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ID# Comments Comments 1975281 I like the selection of the jewelry. I dont see the motercylce fender. Clean up the booth, AC unit, Fan, should be removed. Clearly photoshoped. Get in closer. Put actual pieces in, do not photoshop. Intrigued with the recycling part of this work. The fan (is not a part of the work and should be removed) Booth shot need a lot of work. AC unit and Fan, Photo shopped pictures. Show less of surrounding. 1st and 2nd pictures the black bar at the bottom. Good selection of the jewelry. 1982054 great consistency in jewelry, terrific gradation background, professional images, booth: looks good, far away, hard to see - not sure how to solve this, likes hangng photos, feels strongly that yellow material looks like shower curtains, disturbing, try (something more neutral, like grey, maybe white.) Nice photos of artwork. Backup on booth photo and the layout is condensed. Flow is confining 1976489 I like the art and the description. The booth, I like. I can see both sides, the layout is nice, there is a sign at the top, I would be cautious of having the sign. Maybe skirt the bottom. I don't see any lighting in the booth other than natural light. I (would suggest more light) Where is the lighting. Is this all natural or is the lighting outside the shot. Artwork resembles the artist. Work is whimsical and interesting. Booth seems a little too store looking, would like to see more space around the images. Four images with more space in the back, the right and left panels are interesting because of the difference. Doesn't look merchandisey. Don't have to show everything at once. 1972439 really exciting - never seen anything like it. Tedious but love affair with material. good execution. Really excellent. Consider where you are going to show it. will show at some shows, but look like sore thumb other show. location. would sell well (booth is a little overcrowded) 1st photo is out of scale or framed. Booth shot seems narrow. Angle the shot? Black bars at the top and bottom of photos are distracting. Again, the 1st photo takes away from the other images, but work is sellable. Booth: carpet would help greatly. Overall resents very well.

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1975281

I like the selection of the jewelry. I dont see the motercylce fender. Clean up the booth, AC unit, Fan, should be removed. Clearly photoshoped. Get in closer. Put actual pieces in, do not photoshop. Intrigued with the recycling part of this work. The fan (is not a part of the work and should be removed)

Booth shot need a lot of work. AC unit and Fan, Photo shopped pictures. Show less of surrounding. 1st and 2nd pictures the black bar at the bottom. Good selection of the jewelry.

1982054

great consistency in jewelry, terrific gradation background, professional images, booth: looks good, far away, hard to see - not sure how to solve this, likes hangng photos, feels strongly that yellow material looks like shower curtains, disturbing, try (something more neutral, like grey, maybe white.)

Nice photos of artwork. Backup on booth photo and the layout is condensed. Flow is confining

1976489

I like the art and the description. The booth, I like. I can see both sides, the layout is nice, there is a sign at the top, I would be cautious of having the sign. Maybe skirt the bottom. I don't see any lighting in the booth other than natural light. I (would suggest more light)

Where is the lighting. Is this all natural or is the lighting outside the shot. Artwork resembles the artist. Work is whimsical and interesting. Booth seems a little too store looking, would like to see more space around the images. Four images with more space in the back, the right and left panels are interesting because of the difference. Doesn't look merchandisey. Don't have to show everything at once.

1972439

really exciting - never seen anything like it. Tedious but love affair with material. good execution. Really excellent. Consider where you are going to show it. will show at some shows, but look like sore thumb other show. location. would sell well (booth is a little overcrowded)

1st photo is out of scale or framed. Booth shot seems narrow. Angle the shot? Black bars at the top and bottom of photos are distracting. Again, the 1st photo takes away from the other images, but work is sellable. Booth: carpet would help greatly. Overall resents very well.

1963161

I like the selection of the artwork. Image 2 and 3 are a bit distracting by the bars. The booth is a little whitewashed. It looks like a cluttered shot, get less of the clutter above. Have a few photos of the artwork on the side so the sides arent so white. Needs work on the sides. Make sure when you submit images you know if they are judging form the coimputer or being projected.Bars may or may not show depending on this.

1st photo great, second has the bar at bottom. Booth needs something on the sides, nice layout. Where is the lighting? Clean and well layed out. Images should give a WOW effect.

1960507

Ignorant in some termonology (soda lime lampwork...), enamored with work. what is background cloth in 3 and 4 image, disturbing. 1 and 2 is very clean. work is appealing. like that end of lariat in 4 is different. booth: appealing. wants to go inside, get a little closer to see the individual pieces. Like posters in back but unsure of images. Sometimes makes clutter Shoot tighter.

