

I would appreciate it if you could speak to Jack and ask him to turn down the volume on his guitar or else to use headphones. I have spoken to him about it, but to no avail. I will let you know as soon as the situation improves.

Thank you kindly in advance and please give my best regards to your family,

Yours sincerely,

Meg Snyder

(234 words)

Sample Informal Letters

IELTS Letter Topics - Informal

1. Inviting a friend

You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:

explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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2. Advising a friend about a holiday

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Begin your letter as follows: Dear _______

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Instant IELTS by Guy Brook-Hart)

3. Apologizing to a friend

You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter:

apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him / her say what you will do

Begin your letter as follows: Dear _____________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Action Plan for IELTS by Vanessa Jakeman and Clare McDowell)

4. Thanking a friend for a holiday

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter:

say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him / her invite your friend to visit you

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.(Question taken from Action Plan for IELTS by Vanessa Jakeman and Clare McDowell)

5. Advising a friend about work

An English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Offer to find a place for him / her to live Give advice about how to find a part-time job

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Give information on where he / she can learn your language

Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

6. Forgetting something at a friend's

You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a conference in Australia. You left a briefcase with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:

thank your friend for the stay describe the briefcase ask him/her to return it to you by post

Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

7. Reminding a Friend

A year ago, you lent your favorite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:

ask how he or she is doing remind him / her about the book explain why you need it back

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

8. Congratulating a Friend

Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week. Write to your friend. In your letter:

congratulate your friend tell her when you will be returning home ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby

Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

9. Requesting Help

Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big

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celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. In your letter:

explain why the occasion is special ask for her assistance set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Joan,

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

10. Admitting a Mistake

You attended an old friend's wedding in another city, about 3 hours away, a week ago. It was an outdoor wedding held on a rainy day and you had taken along a rather expensive, elegant umbrella. When you returned, you were tired and went straight to bed. You had a very busy week.This weekend, when it started to rain, you realized you had the wrong umbrella. You must have taken someone else's umbrella, which was very similar to your own, when leaving the wedding reception. Write to your friend who got married. In your letter:

congratulate him / her on the beautiful wedding explain the situation ask how you can return this umbrella and locate your own

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Joan __________

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Thanking & Inviting a Friend

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is an informal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is warm, easy-going and conversational the use of first names (Ajay, Sunita, Carol) the use of contractions (I've, don't, can't) the use of informal expressions ("Thanks", instead of "Thank you") the closing salutation ( "Warm wishes", instead of the more formal "Yours sincerely" or "Yours

faithfully")

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.

Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:

thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________

Dear Ajay and Sunita,

Thanks so much for your kind letter and the lovely photos of my holiday in Mumbai. Sorry for the delay in acknowledging your mail, but your package arrived just as I was about to leave town on a business trip. I've just returned to Toronto today.

Looking at the photos brings back so many happy memories of the times we spent together and the wonderful hospitality you extended to me. I felt completely pampered by both of you! You surrounded me with warm friends, good food, amazing sights, great shopping, unforgettable cultural events and laughter-filled evenings. I would have been lost without you. I can't thank you enough.

These good memories gave me an idea. I know you've always wanted to visit Canada. Why don't you plan a holiday and stay with me this summer? The weather is great at that time of year, all tourist sites are open and I could take two weeks off from work. Aside from seeing Toronto, we could drive to Niagara Falls, Thousand Islands, Montreal, Ottawa and Quebec City. I would be thrilled if you could make it.

Thank you both again for the beautiful holiday and the photos which are already up on my wall. Now, I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Warm wishes,

Carol

(216 words)

Describing a New Job

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is an informal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is warm, friendly and conversational the use of first names (Eva, Brenda) the use of contractions (you've, wasn't) the use of informal expressions ("Sorry, but...", "how about you?") the closing salutation ( "Warm wishes", instead of the more formal "Yours sincerely" or "Yours

faithfully")

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have recently started work in a new company.

