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Resume Review Common Mistakes : Missing personal information No capitalization used Descriptions for work and volunteer not in correct format NOTE : Extracurricular activities will not print descriptions… sorry! Other Suggestions : Title – Employee or Volunteer Ignore hours of service if you’re not sure Avoiding saying “mom” or “grandparents” Keep Honor Roll under education, not award FOLLOW DIRECTIONS!!!

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Resume ReviewResume Review Common Mistakes:

Missing personal information

No capitalization used Descriptions for work

and volunteer not in correct format

NOTE: Extracurricular activities will not print descriptions… sorry!

Common Mistakes: Missing personal

information No capitalization used Descriptions for work

and volunteer not in correct format

NOTE: Extracurricular activities will not print descriptions… sorry!

Other Suggestions: Title – Employee or

Volunteer Ignore hours of service

if you’re not sure Avoiding saying “mom”

or “grandparents” Keep Honor Roll under

education, not award FOLLOW DIRECTIONS!!!

Other Suggestions: Title – Employee or

Volunteer Ignore hours of service

if you’re not sure Avoiding saying “mom”

or “grandparents” Keep Honor Roll under

education, not award FOLLOW DIRECTIONS!!!

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WARM – UP(identifying parts of speech)

1. Please run and get your book out of your locker.

2. I forgot not only my uniform, but also my glove for the game today.

3. First, we will review the material and then we will have the quiz.

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CONTEXT CLUES

CONTEXT CLUESThe secret to mastering

fill-in-the-blank questions!The secret to mastering

fill-in-the-blank questions!

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Context CluesContext Clues A context clue is a clue or hint in the

sentence (that is the content of your text) that helps you decipher a word’s meaning.

Signal words/phrases tell you a context clue is coming!

A context clue is a clue or hint in the sentence (that is the content of your text) that helps you decipher a word’s meaning.

Signal words/phrases tell you a context clue is coming!

Restatement ExampleComparison

ContrastCause/Effect

TYPES

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DEFINITION & RESTATEMENTDefinition or synonyms used in a less precise way. Punctuation may also signal a restatement.

Which isThat isOr

Also known asAlso calledIn other words

Jeanne trained herself to be an ambidextrous basketball player, which

means she can shoot, pass, and dribble with both hands!

Signal Words

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EXAMPLEExamples/Things used related or associated with the word.

LikeIncludingSuch asFor instance

EspeciallyOtherThisThese

The work of an agronomist includes the selective breeding of crop plants and the development of methods to preserve oil.

Signal Words

These includeFor example

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COMPARISONCompare word/situation to a similar one. INFER meaning.

LikeAsIn the same waySimilar to

ResemblingLikewiseAlsoSimilarity

Similar to the way a mother consoles a crying baby, my fears were assuaged

when my teacher gave us an extension on my term paper.Signal Words

IdenticalRelated

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CONTRASTContrast word/situation to an opposite one. INFER meaning

ButAlthoughOn the contraryOn the other hand

UnlikeIn contrast toDifferent

The intrepid child, unlike her more fearful playmates, never doubted her ability to climb to the top.

Signal Words

HoweverDissimilar

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CAUSE & EFFECTA two part sentence – cause or now and action after or effect

BecauseSince - NowConsequentlyTherefore

WhenAs a result“If-then” statements

Since both sides of the people arguing about the labor dispute were intransigent, now a

federal mediator had to be brought in to help reach an agreement.

Signal Words

Can have

2 parts

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PRACTICEHer parents really wanted her to attend the

local university, but Shannon argued her case

so emphatically and with such great passion,

that her parents gave Shannon their consent.  

Definition:

Context Clues:

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PRACTICE - EXIf you go to the party wearing your best smile, laugh

good-naturedly, and try your dance steps out (even

if you aren’t the best dancer), you will attract

attention with your amiable nature.

Definition:

Context Clues:

 

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TODAY:

ASSIGNMENT: You will write five context clue sentences, one of each type for a given word. In your sentence, you must:

Label the type of context clue Box/circle a signal word Underline your context clue

EXAMPLE FOR COMPARISON:This HOOPTY is similar to that beater car your uncle drives!

