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Think Like an EditorTurn Good Design Blogs, Articles & Books Great
With Robin CatalanoManaging Editor, Digital & Social Media, The Annie Selke Companies
Freelance writer, editor, blogging & social media consultant
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In this seminar, we’ll cover:What professional editors look for in a manuscriptThe best and worst times to self-editHow to identify your strengths and improve on
your weaknessesWhen to stop editingThe tricks of professional editors
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Who is Robin? Copywriter. Journalist. Blogger. Content marketer. Teacher. Eater of cookies. Wearer of several awesome hats.
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Hat 1: Managing Editor of Digital & Social Media for The Annie Selke Companies—Dash & Albert Rug Company, Pine Cone Hill, Fresh American, Annie Selke Luxe—annieselke.com
Hat 2: Freelance writer & editor with more than 20 years’ experience in commercial and educational copywriting; design, arts, and food journalism; book writing; ghostwriting; developmental editing, copyediting, and proofreading—robinwriter.com
Editor of dozens of magazines & more than 350 books. A sampling of clients:
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• Santé magazine• Culture magazine• Berkshire Living magazine• Penguin Group• Random House• Simon & Schuster
• Workman Publishing• The Harvard Common Press• Chelsea Green Publishing• Scholastic• Storey Publishing
…and more
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What are the 8 major characteristics editors look for in a manuscript?1. Distinctive voice 2. Continuity3. Consistency4. Technical accuracy
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8 major characteristics (cont.)
5. Unique angle or story told to a clear demographic
6. Smooth transitions between paragraphs and chapters
7. Authors who are open to criticism and suggestion
8. Marketability—know your competition!
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What editors are not looking for in a manuscript: Sentences that are overly long
or run-on Convoluted or unnecessarily
complex writing
Lots of passive voice
Clichés
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What editors are not looking for: Repetition
Excess “fat”For books, lots of current slang or pop-culture
references
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What editors are not looking for:Overuse of adverbs and adjectives
“The road to hell is paved with adverbs.”
—Stephen King
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What is voice?Though they seem similar, voice and style are two different animals.
Style is a unique way of stringing words together.
Voice is a distinctive sensibility and way of observing the world through your writing.It’s mostly subconscious, and often
comes naturally during the writing process.
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How to develop a unique voice:
• Think about how you speak and what details you include when you tell a story verbally
• Read lots of other writers . . . but don’t try to emulate them
• Let your words flow naturally; try free writing
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1Mandi GublerVintage Revivalsvintagerevivals.com
Voice Study: 3 design bloggers with distinctive voices
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2Michelle RanardHello Lovely Studiohellolovelystudio.com
Voice Study (cont.)
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Voice Study (cont.)
3Anne SageAnne Sageannesage.com
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How to highlight your strengths and improve on your weaknessesWork backward—look for weaknesses first. Some common areas for improvement:
On-the-fly writingInconsistencies in historical info—always fact-
check yourself!Inconsistencies in attributes you assign to
styles/designers
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Common weaknessesaka the pet peeves of professional editorsVerbal and storytelling clichésLack of conflictOptimization overload—for blogs, SEO comes
second!
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Pet peeves of pro editors, part 2:Overuse of adverbs (see Stephen King). Be especially cautious if
you’re relating any dialogue or quotations. For example:
“This living room will never be finished,” she said angrily, an ugly frown marring her otherwise smooth features.
Instead, opt for active speech verbs, or action verbs with speech:“This living room will never be finished!” she sighed. “This living room will never be finished,” she said. Deep lines crossed her forehead, and she turned away from me.
Show, don’t tell!
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Pet peeves of pro editors, part 3:Overdescription—example:
I looked up to the clear sky and the frenzied pulses sent out by my heart pounded so hard at my chest. It felt like a drill were slowly poking a hole across a sheet of delicate plywood. The adrenaline rush sent an electric impulse swirling down my spine, giving me the shivers which you get when you listen to good music. I was breathing in a haphazard manner and the mesmerizing view completely took over my body. Time froze, and only my eyes cooperated in taking a mental picture of this jet-black spot dangling on the great canvas of Nature.
—Name of offender withheld
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How to highlight your strengths:
First determine what you’re good at . . .And do more of it.
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Avoid self-editing:Immediately after you’ve finished writingWhen you’re working on another important deadline
or projectWhen you aren’t able to work alone and quietly, with
no distractions
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The best times for self-editing:When you can give yourself some space from your work.