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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,

explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him / her your other news

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________,

Dear Eva,

How are you? I hope you've been well. Sorry for having been out of touch for a short while. There have been some changes in my life and I wanted to let you know the latest from my side.

The big news is that I have finally changed my job! Do you remember when you were here on holiday, I always talked about how I hated my boring bank job? Well, it was clear I needed a change. So, finally, I took a part-time TESL course and trained to be an ESL teacher. Now I'm working full-time in a private language school. I teach General English, Business English and IELTS. Each day, I look forward to going to work. My students come from all over the world and I love teaching them as well as learning from them.

Aside from that, I also moved to a new apartment near the school where I work. It's small, but downtown, so I am right in the heart of the city, instead of way out in the suburbs. Suddenly, there's so many fun things to do, in the evenings too. I am a much happier person today because of these recent changes.

So, how about you? I hope you'll have a chance to visit Canada again soon. In the meantime, please write and let me know what's new with you.

Warm wishes

Kim

(226 words)

Advising a Friend

Below is a sample letter for Task 1 of the General IELTS Writing Section. It is an informal letter, which can be identified in several ways:

the tone, which is very warm, personal and friendly the use of first names ( Julie, Irene) the use of contractions (I'm, you're, can't)

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the use of informal expressions (Thanks, Write soon) the closing salutation ( Warm wishes, instead of the more formal "Yours sincerely" or "Yours

faithfully")

Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear __________,

Dear Julie

Thanks so much for your latest letter. I'm really excited to hear that you're planning to visit Toronto. It will give me a chance to take you around, as you did so kindly for me when I was in Amsterdam last year.

Regarding your visit, I would be happy to help in any way possible. First, unless you really like freezing weather, I suggest you come in the summer months of July or August. Though most hotels are expensive at that time, we have some wonderful guest suites available in our high-rise building, for only about $50 per night. They are fully furnished studio apartments, with a kitchen, so you can have the option of eating in. Just let me know your dates and I can make a reservation for you.

Summer is also the time when all the tourist sites are open. We can visit Centre Island, Canada's Wonderland, Niagara Falls, the CN Tower, the Royal Ontario Museum, the Science Centre and Thousand Islands. The weather should be warm and comfortable, around 25 – 30 degrees Celsius, so bring your informal summer clothes, a swinsuit and an umbrella too. We do get summer showers quite often.

I can't wait for you to come! Write soon with more details,

Warm wishes

Irene

(207 words)

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IELTS Sample Letters of Band 7http://www.ielts-blog.com/category/ielts-writing-samples/ielts-letters-band-7/

Cleaning job application

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing this letter in response to the vacancy for to apply for a position of housekeeper as advertised in the “Daily News” on 6th of November 2007.

I have worked for the “Care-givers” home for 5 years and thereafter was transferred to the main branch in Durban. This branch caters for two hundred people. I was appointed the supervisor, with five staff reporting to me. I have gained much experience in planning, organizing and leading in this job. I have worked with all types of people and know how to handle their problems.The reason why I would like to apply for this job because your private home would benefit from my experience. I would be able to give much more attention to the needs of the home due to the size. My credentials speaks for itself which is attached for your perusal please find them enclosed in this letter. I await am looking forward for an interview to further discuss my experience with you.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,M Munsamy

This is a good letter. It has the correct structure and covers the task. The sentences are mostly well structured, although some show use of inappropriate expressions. The vocabulary is fine.There are few grammatical errors, see comments. Overall, looks like Band 6.5 – 7.

Asking for information on scholarships

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing this letter to request more information about scholarship/Finance financial assistance offered by your College.

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I was awaiting in anticipation to enroll next year for the much coveted Diploma in English, but with due to unfortunate circumstance circumstances, I found myself in a financial difficulty.

I would appreciate it if you could steer me in the right path for scholarship information or if the college will be able to gave me could provide me with financial assistance.

