Suggested improvements

Front coverSuggested improvements:

• Feedback suggests that the green colour at the bottom of the page looks “out of place” and the only way it would look right is if there was something else on the page that was green, or if the question marks were another colour, one suited to the colour theme

• People also noticed that the picture as the background to the magazine is too high up and therefore the text at the top is over the picture itself

Improvements:

• I have decided to move the picture down and change the colour of the question marks. My updated version will be uploaded

Contents pageSuggested improvements:

• Some parts empty, some parts full

• Picture at bottom looks out of place

• Make the background to the first box white, so that the text is exposed more

Improvements:

• I have decided to remove the image at the bottom and add a white background to text on left. Make the images that are there more exciting

Double page spreadSuggested Improvements:

•The green text in the top left works well, but the block black colour is too plain and does not look right.

•The text on the right doesn’t look right when its justified.

•The picture is too “square”

Improvements: I will make the picture more exciting, make the text on the right centred, and change the colour of the question mark