School Magazine Peer Feedback

Are the fonts readable? Are there a maximum of 3 fonts? Have they used a different font for their masthead and their coverlines?

The font is quite skinny and a bit hard to read. The masthead is really good and clear.

Is there a clear colour scheme? Is there a sense of branding / House style

The font does have a good colour scheme but the black

font is quite hard to see against the busy background. You could give it an outline or a drop shadow

Is the eye flow natural? You could mirror her to make it more natural.

Is the picture believable/well edited? The photo is really good and believable. It fits the theme really well.

Is the picture suitable for the magazine? (Subject, model, mise-en-scene, costume, props, location)

Yes, Everything is good, it fits the theme really well.

Is Spelling Punctuation and Grammar accurate-Are there any typo’s?

The spelling is good.

Are coverlines lined up Kind of, the exam stress one could be moved to line up more with the others

Are all key elements there (Masthead, dateline, main cover line, other coverlines (kickers+explanatory)

Yes apart from the dateline

Is the page on A4 (21cmx29.7cm) Yes