My certificate in Secondary education shows above average grades. I have worked in a voluntary position on weekends teaching English to young foreign kids. I do have the means to pay back if a loan is granted by the college. My employer will vouch for my employment and provide you with my earnings, and he could also arrange a monthly deduction from salary to your bank account.

I believe I have what it takes and I trust you would consider me setback, by giving me the opportunity to study further.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,M Munsamy

This is a good letter. It has the right structure, covers the task, shows good command of English, the sentences range in complexity, the grammar and spelling are fine. Some minor corrections were made, see comments. Overall, looks like Band 7.

Explanation of delayed first working day

You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, But you will not be able on that date.

Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solutions.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you that, I won’t be able to start work on November 15, as agreed during my recent interview with you.

The reason that why I can’t start work was because is that my mother has fell fallen from the stairs yesterday. As, I am the only daughter and there are no other relatives that are able to look after my mother, I have no choise choice but to go back to look after her. According to the doctors it will take about two weeks for her to be able to walk and care for herself again.I apologize for all the inconvenience and I truly belived believe that you need me to be at work on that day for the project that is schedule to kick of off three weeks later. I am able to work for home and completed will complete the project as mention agreed. I will also report to you through e-mail and if there is a problem, I will call and inform you along the way.

Once again, I’m very sorry for the inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.

Yours faithfully,S. Chua.

This is a good letter. It covers the task, has a good structure, the paragraphs are coherent. There are several grammatical errors (see comments underlined in blue)

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and a poorly structured sentence that needs improvement (it starts with “I apologize for all the inconvenience”). Overall, looks like a band 6.5 letter ? some improvement to grammar could take it to Band 7.

Item left on the bus

Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it.

Dear Sir/Madam,

The reason I am writing this letter to you is because I have left my bag in your on you company’s bus which I took. It was on Tuesday 5th of August 2008 at around 3:00pm. The bus station that I board where I boarded the bus was at Jalan Pinang (bus no 55) and got down off at Jalan Tujuan.

I have tried to locate the bus and the driver but was unable too. It is a brown bag The bag I lost was brown with some samples of costume jewellery of my company. There are 165 pcs pieces of it in the bag. Its the last set of samples that I have. With out without the samples its impossible for us to show to our customers. We have nothing to show to our customers.

If you have found it could you please call me at 03 5192 6541 or email me at [email protected] and I will arrange to pick it up from your office.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours faithfullyS. Chua

This letter needs some work. It covers the task and has the right structure. However the structure of the sentences needs some attention as well as the accuracy of expressions (see comments underlined in blue for more details). Overall, looks like a Band 6.5 letter.

migrant writes a letter to a friend

You migrated to another country. Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you chose this country.

Dear Linda,

I’m sorry I haven’t been writing to you for such a long time. I am writing to inform you (less formal) writing to let you know that I have migrated to Perth, Australia. My family and I arrived in Perth on the 03/04/08 the third of April 2008 and we have finally settled down.

We migrated to Perth because my sisters and their family have also migrated there three years ago. We have planed to join them in Perth and also for the children’s education and their future as well.

We have just settled in our new house and the kids are enjoying the pool almost everyday. They have been attending a public school and have made quite a lot of friends. The people here are very friendly and helpful. John has also found a job near the city. The working environment here according to John is very different from Malaysia. And as for me, I am a full time housewife, enjoying the morning coffee with the newspaper.

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Do let me know when you plan to visit Perth and you are always welcome to stay at my new house.

With love,Sharon.

This is a good letter. It has the correct structure, the task is covered, the sentences are nicely built and it leaves a good impression because of the fluency of the language. See comments underlined in blue for minor corrections. Overall, looks like a band 7 letter.

Complaint about a rental car

You rented a car from car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.

Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about the air conditioner of my car, which I took on rent rented from your company for two weeks. Unfortunately, it has stopped working.

I rented Mercedes Benz a Mercedes Benz 8 days ago. My customer ,my customer number is 1230. Actually, what happened – what happened is when I was on my way from Jacksonville to Miami, although the atmosphere temperature was cooler, suddenly a sound came from the engine. At first, I thought that the engine belt is was broken and I may might not be able to drive the car further any further. However, when I felt no air coming from the air conditioner ? I realized it has had stopped working.

