20. editing, adjective clauses, arts fest writing

Writing 1IECP

Summer 2013Nikki Mattson

Would you rather…

∗ Share your home with six 90-year old men and six 90 year old women

∗ OR∗ Share your home with two ostriches?

∗ Computer Lab Editing∗ Adjective Clauses∗ Arts Fest Writing

Agenda

∗ Review Opinion outline with Nikki∗ Edit Art Paragraph∗ Editing Log for Art Paragraph∗ Begin writing Opinion Paragraph

Computer Lab

What do you already know?

Adjective clauses

Pg. 358 chart

Pg. 358 –discussion Qs Listen Pg. 360, ex. 1

Text

Pg. 360 chart

Pg. 361, ex. 3+4 Pg. 361, ex. 5 (check on the document reader).

Practice

Taboo Use adjective clauses to describe the pictures

for the class.

Example: This is a food that is the shape of a triangle. It originally comes from Italy.

Example: This is the person who discovered gravity and wrote about it.

Shrek

David Beckham

MickeyMouse

President Obama

Bomb

Steak

Empire State Building

Airplane

Porsche

Alligator/CrocodileAlligator/Crocodile

HawaiiHawaii

Mars

CokeCoke

PizzaPizza

Eiffel Tower

Great Wall of China

Hollywood

Chocolate Chip CookiesChocolate Chip Cookies

Laptop ComputerLaptop Computer

HW

• Print and post opinion paragraphs

• Complete Arts Fest outlines