First draft audience feedbackSUMMARY
By Josh Davey
Camerawork
The first drafts’ camera work is entirely conventional because:
•Correctly represents characters •Correctly represents the psychological
disorder•Shows necessary scenes
Editing
The editing was entirely conventional because:
• It’s fast paced and dramatic•Adds conventional themes such as tension•Speeds up as the sound does
Sound
The sound was entirely conventional because:
• It adds tension and mystery• It starts of slow and increases in speed• Increases in speed in conjunction to the
editing
Mise-en-scene
The mise-en-scene was conventional because:
•The low key lighting shows the protagonist in danger and builds tension
•Locations are everyday locations which matches the plot
•Transitions in lighting between protagonist and antagonists
Summary
In order to improve I have been given the following list from the feedback:
• -Change locations for the antagonist scenes (as it's obvious it's a classroom)
• -Add in more little details• -Re-film the pill taking scene in a vast
amount of locations• -Show more of the antagonist, create more
fear