Naturally, when I got back home ? I immediately contacted your customer care center and registered my complaint. They issued me a complaint number 234343 and said that they will send a technician at to my house within 2 to 3 two to three business days to get it repaired. Almost one week has passed since I called, but still it is not being repaired.I am not at all satisfied with your customer service. In case, you can?t resolve my problem within 2 business days after the receipt of this letter, I want a complete refund of my rent which I paid in advance, that is a total amount of $200.

Yours faithfully,Hasnain Siraj

This is a good letter. It has the right structure, covers the task, paragraphs are connected together by linking words and the sentences are well-structured. The grammar needs some attention, especially the prepositions and the way you use tenses (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, looks like a Band 6.5 – 7 letter.

Complaint about a faulty mobile phone

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You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase it has stopped working. You spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.

Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to inform you about the faulty mobile phone that I have purchased in your store.

I am Christine B. I am a regular customer of your company. On the 10th of March, I bought a brand new Nokia N73 mobile. However, upon one week of using it, problems started to appear. The flash of the camera is no longer working. Also, the monitor is getting blurred which makes it difficult for me to see the SMS messages clearly. I was very surprised to discover such problems in quite an expensive model.

Naturally, I returned the mobile phone in your store to be replaced with a new one. One of your sales staff sales staff members told me that they will send it to me at my home address within one week. However, two weeks have gone without receiving any replacement. I am very upset for with your poor service.

In this regard, I insist on getting a refund of my full payment if the replacement will not come within another week.

Yours faithfully,

Christine B.

This is a very good letter. The structure of paragraphs and sentences, grammar, vocabulary, length ? everything is in order. There are some minor corrections (see comments underlined in blue). Otherwise, looks like a Band 7 letter.

Writing to a pen pal

You have a pen friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.

Dear Amy,

How are you? Long time no letters from you you didn’t write to me in age. I remember in last letter you had mentioned about being interested in current affairs in India,___ so let me give you some local news.(This is should be in second paragraph - first is just an introduction ) Reserve Bank of IndiaReserve Bank of India has increased REPO rate by .50 basis points, which has lead to increase in home loan rate.

Rain in INDIA is too heavy this year same as from compared to the past two years. Two years back Mumbai was flooded with water and all the normal life was halted for 1 – 2 days.

Our President Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, have finished his tenure on 21st twenty first of July this year. Now we have Mrs. Patil as our new and 1st lady President in Indian history. She has political background where as Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam didn’t have.

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After 14 years, people behind the Mumbai bomb blast in 1993 are being punished. Some are being sentence to death and some have to serve a long prison.

Take care. Be in Touch.

This letter is not bad. It has the right structure (apart from the first paragraph, last sentence of which should be in the second paragraph) and covers the task, the vocabulary and the structure of sentences are fine. The logical connection of paragraphs needs some work, because it seems as though you were jumping from issue to issue, instead of linking them smoothly.

Add some more personal touch in the last paragraph, ask how they are doing or what are their news. Don’t forget to sign your name in the end. See comments for detailed corrections. Overall, looks like a Band 6.5 letter.

Asking for information about a seminar

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodations and cost.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to ask for information about the seminar that you are conducting during the next week.

I am an electronics wholesale dealer in Pakistan and I am interested to take part in this work-related seminar. I think that it would be very beneficial for me to see the latest electronics appliances and have an excellent opportunity to make contacts with different companies. Therefore, I need to get some information in details such as; the total period of your seminar and the complete leaflets of different scheduled programs. Beside this, In addition I have a plan to come with my two staff members so what would be the arrangements of and would appreciate information about accommodation and total expenditures, which you have estimated for each person.