For shorter projects, like a blog post or magazine article, wait at least 3 days from completed first draft
For longer projects, like a book, wait at least 2 full weeks from completed first draft
A few more tips:It’s okay to jot down notes to use laterPlan to do your revisions around the same time every
day until you’re finished. Never try to finish every last revision in a single day.
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How to correct patterns of repetition:Awareness is more than half the battle.
Print out your post or article, or up to 20 pages of your manuscript
Read it slowlyCircle or highlight repeated words, phrases,
sentence structure, and description or plot points
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Repetition: word & phraseRepetiton that doesn’t work:
The sharp scent of roses filled my nose and mouth as I gasped, and my ears filled with the distant echo of a bell.
I took a few steps so I could see inside the sleeping area, and saw Quinten’s feet at the end of a cot.
Effective repetition that serves to emphasize a point: We must, indeed, all hang together or, most assuredly, we shall all hang separately.
—Benjamin Franklin
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Repetition: sentence structure Repetition that doesn’t work:
With a sigh, she stepped out into the cold, fog-filled air and headed with lead-heavy feet down the path. She could hardly see an arm’s length in front of her, to the wall she knew must be there. With a shiver of fear for what was on the on the other side, she thrust her fingers forward.
Effective repetition of sentence structure:
I write as ritual. I write because I am not employable. I write out of my inconsistencies. I write because then I do not have to speak. I write with the colors of memory. I write as a witness to what I have seen.
–Terry Tempest Williams, Red
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What’s a style sheet?A tool professional editors use to ensure consistency of:Spelling—names, places, businesses/ organizations,
publications, book or movie titles, etc.PunctuationHistorical timelineStyle preferences
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What a style sheet looks like
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Crucible Zero by Devon Monk (Roc, 9/14; 336 pp.; 978-0-451- 46736-2)
Style Sheet
style: • Close punctuation• Serial comma• No commas around an internal and before a terminal too, either,
anyway, etc.• Use –sized• Use More importantly• Half: half smile (noun), half-joking (adj.), half joked (verb)• Follow CMS for general treatment of numbers• Spell out numbers less than 100 in running text, plus most
numbers in dialogue, except four-digit years, room numbers, 9/11, complex times (1:44), route numbers
• Lowercase following a colon for complete sentences• Apostrophe s for names ending in s: Paris’s• Initial cap Your Excellency and Your Eminence• Ital. for words as words, imagined speech or voices inside the
mind, direct thoughts, mantras, sounds, and brief notes• Rom for letters as letters, a “kill him” gesture• Small caps for words on signs, headlines, T-shirts, tattoos, etc.
What a style sheet looks like
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Word List words:ambienceBergere chairchaise longuee-commerce sitefashion-forwardfeng shuiflat-weave rugfaux finish (n.)faux-finish (v.)hoodiekilim
people, business, organization, publication names:CB2Coco + KelleyCorrigan, TimothyDraper, DorothyGreat Lady Decorators, ThePottery BarnRay, Rachael
When should I stop editing?
• You’ve gone over the same sections repeatedly, without satisfactory result
• You’re making changes that no longer improve the work (change for the sake of change)
• You’re finding reasons not to be finishedor
• You’ve addressed everything from your style sheet, repetition check, and notes, and feel really comfortable with your manuscript
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When is my manuscript ready for “prime time”?For books especially: Am I bringing
something new to the topic or genre?
Is my voice distinctive?Do my how-to’s follow a logical
through-line?Have I created a style sheet/word
list, and carried those stylistic elements and spellings throughout?
Have I run spell check?
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“Prime time” readiness, part 2:Have I verified words/places/facts I’m not sure of?Has every one of my flags been addressed to the best
of my ability?For longer-form work, have I workshopped parts with
a mentor or trusted friend who can give me feedback, and have I followed up on this?
Do I have a clear beginning, middle, and end? Is any part of it keeping me up at night, or do I feel fairly well at peace?
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Grammar & style resources:General grammar and some style:
Woe Is I by Patricia T. O’Conner
Eats, Shoots & Leaves by Lynne Truss
Lapsing into a Comma by Bill Walsh
The Deluxe Transitive Vampire by Karen Elizabeth Gordon
For style wonks:
Chicago Manual of Style
Words into Type
Recipes into Type
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Where to find me:robinwriter.com
Appearances:4/16–5/21—Arts Center of the Capital Region (Troy, NY): The Anatomy of the Modern Romance Novel8/17/16—Berkshire Chamber of Commerce (Pittsfield, MA): Blogging for Business
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