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HOOPTY (n): an old dilapidated car

RESTATEMENT CONTEXT CLUE:

This is so much better than rolling in your HOOPTY, in other words your old beat-up station wagon.

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EXAMPLE:

Ridin’ in your HOOPTY is like riding in one of those cars on “Pimp My Ride” before they fix them!

HOOPTY (n): an old dilapidated car

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COMPARISON: This HOOPTY is similar to that beater car your uncle drives!

CONTRAST: Your HOOPTY is a piece of junk unlike that hot Aston Martin

over there!

CAUSE & EFFECT Since you got in that accident and let your brother spray paint

the rust spots, now you car looks like a HOOPTY.

HOOPTY (n): an old dilapidated car

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TODAY:

ASSIGNMENT: You will write five context clue sentences, one of each type for a given word. In your sentence, you must:

Label the type of context clue Box/circle a signal word Underline your context clue

EXAMPLE FOR COMPARISON:This HOOPTY is similar to that beater car your uncle drives!

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PRACTICE Review

PRACTICE:

Complete the “Context Clue Practice

Sheet.” You may work with YOUR

partner... no moving seats today.

You must give a definition for the

unknown word AND identify context

clues.

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PRACTICE:

Restatement:

Example:

Comparison:

Contrast:

Cause/Effect:

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WARM-UP: Noun (2), Pronoun (3), Adjective (3), Action verb (1), Linking verb (2), Adverb (2), Preposition (2), Conjunction (1), Article (2)

  

I wish I was old enough to vote because

I am very concerned about the issues

In the presidential election.

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SIGNAL WORDS:Restatement/Definition:

which is/means, in other

words, that is, also known as,

or, also called

Example: like, including, such

as, for instance, especially,

other, this, these, these include,

for example

Comparison: like, as,

in the same, similar to

resembling, just like,

also, likewise, related

Contrast: unlike, but,

although, however,

dissimilar, on the contrary

to, different from , in

contrast to, on the other

hand

Cause/Effect: “if—then,”

“since—now,” when, as a

result, because, therefore,

consequently

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CONTEXT CLUES: Restatement/Defin

itionThat girl has way to much bling, or expensive jewelry, on her wrist!

You need to stop tripping, that is flipping out!

I would not want to roll up at the club wearing that janky outfit, or in other words, that tacky shirt.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Example

My dawgs and I are tight. For instance, we help each other out when we’re feeling down.

Students at school are such biters, especially the ones that don’t do their work.

Giving mad props to peeps involves giving proper respect and praise.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Comparison

Allen Iverson is a sick basketball player similar to Michael Jordan.

I have mad chedda, just like Bill Gates

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CONTEXT CLUES: Contrast

Although she had a sweet voice, her words were cold.

She didn’t want me to call her, but I holla’d at her anyway.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Cause & Effect

If a boy has a girl and flirts with another girl on the D.L., then he would be considered a playa.

She has a big house and hot tub, so hanging out with her was off the hook!

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PRACTICE ReviewShe could not abandon her humanitarian ideals; for example, she agreed to help the war effort by supplying food and other necessities to women and children in enemy countries.

Since the clues in the sentence were so helpful, Stanley was able to ascertain the meaning of the word without a shadow of a doubt.

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PRACTICE

1) Mike’s polite offer was only meant to help; however, his mother irritably took __________ at the gesture.

2) Suzy seemed to think that taking a snooze at her office desk was her ________________ as a veteran employee, but her boss, on the other hand, thought it was an annoying, inappropriate habit.

PROCESS:

1)Look for signal words/phrases

2)Check out the clue

3)Know the part of speech4)Insert a word you DO know

5)Match that to a vocab word.