Photos are nice. Booth, get rid of chair. Glare on the left side. Are you always going to have a corner spot? Have a non corner booth shot. Cleaner photoshop on the back images. Make sure some if not most pieces in booth shot are consistent with presented photos.

1986472

I like the shots, there is a dent in the mannequin on the 3rd shot. 4th shot - pick one piece, do not show more than one piece of an art. The booth is very cluttered. There is a lamp on the left, you don't have to show everything, leaves on the ground, the mirror is distracting. make it elevated, too much work is also distracting.

Picture bleed to the end. Dent in picture 3. Too busy looking, Lamp in picture. leaves on ground, signs on table are distracting. Remove those. Show your best items, don't have everything out.

1987797

side 2 and 3, maybe 4 go well together. slide 1 doesn't belong, lighting off, model distractrating. if the 4 image a purse? looks lovely, but what is it? the model in 3 is much better. Don't need hair and necklace model - focus on mail. booth: neutral, doesn't distract.

Models in pictures, booth angle shot? Shadow from the sun. The lighting is off causing shadows, model is distracting, didn’t need to see her face. Don't use pieces that are not part of the show. Try different angles and time of day. Background on image 1 too distracting.

1963106

I like the selection of the pieces. I like the descriptions, it's always good to do, you can get an idea what the artist is doing. The 4th image does not have the same backdrop. It looks out of place. Maybe get another piece that fits the other images. I like the layout, the setup, but shots need consistency.

Very nice photos, and descriptions. Scale is not obtained. Better projected, judge sees lots of pottery, but does not see it presented like this - she would buy one of these because of the presentation alone. Agrees that image 4 is out of place and the fact that there are two pieces in the image. Would stand the black piece alone trying to incorporate a different body of work is distracting.

1987088

images are great, like how laid out. Maybe have just one book in an image. booth: looks cluttered, busy compared to images. grass at bottom is distracting. chain on left is distracting. books are well done. interesting, not a lot of people do this. A carpet would help. The hanging piece on the left has a chain hanging, very distracting

Booth layout? Can you get behind this first row. What is hanging the shelf to the left? Books are well done, not something you see a lot of but booth shot looks like a country fair. Get some panels instead of curtains. Maybe hard panels might help to clean this up. Cleaning up will show more sophistication. Dont need to show everything.

1988184

When I looked at these at home on the monitor, each is beautiful and well done. When Im looking at the screen, I'm seeing the bars. ON the 1st, I see two gray bars. the next image is on white. the next is on gray bars again. Each image on its own is beautiful. They go well together. Getting a little distracted with backgrounds. Booth is great. Sophisticated pieces, no need to show so many. Four small pieces max. More large, much more gallery like.

1st and 3rd photo lighting? backdrop seems low. Booth is cluttered. Shelving on the right is not spaced correctly. Pedestal and height on other side is much better. Should be a straight on shot. Remove picture & about the artist.

1987092

good representation. booth shot: poll in middle is distracting. remove sign and put in a few more pieces. very clean. corner shot assumes only apply for corner space. get a head on shot. grass is distracting. images flow, very interesting, likes 4

I like 1 and 4. Pole . in the center end display cases cut down Work is beautiful, and well chosen. Consistent pieces. Confusion from photographs in booth, they are not of the photos that are presented.

1989955

Great consistency. 4 different kinds of pieces, but all look like they came from the same artist. Great consistency, with the background. Very likable pieces. The display - it is clean, like the use of photographs, its whimsical like the jewelry. All together very clean, not cluttered, likes use of photographs. Great job of presenting.

Pipe and drape is a little bit of a distraction. Bar on the top in the back. 1st photo missing full piece. Great example of how not to overdo too much artwork.

1987080

looks really good. add another wall piece, not 3 floor pieces. in booth, what's the black one on the wall? (distracting) nicely laid out. why black piece in middle? doesn't match other natural wood pieces. brick wall in 4th image is distracting (maybe because of the screen) nice booth, no distractions.

Nice booth. I would have included another one of the wall pieces in the four photos

1989061

When I looked at the pieces individual, I especially liked the 2 center images, more intriguing and mixed media-ish. The booth shot - looks like a store front. everything bothers me, the rug should be plain, it's distracting. Put your more intriguing pieces up front. Have the others in a drawer. Clean this up to look more like a gallery. Fan? Chair? remove these. Question answered: Centerpieces are much more appealing, than decorated annual sculptures. Two animals are nicely done, but painted, centerpieces are art.

Remove the fan. use cleaner shelves. Better lighting on the booth. Two center pieces are very well done. One thing? Booth shot is confusing, consistency of the display is off. Industrial shelving, black pedestals, rug should be neutral -- this is not consistent. Let your work shine. Question Answered: Wouldn't change your pieces, shows variation. Maybe switch slides 1 and 2. Picture order may make a difference. Booth shot angle:

1987148

great selection in photos, really nice photos. in booth - sees big sculptures, those should be represented in photos too. likes booth shot, to be picky - wrinkle in rug. booth very inviting. good layout. perfect example of booth and images look like a gallery.

I would have included one of the bigger pieces in the photos. wrinkle in the rug. Very nice booth

1964434

Really clean, nice work. I like the description, it helps to tell me whats going on here. the booth slide is good, the jewelry seems far away, but I'm not sure how to fix that. It's clean and looks good. The first slide feels chopped off, it distracts me.

Cut off the first picture. The floor (weed the floor) Straighten the side banners. Cards on left side.

1988965

images fine, but no individual descriptions. Booth - nice, well laid out. likes big piece in back. work is colorful, abstract, lucious. booth: maybe more space around work. Two pieces on each side panel. black panels good, accentuate work. bc work more space around the work.

Really nice booth. just the dirt showing on the left. Work is vibrant and exciting, but walking past, visually overwhelming. Very busy. Love the black panels.

1962437

These are so fun! Really well done and different. I want to touch them. And then the booth slide, cut down on how much work you're showing. Maybe just one large one with a small on each side. Let people really look at them, having so many takes away. These are intrucate!

Hide the lines behind the frames. Frames are lost in the Zapp review. Glares on the frame is distracting. Panel seperators are distracting when going through the artwork. Skirt the bottom as to not have any other distractions.

1961100

Like the images, but vary the art work. There are interesting pieces in the booth shot that are not in the 4 images. Booth: stand distracting, pull shelving up so it is not blocking the art work. Likes consistency of 4 images, but maybe more variety. Booth: black furniture may be less distracting. Move the stand for the shot.

Vary the artwork. Put some of the older stuff in the 4 photos. The wall sections do not hold the artwork flat. The item in the back should be hidden. Grass?

1987677

The first 3 shots are great and consistent. The triptych - they are hard to photograph. It looks isolated and weird. The work is the same, the quality is the same. Perhaps a more professional photograph? The booth shot - limit the amount of trivets, get them off of the floor. Remove the little things. Vocalize what you have dont have to clutter booth to show it all.

Photos look like you took them from a phone. Need to have a professional or more on top of the artwork. Booth needs to be the entire layout. Would love to see how the tryptech would look in a booth.

1991149

Pieces are great, why do angled shots? (not showing dimension). Booth: asphalt with line not good, remove chair, panel walls are wavy, not clean. Panel on right hiding chair is good. Images should be reshot. Professional images would be good. bothersome with the angles.

Not sure why the angle it does not show the dimensional artwork. Booth on asphalt. chair showing. Needs professional shots. Left off white? Put on black? Would capture wood much better. Work is neutral and earthy, doesn't stand out on gray panels.

1978217

I don't understand the shiny stuff that I'm seeing behind the jewelry. The photos need to be on a plain black background. I don't like the rope on the 3rd pendant. My favorite is #1, it looks most professional. The rope is less elegant, I would take 3 out

The back drop of the photos is too textured. It takes away from the artwork. Not booth shot

1961321

There are some interesting pieces (hanging necklaces) in the booth shot that are not in 4 images. the 4 images are very clean, nice, consistent. good descriptions. Booth: polls in back corner are distracting. straighten out right panel. Because the necklaces are on panels, they look like photos.

It looks like there are different necklaces that are not in the 4 photos. Should use some of them. The corners of the booth show the poles. Answer to Question: great pieces, color consistency is great, ok to use more colors.

1981066

I needed the booth slide, because I don't understand what I'm looking at. Image 1,3 and 4 go well together. image 2 does not relate to the others. The booth - it's clean, it feels inconsistent, the black on one side and the white on the other is confusing

Center the 2nd photo. Booth shot is clean BUT, he see through backdrop on the booth (place a panel behind?). A little lacking in the backdrop and sides. Professional photographer to help with shots. Descriptions are good. Answer to question: Yes, stands are fine behind the piece. Make sure you do not name your booth shot your name. File names should have no names.

1990556

Very cool pieces, likes photos, description, selection. Juror can't find pieces in photos in booth - see's hearts and hands in booth. Balcony very distracting in booth shot, straighten up tables. Booth too busy. Work is unique and stands out, clever, but I cannot find the pieces. Make sure at least one of the items in the presented photos is in the shot.

Make sure the art you pick for the photos shows up in the booth shot. Booth shot needs a lot of work. Too much clutter.

1990660

The images are well photographed, look professional. The booth - The work is so far away. I like the photos in the back. The work is consistent and well done. Looks like all necklaces, I'd like to see bracelets or something else. The booth looks stark, may want to add some color, creativity.

Booth side walls look stark. Better description of the work and technique. Add colors or photos? No grass. Two panes seem like a lot of waves, bars should be covered up. No bad, but some distractions from the artwork.

1960648

images look professional, good and varying, but with consistency. Booth: glass cases can be distracting bc you can see behind them. Neck maniquins to back table. Too much clutter. Flooring? Too many black neck displays. remove mirror. slightly zoom in. remove mirror. Loves the work.

Photos on the back wall to show the detail. The booth shot at an angle would capture the artwook behind the glass case.

1987281

If these are etchings, they are pretty amazing! There is no consistency at all, maybe choose images that go together, maybe eliminate the fruit? The jacket is amazing. In the booth: Make one area more lighthearted and another more serious (zipper and jack) Booth: very clean, not too cluttered. See more space (could be personal opinion?).

Better booth shot. No RV in the background. Artwork might be too low to the ground?

1984605

LIkes descriptions, layout, photos. Booth: very well laid out, left side is too cropped, shelving unit on right is clean, maybe too many. Excellent work, different. Likes 1st, not sure what's going on in 4th. Would like to see a single item in image by itself. Lots of texture. Display looks good.

Back up just a little more to get more of the booth on the left. A little distractiion from the metal bars

1987950

The first 3 images read very well. I don't like number 4, why is the wood there? The booth needs to be cleaned up. It is too cluttered, it does not look like a gallery, looks more like a shop. Show less of the work. The quality of the work is good. The booth needs the leaves cleaned up, shows well.

Booth shot with leaves on the floor. better shot with the artwork visible. Take the piece out that's distracting from the art work (#4). Booth shot, take out columns, maybe one or two pieces. Simplify. Have backups ready onsite.

1976552

Good images, good selections, shows variation. Booth: do something different than curtain, can see trees in back (distracting), too much on back shelf (remove every other piece). Rug? Perfect example of consistency without being boring in images. Im not understanding #3, does not have same gradation or backdrop.

Parking lot shot. Back drop of window. All distractors. Booth would benefit with panels, not drapes.

1987243

I think the images are good, consistent and not boring. The booth slide is not bad, I like the photos, I would prefer to see 2 photos on the back wall and one on each side, I do not like the jewelry hanging, it looks cheap. The display panel is nice and clean.

Last two photos seemed washed out. Angle of the shot shows to much of the frame of the tent. Everuthing else is clean and tight, Bring the shot up higher.

1961647

Like images, esp. first three. Reflection in 4th is distracting. Description on 4th is confusing, and remove price. Booth: remove polls in back, and tent weights. Too much jewelry -looks cluttered, remove a quarter. Booth: remove table on right, take photo without top of booth.

I did not understand the description of the 4th photo Hide the weight, straighten the cloth and the side banner

1990641

Jewelry is lost on white background (gradation is better) . Make sure file names do not have your name. Booth: pieces in back are confusing, too busy. Remove a quarter of pieces. Have entire piece in photo, mixed metals is good, "Nana" is too personal and customized.

Name of artist in booth and on file. Backdrop of the photos, and the arrangement. Not sure I would use the Nana necklace. Different metals is good.

1982734

are they all clocks? very different and clever, number 2 is so vastly different, have something similar; a little confusing with backgrounds, don't need two clocks; booth shows all mechanics of booth, would prefer to see panels in booth, too many pieces hanging.

Cropped off the 2nd and 4th photos. Not a whole shot of the booth. Maybe need another table. Can see weights in the back, the grass, superstructure up above - distracts from wiork.

1967081

Good selection of 4 pieces, but do not match those in booth shot. Colorful pieces in 4 images, but not colorful booth shot. Booth: table hiding some artwork. Need booth to represent newest pieces. No table.

None of the photos are in the booth shot. Table somewhat in the way.

1986521

Looks similar with gradient background, only one or two pieces in each shot, too many in number one, one ring close up would be more effective; booth shot has nice floor covering, shot booth further down and come in closer, curved banners in booth distracting. Sides of booth shouldn't show. Wire structure distracting.

