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Very plain and not eye catching at all.
Photos don’t look like they’ve been planned at all, they are also very boring and have only natural lighting. They also haven't been edited.
The text doesn’t look as if its been thought about either and it looks very unfinished.
I think that overall the preliminary magazine doesn’t look as if much
thought of effort went into it. Also doesn’t really look like a professional magazine.
Text has been arranged better.
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