Response to feedback on my Front Cover:

This is me changing the masthead back to a solid black colour and making it bigger.

This is the final result of me adding a white box underneath my barcode.I did this so that the prices of my magazine could be clearer.

This me changing the sizes and fonts to my prices to make them stand out further in the white box.

This is me changing the font sizes of the cover lines surrounding the model Phoebe. I had to do this because in my feedback it said that the cover lines should not be overlapping onto Phoebe.

This is me creating captions for the photographs down the right hand side of my contents page. I did this because in my feedback I was told to make the pictures more incorporated into the final contents page because my feedback said that without captions or some writing they looked slightly random within the overall look.

This photo is of me moving my leading text in my contents page to make it look as though it was not overlapping. I did this because in my feedback it said that one of the problems of my magazine was that the text was overlapping.