Name:       Date:      

Peer Edit: Narrative EssayLevel A-Unit 1

Partner’s Name:     

Complete the following information for your partner’s paragraph.

Spelling

1. How many spelling errors did they have? choose a number

2. Do understand what they are trying to say?

Choose one

Grammar

1. Do all of their sentences begin with a capital letter?

Choose one

2. Do all of their sentences end with a period?

Choose one

3. Do you see any sentence fragments (no subject or predicate)?

Choose one

Writing

General

1. Does their essay have an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion?

Choose one

2. Did they use opinion words (In my opinion, I agree, I disagree, etc.)?

Choose one

Introduction

1. Write their topic sentence here:

     

Does the sentence talk about the correct topic?

Choose one

Body

1. Is the first sentence of body paragraph 1 a good main idea?

Choose one

2. Rewrite this sentence in a way that you think sounds better.

     

3. Is the first sentence of body paragraph 2 a good main idea?

Choose one

4. Rewrite the sentence in a way that you think sounds better.

     

Conclusion

1. Does the conclusion talk about the topic again, but in a different way?

Choose one

2. Does the conclusion sound like the story is really finished?

Choose one

Suggestion

Write one suggestion for your partner to improve their essay: