In Your Own Words…

PARAPHRASING

By the End, You will Know…

o How to put a passage in your own words without changing the meaning

o The definition of Paraphrasing

o How to find the main idea of the text in order to paraphrase it

What is Paraphrasing???

o PARAPHRASING IS…o A rewriting of text in your

own wordso Used to clarify meaning o Used to shorten a longer

statement but keeps the main ideas

So How Do We Do It?

o Read the passage carefully

o Decide the main ideas of the passage

o Highlight important words or phrases

o Put the main points in your own words

PARAPHRASE ME!

Example 1

Passage from Book• Ancient Egyptians

believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.

Good Example 1

PARAPHRASED

PASSAGE· King Osiris was the

first pharaoh and spread knowledge. Queen Isis ruled Egypt when he was gone.

HIGHLIGHTED PASSAGE

Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place

Poor Example 1

Poor Paraphrasing· King Osiris was an

ancient Egyptian King and the first pharaoh. He was good and wise because he spread knowledge to other parts of the world. His wife Isis ruled Egypt in his place.

Highlighted PassageAncient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.

Change from the original as much as possible!

· Simplify the vocabulary

· Turn a complex sentence into a few simple sentences (vice-versa)

· Don’t just change the words, completely change the structure.

Example 2

Passage from Booko Upon returning home,

Osiris was murdered by his evil brother Set, who cut Osiris’s body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.

Osiris and Set

Good Example 2

Paraphrased Passage

· Osiris’s brother Set killed Osiris by cutting his body into pieces, but Isis was able to put the body back together.

Isis, Osiris’s wife

Highlighted PassageUpon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.

Poor Example 2

Poor Paraphrasing· Osiris was murdered

by his brother, Set who cut him into pieces, and Isis found the body and put him back together with linen bandages.

Highlighted PassageUpon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.

Your Turn

Remember the Ruleso Read the passage

carefully o Find the main ideas o Put the main points in

your own wordso Simplify Vocabo Alter structure of

sentence

Passage from Book· In 1857, a British

expedition led by Richard Burton and John Speke set out to find the great lakes shown on Ptolemy’s map. After reaching Lake Tanganyika, the two men split up because Burton was ill.

Possible Paraphrase

· Richard Burton and John Speke led the British expedition to find the great lakes; however, Burton was forced to leave the journey after falling ill.

Try Another One

Passage from Evan Serpick critiquing Eminem

· “At this year’s Grammys, Eminem thanked a long list of rap pioneers, but he left off one name who probably played a bigger role in his success than any of them: the D.O.C.” (Serpick).

Possible Paraphrase

· Although Eminem thanked many rap artists for his success at the Grammys, he did neglect to mention the D.O.C.

One More…

· Passage from David Browne critiquing England

· “Damn those Brits, for decades, they’ve been seizing our music, inserting ingredients of their own, and sending it back to us in new and sometimes improved versions of what they borrowed” (Browne).

Possible Paraphrase

· For many years now, the British have been stealing and altering our music and returning it to us.

Citing Sources

Remember to put your Research into YOUR own words, but still give credit to the authors you cite!

How to cite within your paper

· Once you have stated an idea that was NOT originally YOURS, you must give credit to the original author.· Includes Quotes, Paraphrases, or

Summaries.

· You do this by simply adding the author’s name and the page number of the information to the end of that sentence in parentheses (Smith 145).

Citing after a Quote

· You absolutely MUST have a citation immediately following a Quote.

· The British have been “seizing our music, inserting ingredients of their own, and sending it back to us” for years (Browne 32).

Citing after a Paraphrase or Summary

· Putting information into YOUR words does not make it YOUR idea. You still must credit to the originator.

· For many years now, the British have been stealing and altering our music and returning it to us (Browne 32).

Better Safe Than Sorry!

· When in doubt, CITE IT!!!!

· It is a form of PLAGARISM to incorrectly cite a scholarly source.· Missing Citation = plagiarism· Incorrect page number = plagiarism· Incorrect author = plagiarism