PRODUCTION

PROCESSMagazine front cover

Draft 1 -

The costume is the

same as the

poster, this will be

something I will

change. I will conduct

another photo shoot.

This area looks too

cluttered, I have tried

to incorporate the

triangle in to reinforce

the narrative of the

film, but I do not think

it works effectively. I

will definitely change

this in my second

draft. Cannot read the blue text clearly. I will try out different

colours for the text, possibly white, red or black.

I think the top banner

works well, the

colours of the text

attract attention to

the key words, thus

creating buzz words.

I think the direct eye

sight from the model

is effective, its

haunting this will be

something I will

replicate in my

second draft.

I think I need to

make the font

clearer, so you can

see it from further

away.

I don’t feel the

masthead font

suits the genre of

the film . I will

address this.

Draft 2 -I have kept the direct

eye sight from the

model but changed

the clothing. The

clothing is everyday

which suits the film.I have added an

effect into the

background of the

image. I think this

makes it look more

mysterious and it

fills the page a bit

more, than it being

just plain.

Made the anchorage

stand out more by

removing the triangle

behind. Although I

am not sure the font

is appropriate or

suits the genre.

Peer feedback

"I like the graphic in the

background but maybe

it could be more

effective placed on top

of the image, to relate

to your thriller genre as

it would make it

mysterious. I don't

think the font of the

anchorage 'EYES' is

suitable, it looks a bit

childish”.

I want to add more

content, to make

the page look

busier. This is a

common

convention of film

magazines. I may

add in puff, like in

draft 1.

I want to add in other

images of films, to reflect

existing films magazines.