Dr. Mandler The Trial of Oedipus Peer Editing Sheet Draft 2European Literature YOUR NAME: ___________________________________

Strong Introduction (Circle Y or N for Yes or No)

1. Clearly identifies the charges. Y N2. Identifies the position of the writer as the defense or prosecution. Y N2. Specifies what action the jury should take. Y N3. The paragraph develops logically, in an interesting way. Y N

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Strong Body Paragraphs (Circle Y or N for Yes or No)

1. Paragraphs discusses moments for the play as pieces of evidence. Y N2. Each paragraph begins with a topic sentence that establishes the focus of the

paragraph. Y N3. Paragraphs point out exactly in what Oedipus is guilty or innocent Y N4. Each paragraph develops logically. Y N5. Tenses are used consistently (follows Sequence of Tenses etc.). Y N6. One paragraph provides a counterargument from the other side and refutes it with

evidence from the trial (i.e. evidence from the play(s). 7. Demonstrates good insight into Oedipus’ character and the plays.

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Evidence/Use of Quotes (Circle Y or N for Yes or No)

1. The writer does not merely state but also illustrates with specific examples. Y N2. After each reference to specific moments in the play, the writer continues to discuss its significance to the statement it aims to support. Y N

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Writer’s Response to Peer Editing

Dr. Mandler The Trial of Oedipus Peer Editing Sheet Draft 2European Literature YOUR NAME: ___________________________________

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(Staple this form in the packet of drafts you will submit with the final draft).