You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail address. I would like to receive it as soon as possible because of adequate preparation to be able to prepare adequately before the departure.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,Athar Nafees

This is a good letter. It covers the task, the information is organized well and each paragraph covers all the necessary details. There are some inaccuracies (see suggested changes in the comments underlined in blue). Overall, looks like a Band 7 letter.

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Asking for information about an executive event

You are organizing an executive event for the company you work for.Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of a venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and costs.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to ask for information about organizing an executive event at your venue.

My name is Marcio, I work for a multinational company, and we need prepare an event that will be held on December 17, 2007. I would like to obtain the below following information :

1. How many people can your club support contain?

2. What kind of food to do you serve?

3. Is there any special service for disabled people available for the disable?

4. What time can we start the event?

5. Do you have any “animation service” to offer?

6. How much do you charge for your services ?

7. Do you offer any transportation service ?

8. Is there anything else included on your services ?

(The word service repeats too many times, use synonyms )

I need would like to receive this information until October 2007, because I need to prepare the department in charge of the event and invite the target audience. You can send me this information via fax, using the number +55 (21) 3422-9559, or email me at : [email protected]. I am confident that your company will provide us with the best type of service we need, based on abundance of good reviews about your company.

Yours faithfully,Marcio Marinho

This is a good letter. It covers the task, is correctly structured, and you used an appropriate style and vocabulary. There are some sentences that need a change in structure (see comments underlined in blue) and there are also repetitions of the same word, which should be avoided. Overall, looks like a Band 6.5 ? 7 letter.

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a complaint about a laptop

You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a

major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter

- introduce yourself

- explain the situation

- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with a laptop computer I bought in your store four days ago.

As soon as I turned on the computer, I realized that Windows operating system was not installed in it, although even though the offer said it was included. In addition, I chose a gray laptop and the one I received is was black. Moreover, the default language of the laptop is Japanesse Japanese and I haven’t been able to change it to my native language, which is English. To make matters worse, the memory specifications of this laptop are not the same as the ones that I read in your catalog.

I definitely need this situation to be solved as soon as possible. I made the decision to buy the laptop at your store, because of previous good recommendations some friends of mine gave me about your store. However, after this experience, I feel deceived.

I would like you can to send me the laptop I first chose at your store, including all the specifications were as shown in the offer. If I don’t get a quick response to my request, I hope will request a full refund of the payment I already made.

Thanks in advance for your response.

Yours faithfully,

R.

This is a good letter, all it need is a little more attention as there are certain language inaccuracies (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, looks like a Band 7 letter.

IELTS Sample Letters of Band 8

Explanation for the bossYou successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am My name is Leonardo Gomes and I have recently passed a job interview for the Software Engineer position at the Software Infrastructure group. I was expected to start on November 15, as agreed, and am writing because unfortunately I will not be able to present myself on that date.During the interview I estimated fifteen days as the amount of time needed for me to finish my activities at my current job and start at your company, but due to fact that I got sick for the last whole week and was not able to work, I could not finish my tasks and will need another week to do so. If necessary, I can give you a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to stay at home and under medical care during that week.

I really apologize for the inconvenience and expect it not to affect our relationship. Should I present any other form of proof or talk to someone else at the company, please let me know.

Faithfully yours,Leonardo

Personal, asking for forgotten file

You stayed at your friends? house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

My dearest Philip,

I am sorry I am writing only now. Firstly, I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me while I was in Sydney. Things like that are priceless and all I can give you is my gratitude. I expect you and Ingrid to come to Rio soon, so that I try to somehow propiciate propitiated equaly equally joyful moments as those you propiciated propitiated to me. I am writing also, because of the fact that I forgot a very important document in the room I used in your house.

This document is a signed contract and was the most important reason of my trip to Australia, after the business seminar I attended. You certaintly certainly can wonder how desperate I have been in the last days looking for this document midst my luggage. I could not find it anywhere and am sure I left it in your house.

Please let me know if you find it, and post it for express delivery as soon as possible. I will pay for the expense; just let me know what is your bank, account and branch numbers.

With best whishes,Leonardo

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