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SIGNAL WORDS:Restatement/Definition:

which is/means, in other

words, that is, also known as,

or, also called

Example: like, including, such

as, for instance, especially,

other, this, these, these include,

for example

Comparison: like, as,

in the same, similar to

resembling, just like,

also, likewise, related

Contrast: unlike, but,

although, however,

dissimilar, on the contrary

to, different from , in

contrast to, on the other

hand

Cause/Effect: “if—then,”

“since—now,” when, as a

result, because, therefore,

consequently

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REVIEW

#1) Unlike his sister Cattie’s nature, who had a

very calm and mellow disposition, John jumped

on Sofas and ran through the house like an

animal.

Definition:

Context Clues:

Disposition means a person’s inherent temperament or character; nature or mentality.

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REVIEW#2) When John saw his report card, he was

excited because he had all As and an A- in

Biology; but when his fastidious mother saw his

report card, she shook her head in disappointment

Definition:

Context Clues:

Fastidious means very attentive to detail and accuracy; meticulous

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REVIEW#3) When Jana noticed her daughter Kylie starring

at herself and posing in every reflection that they

passed, Jana worried that Kylie was growing a bit

conceited.

Definition:

Context Clues:

Conceited means excessively proud of oneself; egotistical

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REVIEW#4) After weeks of avoiding him, Annie finally

found the courage to tell David that she wasn’t

interested in him; and even though David was

heart broken, he appreciated her candor

Definition:

Context Clues:

Candor means the quality of being open or forward; frankness or truthfulness.

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REVIEW#5) Amy wanted to wear the simple, white dress to the dance, but her friend

Emilia kept pushing her to buy this big, puffy, golden ballroom gown as

ostentatious as it was expensive.

6) The children in the orphanage might have starved had it not been for the

benevolence of the nuns, who sacrificed their own small salaries to provide

food for the children.

 

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REVIEW#7) I just wanted to just set the table and be done with it, but

my mother scrupulously arranged each napkin, dish, and

utensil until they were in perfect alignment.

#8) Stanley tried to determine the meaning of the vocabulary

word, but there were so few clues in the sentence all he could

do was hopelessly conjecture as to what they word might

mean.

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REVIEW#9) Jane could’ve easily offended Bertha when she informed

her that the dress did not fit her well, but Jane used tact and

consideration when choosing her words, so Bertha

understood without being hurt.  

#10) When Jose found out that his little brother Emilio

carelessly broke Jose’s Xbox disc tray, Jose was vexed and

sure let Emilio know it.

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PRACTICE ReviewShe could not abandon her humanitarian ideals, and agreed to help the war effort by supplying food and other necessities to women and children in enemy countries.

In this passage, the word humanitarian means

A) charitable.

B) educated.

C) peaceful.

D) reserved.

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1. Go to www.pacareerzone.org

2. Click on the “Explore” Tab

3. Under “Assess Yourself” click on the “Work Importance Profiler”

4. Complete the self-assessment. Write down your results on handout given to you in class.

WORK IMPORTANCE PROFILER:

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CONTEXT CLUES: Advanced

I certainly appreciate your praise, but I

must say that I can see nothing so

remarkably meritorious in having done

what any decent person would do.

SAT & S.O. Sentences: Pay attention to negative words used with context clues/signal words

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CONTEXT CLUES

Although we tried to express our sympathy, we knew that mere words could do nothing to assuage her grief.

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WORK IMPORTANCE PROFILER:THE QUESTIONS

21 MC questions

21 yes/no questions

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WORK IMPORTANCE PROFILER:RESULTS

Top Work ValuesTop Career Matches*Choose 5 in red!*

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1. Go to www.pacareerzone.org

2. Click on the “Explore” Tab

3. Under “Assess Yourself” click on the “Work Importance Profiler”

4. Complete the self-assessment. Write down your results on handout given to you in class.

WORK IMPORTANCE PROFILER:

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WARM-UP:Section 3: Just when you thought you were Web savvy, one more privacy, security, and functionality issue crops up — spyware. Installed on your computer without your consent, spyware software monitors or controls your computer use. It may be used to send you pop-up ads, redirect your computer to websites, monitor your internet surfing, or record your keystrokes, which, in turn, could lead to identity theft.

