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Negative Feedback of First Draft

The arrow does not work very well

Rearrange text doesn’t make sense

Add sell price, website and date

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From looking at the feedback I just need to add a few parts and rearrange text I will start by:• Removing the arrow from the model credit and replacing it with a back drop shadow to the text ‘AVA ANSARI’• Rearranging the coverline text to ‘EMINEM’S DISS IN REPLY TO MARIAH’S OBSESSION’• add price, website and date near the barcode.