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91) First of all, I changed the colour of the text around in my Knuckle Puck EP Puff; I did this

because I felt that the word ‘WIN!’ would stand out more being yellow, plus, the ‘SIGNED KNUCKLE PUCK EP’ ties in well with my Skyline text colour.

2) I re-edited the image of my model to make the end result not as transparent at the top of Beth’s head and I made the image larger to fill out the page more.

3) I added ‘Rock Out While You Still Can’ because many magazines use a memorable punch line to make their product be remembered by the public, and I wanted something to fill the page more.

4) I changed my background to a lined piece of paper to make my cover relate more to my main theme (scrapbook) and to make my page look more professional and less busy.

5) In an effort to fill out my page more, I added boxes with text in them, advertising some of the stories that are featured in my issue. I also added my Ray Toro part there which was initially just above the barcode, I did this because I didn’t think it looked right where it was, and you couldn’t see it very well.

6) I added an extra story and image to once again fill out my cover more. 7) I added a Yellow box behind ‘Super Fan’ to make it stand out more and attract readers into

looking at my magazine. I also moved the ‘EXCLUSIVE’ down the page so I could add more content and make it look more interesting.

8) I changed the size and colour of my Sub-Headline to enable the reader to see it more clearly, and to fit more onto the page. I also changed the wording in order to have only two lines of text rather than three.

9) I changed the size of my reverse skyline due to the fact I felt that it looked quite odd; as the text was a lot smaller than the banner and it looked strange.