ASSIGNMENT 59: DRAFT 1 AUDIENCE

FEEDBACK & TARGETS

What did our audience like?■ Firstly, our audience really liked our setting and general

idea. The believed that the dentist killer was an original and unique idea that could have a lot success.

■ Secondly, they really like the authenticity of all of the products we used. Whether it was the whole surgery in general or any of the tools or fake teeth that we used.

■ Thirdly, they thought that the outfits and costumes were really effective and they reinforced the authenticity and realism of our dentist character.

■ Lastly, We had no complaints about our music choice, or any of our sound or foley effects.

What did our audience dislike?

■ Firstly, our audience disliked the entire camera idea, whereby the dentist records his killings. The audience found it confusing and out of place.

■ Secondly, our audience found our production intro to be to much of an action orientated production company and not a horror based intro.

■ Thirdly, our audience wasn’t sure of whether the sub-genre of horror was slasher or psycho.

■ Lastly, our audience believed that the pace of editing was a little off, and it needed revisiting.

What did our audience recommend?■Firstly, our audience recommended some slow

motion shots of teeth, tools and other scenes which we used within our first draft.

■Secondly, our audience recommended that we try to make the dentist seem more ‘creepy’ and relate it more to a slasher film by adding more scenes of violence.

What will we change for Draft 2?■ Firstly, we will remove the camera idea completely from our film, as

audiences previously were confused by this. ■ Secondly, we will attempt to add more violent scenes with more blood

in order to reinforce our slasher sub-genre and discourage the psycho perception.

■ Thirdly, we will attempt to amend the pace of editing, by taking more time to edit our draft two and using more time effects to change the pace of our film.

■ Furthermore, we will attempt to use more slow motion shots, as our audience believed that would drastically improve our film.

■ Lastly, we will amend our production company intro, so that it is more orientated towards horror, we will aim to finalise this by draft three.