BTEC Creative Media Production

Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production

Merit grade task:

On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal letter to clients.

For whatever reason, it is very badly written.

You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.

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Sample Advertising Proposal Letter

To

Ryan Andrews

PRO, Date: March 7th 2013

C A C (Centric Advertisement Company).

Subject: Advertising proposal for the yet-to-release cosmetic product for men “X-men”

Dear Mr Andrews

We would like to present to you are new advertisement proposal related to the yet-to-release cosmetic product “X-men” for men. We have always contributed significantly in world’s cosmetic industry and developed various effective products for women. This is for the first time we are releasing the new range of cosmetic products for men.

One of the strengths of this product that it will not leave sweats marks. That’s right a brand new formula comes before you. It is of course an all man deodorant. It can be used for all kinds of sports activates and it will show no sweat marks. One of the weakness for are product is that we’ve been better know because for our female deodorant we have only started making our male deodorant.

We believe that these products build with high technology and effective ingredients, would satisfy customer’s need. Therefore, we want to regulate the advertisement procedure through various beauty magazines, channels and newspapers for reaching out to our intended customer’s base effectively.

Budget and cost are negotiable on proposal acceptance. We are looking forward to your early intimation regarding the proposal within five days from receiving it.

Yours Faithfully

George Madre

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Ferine Cosmetics Ltd.

Sourced from sampleproposal.org

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