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Page 1: Feedback on first draft

Our group submitted our first draft horror trailer onto our blog & requested feedback from our teacher. This led to us retrieving helpful information on how to improve our trailer technically & alongside gathering more feedback from our audience to widen our chances of making an overall successful production.

Once we had gathered this information from both our teacher’s feedback & our target audience it meant that we research more into previous horror trailers & to see how we could incorporate the feedback within our second draft of our trailer by recognising it within other horror trailers. When we had discussed & planned the shots we were going to add in we developed a check list which we were going to take with us when arriving at our original location on the 29th October. This meant that we were clear on what shots we were going to take & to somewhat act spontaneously with filming more unplanned shots when in the location & in the mind set of our storyline/trailer.

The shots that we filmed were focused on creating more action for our trailer to grip the audience and engage them in & too then be able to make a montage of action at the end of our trailer (with smaller shots) to match the conventions of other horror trailers.

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