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...In my ideal world, there isn’t evil...

... There are true friendships...

... There are people who love each other, independent of sex, color, religion or social class...

... There aren’t inequalities. Also, peace reigns and all the people are friends.

... There are people who care for everyone and care for their friends...

In my ideal world, there is peace regardless of anything.

THE END!

THE ENDAuthor: Felipe Oliveira NascimentoEditorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: Anders_DahlstromPublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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