AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback

Student Name: Yasmin Rice

Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on blog

1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes2. Genre Analysis No3. Target Audience Yes4. Script Yes5. Drafts Yes6. Storyboard Yes7. Shotlist Yes8. Layouts – floor plan Yes9. Locations Yes10.Costumes Yes11.Props Yes12.Actors Yes13.Equipment Yes14.Production schedule Yes

Teachers comments

1. Your analysis of The Lovely Bones, Inception. Ferriss Bueller and The Fugitive are very detailed, well done.

2. Great addition of genre conventions mind map, unfortunately both links to your prezi are not working, we’ll have a look and see what the issue is after Christmas. Prezi now working and embedded, great piece of research displayed well.

3. Great research and visualisation of your target audience.4. A well written script that follows conventions well.5. Great inclusion of draft shot list, good evidence of drafting of ideas to

script.6. Excellently planned storyboards, well done.7. Excellently detailed shot list, well done.8. Good floor plan of your main scenes, well done.9. Locations planned and photographed clearly, well done.10.Costume choices identified well. Good comments on colour meanings.11.Prop choices identified well, good use of images.12.Actor choices well thought through, great use of images.13.Equipment choices identified well. Editing equipment added here.14.A very detailed production schedule. You could add what equipment

(software) you will need to edit your film. Nothing further added.

Overall this is an excellent body of pre-production work Yasmin, well done. This is just into level 4 at the moment. If you make the above additions this will be a strong level 4.You have used your time well to improve work, well done, level 4.

Mark out of 20: 16Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14

Student action plan for improvement

Final mark out of 20:17 Date:16/03/15