 

1) Use context clues to determine the meaning of the word savvy:

A) shrewd and well informed

B) shrewdness and practical knowledge

C) self assurance or a belief in your ability to succeed

D) to understand something, especially what somebody has said

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CONTEXT CLUES:

1. Hints in the text of a sentence alluding to what an unknown word might mean

2.Look for signal words that hint a clue is coming1.Restatement: like, as, or, that is, in other words, and,2.Example: including, such as, for instance3.Comparison: like, similar to, also, in the same way, resembling4.Contrast: unlike, contrary to, opposite, but, different from, although5.Cause/Effect: Since-now, If-then, because

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SLANG CONTEXT CLUES Write the word AND its definition at the top

of your paper.

Write a sentence for each type of context clue ( 5 sentences) for your slang word using the signal words! Somehow identify the word in each sentence AND the signal word/phrase like I did in the sample sentences

QuickTime™ and a decompressor

are needed to see this picture.

EXAMPLE FOR COMPARISON:This HOOPTY is similar to that beater car your uncle drives!

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CONTEXT CLUES: Review

Pick two sentences from your table from different types of context clues and write them on the board.

Identify the slang word and the signal words.

FOR EXAMPLE: Giving mad props to peeps involves giving proper respect and praise.

You need to stop tripping that is flipping out!

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CONTEXT CLUES: Restatement

That girl has way to much bling, or expensive jewelry, on her wrist!

You need to stop tripping, that is flipping out!

I would not want to roll up at the club wearing that janky outfit, or in other words, that tacky shirt.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Example

That car is so ghetto, for instance, the seats and mirrors are missing.Students at school are such biters, especially the ones that don’t do their work.Giving mad props to peeps involves giving proper respect and praise.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Comparison

Although she had a sweet voice, her words were cold.Allen Iverson is a sick basketball player resembling Michael Jordan.My dawgs and I are tight. For instance, we help each other out when we’re feeling down.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Contrast

My crib needs to be cleaned, unlike that sparkling house!

Although she had a sweet voice, her words were cold.

She didn’t want me to call her, but I holla’d at her anyway.

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CONTEXT CLUES: Cause & Effect

If a boy has a girl and flirts with another girl on the D.L., then he would be considered a playa.She has a big house and hot tub, so hanging out with her was off the hook!Since the two kids when to the club looking like giant tools in their tye-dyes and sweats, none of the girls wanted to chill with them.

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CONTEXT CLUES

I certainly appreciate your praise, but I

must say that I can see nothing so

remarkably meritorious in having done

what any decent person would do.

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CONTEXT CLUESThe only way to defeat the party in power is for all the reform groups to form a coalition and back a single slate of candidates.

Although we tried to express our sympathy, we knew that mere words could do nothing to assuage her grief.

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GRAMMAR PRACTICE

When (1)I was young me (2) and my mama had beef

Seventeen years old kicked out (3) on the streets

Though back at the time, I never thought I’d see her face

Ain’t a (4) woman alive that could take my (5) mama’s place

Suspended from school; and scared to go home, I was a fool

(6) With the (7) big boys breaking all the rules

I shed tears with my(8) baby sister

(9) Over the years we were poorer that the other little kids

And even though we had different daddy’s,

the (10) same drama

When things went wrong (11) we blamed mama

I reminisce on the(12) stress I caused, it was hell

Hugging on my mama from a (13) jail (14) cell

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GRAMMAR PRACTICEAnd whoÕd think (15) in elementary?

Heeeey! IÕd see the penitentiary, (16) one day

And running from the police, thatÕs right

Mama catch me, put a whoopinÕ to my backside

And even as a crack (17) fiend, mama

You always was a black (18) queen, mama

I finally understand

For a woman it ainÕt easy trying (19) to raise a man

You always was committed

A poor single mother on welfare, tell me how you did it

ThereÕs no way I can pay (20) you back

But the plan is to show you that I understand

You are appreciated.

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Renowned curator JA CQUES SAUNEI ERE (1) staggered through the vaulted archway

of the museum's Grand Gallery. He LUNGED (2) for the nearest painting he could see, a

Carravagio. Grabbing the gilded frame, the seventy-three-year-old man heaved the

masterpiece toward himself until it tore from the wall and Saunière collapsed backward I N

(3) a heap beneath the canvas.

