Audience Feedback on first draft of Short Film

• The feedback I received from my audience, has helped me a lot as for my short film to be successful I needed to ensure that my target audience actually enjoyed watching.

• I was told from more than half of my feedback that the music worked well with the storyline, this was very important to me during the editing process as, because there is no dialogue in my short film, the background music would be the only sound within the film therefore I am happy my audience agrees with the choice.

• I have gained some good ideas that could improve my short film, I received suggestions like adding credits at the end of my film to give a more professional feel, and I was also told that the graveyard clips towards the end of the film were too over exposed, therefore I will make these changes in my next draft.

• Finally I received positive feedback of that my film works well to create emotion, such as the music I used and shot types, I was glad to hear this particular comment as this is exactly how I wanted my short film to come across, overall I feel happy with my first draft feedback and will work on using these suggestions and improving my film.