What would I improve now I have feedback

What have I learnt from

my audience feedback

By Lois Baker

Digipak“possibly another colour being added” – “so it’s got something to stand out”

“I think there could be a little bit more colour”

“the picture of the eye could have been a bit clearer”

= From the feedback I received I’d probably add some colour to my digipak. I’d most likely make the text a brighter colour so it stands out a bit better. However adding colour may detract from the theme. I’d also make the picture of the eye a higher resolution so it would be better quality compared to the rest of the pictures.

Music video

“I feel the music video could have had beginning and an end”

= Next time I would of included more of narrative to my music video, in order for it to be easier to follow and also more interesting to watch.

Music video

“timing of things some scenes could have been second or two shorter”

= Some scenes could have been shorter so it wouldn’t be as boring to watch. The scene of the hand at the end could have been a lot shorter.

Digipak

“possibly another colour”

=Again like the digipak I would include some colour to the advert so it stands out. I would include the same colour on the digipak as the advert – possibly a neutral colour like blue.

“include some brush strokes here”

“empty space underneath the eye”

= If I remake my advert I would of included some more of brush strokes under the eye so there isn’t empty space.