As HE (4) anticipated, a thundering iron gate fell nearby, barricading the entrance to the

suite. THE (5) parquet floor shook. Far off, an alarm began to ring.

The curator lay a moment, gasping for breath, taking stock. I am still alive. He crawled

out from under the canvas AND (6) scanned the cavernous space for someplace to hide.

A voice spoke, CHI LLI NGLY (7) close. "Do not move."

On his hands and knees, the curator froze, turning his head slowly.

Only fifteen feet away, outside the sealed gate, the MOUNTAI NOUS (8) si lhouette of

his attacker stared through the iron bars. He was broad and tall, with ghost-pale skin and

thinning white hair. His irises were pink with DARK RED (9) pupils. The albino drew a pistol

from his coat and aimed the long silencer through the bars, directly at the curator. "Yo u

should not have run." HIS (10) accent was not easy to place. "Now tell me where it is."

"I told you ALREADY (11)," th e curator stammered, kneeling defenseless on the floor of

the gallery. "I have no idea what you are talking about!"

"You are lying." The man stared at him, perfectly immobile except for the glint in his

GHOSTLY (12) eyes. "Yo u and your brethren possess something that is not yours."

The curator FELT (13) a surge of adrenalin. How COULD (1 4) he possibly know this?

"Tonight the rightful guardians will be restored. Tell me where it is hidden, and you will

live." The man leveled his gun AT (15) the curator's head. "Is it a secret you will die f or?"

Saunière could not breathe.

The man tilted his head and closed one eye, peering down the barrel of his gun.

Saunière held up his hands in defense. "Wait," he said slowly. "I wil l tell you what you

need to know." The curator spoke his next words carefully. The lie he told was one he had

rehearsed many times… each time praying he would never have to use it.

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When the curator HAD (16) finished speaking, his assailant smiled SMUGLY (17).

"Yes. This is exactly what the others told me. "

Saunière recoiled. The others?

"I found them, too," the huge man taunted. "All three of them. They confirmed what you

have just said."

It cannot be! The curator's true identity, along with the identities of his three sénéchaux,

was almost as sacred as the ancient secret they protected.

Saunière now realized his sénéchaux, following STRICT (18) procedure, had told the same lie

before their own deaths. It w as part of the protocol.

The attacker aimed his gun again. "When you are gone, I wil l be the only one who knows

the truth."

The truth. I n an instant, the curator grasped the true horror of the situation. I f I die, the

truth will be lost forever. Instinctively, HE (19 ) tried to scramble for cover.

THE (20) sil encer spat, and the curator felt a searing heat as the bullet lodged in his

stomach. He fell forward…struggling against the pain. Slowly, Saunière rolled over and stared

back through the bars at his attacker.

The man was NOW (21) taking dead aim at Saunière's HEAD (22).

Saunière closed his eyes, his thoughts a swirling tempest of fear and regret.

The click of an empty chamber ECHOED (23) t hrough the corridor.

The curator's eyes flew open.

The man glanced down at h is weapon, looking almost amused. He re ached for a second

clip, BUT (24) then seemed to r econsider, smirking calmly at Saunière's gut. "My wo rk here

is done."

The curator looked down and saw the bullet hole in his white linen shirt. I t was framed

by a small circle of blood a few inches below his breastbone. My stomach. Almost cruelly, the

bullet had missed his heart. As a veteran of La Guerre d'Algérie, the curator HAD (25)

witnessed this HORRI BLY (26) drawn out death before. For fifteen minutes, he would

survive as his stomach acids SEEPED (27) IN TO (28) his chest cavity, slowly poisoning him

from within.

"Pain IS (29) good, monsieur," the man said.

Then he was gone.

Alone now, J acques Saunière turned his gaze again to the iron gate. He was trapped,

and the doors could not be reopened for at least twenty minutes. By the time anyone got to

him, he would BE (30) dead. Even so, the fear that now gripped him was a FEAR (31) far

greater than that of his own death.