Single artwork in each shot. Curved canvas banner on left. Hanging rope for banners? Crop in booth photo to be closer. Sides and top.

1989152

Four images are great, but artwork in booth shot is not consistent. Show more colors in 4 images if that's current like booth. Booth: layed pedastals is nice. Take straight on. Can see behind panel on left. Likes wood panel in back.

Why not have the other items also in the photos? Angle of the booth shot. I can see the back of another wall.

1987126

really interesting, fun work, consistent images, different pieces but style flows through all of these; would like to see some of work in the booth, like the ballerina, close up; looks good, nice clean booth shot. Get panels to go al the way up to the bar

Booth photo is not lit up correctly. Sun on the right. One of the panels does not line up.

1986535

White background is stark. Gradient might be better. Nice close up images. Booth: too backlit "glowing", can't see artwork on bottom shelf (remove shelf). Do not use shear as background - shows too much. Eye is drawn to bracelet. Maybe alternate brass & silver.

Booth shot is back lit too much. Bottom shelf? Could anybody see that? Sheer back drop. 4th photo seems different

1966489

images really show up clearly, good pattern with bowls and flat pieces, not cluttered in booth, nice approach; good shot, good work; on 2 and 4 could see a bit of the framing, booth shot really good, hooks coming down are a little distracting

2 and 4 maybe a little further out so you can see the edge or frame. Booth is near perfect only the hanging hooks.

1969778

Really neat work. Swap 3 out with bigger piece in booth. Booth good, but take straight on. Rug should be neutral so not distracting. 3 doesn't go bc lack of color. maybe another multiple. switch 3 and 1. Booth: a few less of smaller pieces. but not so busy

vary 2-4 photos with one of the bigger pieces. Booth shot is a corner, rug slight distraction.

1987772

Don't understand number 2, is that a t shirt? it looks different, one color image inconsistent with three black and whites; remove name from booth, clean up the booth, can't tell what is laying on the table, not the caliber of SLAF but could work at other shows

remove the tags, chair and the print bin. Straighten the prints on the wall. Use a photographer to take the shots. Don’t use metal clips to hand artwork. Be more creative with this. Don’t put name on the file.

1987095

Completely remove entire head from photo (esp. 4) good that models are not wearing jewelry. Booth: what are panels on right? Pipe and drape looks messy. Image 3 is great. get rid of hair. Booth: panels of cloth look like screen - awkward and confusing.

Photos without faces. What are the panel on the side? material, scarves

1961527

Very appealing work, likes horizontal or vertical but doesn't really go together; booth is simple and effective, distracted by light reflecting on top, overall well done, maybe choose a different four image; one light facing toward camera in booth shot, very clean booth, just a couple of distractions.

The frames are distracting. the ceiling and one light is facing the camera.

1966637

Reflections in 2,3,4 is distracting. 1st photo is great. Booth: poll in center, so take photo straight on, clean up back corner (can see through), mulch is distracting. Ring photo should have 1 ring not 3. Multiple bracelet in photo is exception to the rule due to color contrast

Floor and chairs. Not sure about the reflection of the photos. The corner of the booth, Answer to question: Adhesive because of handling, silver with it and coloration. Brings continutity to all 3 pieces.

1987083

commends this artist, it's really hard to photograph these large pieces and they are done very well, a little distracting glare on the fourth images, nice use of wall and floor space in booth, very clean and nice; shadow a little distracting in second image.

Does not appear to be a booth setting. Unrealistic floor. What about lighting?

1990876

No issues with selection of photos, a good mix. Booth shot is dark, artwork is shadowed. Maybe get professional photographer to take booth shot. Need throw rug. what is case on right? Work is consistent and not boring. Booth: not cluttered, arrange well. Just need professional to work with lights and darks. Neutral rug to get rid of grass. Right side take away from the classic quailty of other gallery like booths.

Angle the shot more so you can see one wall of the art. There is a flap in the back. Table on the right looks out of place.

1965592

Juror a little confused with the work description, very different, last three images go well together, first two very different, and without a booth shot it's not clear; descriptions would really help to explain work.

No booth shot. It would help to tell me what the art looks like. Use 1-4

1961657

First photo is captivating. Fence is distracting from 2 and 3. backdrop is distracting in 4. Swap a shell piece in booth shot for one of the horses. Booth is inviting, good lighting. A professional photographer would capture the quality of the work.

Where is penny the pug. And Lucile? Clamshell pieces? Where are those?

1987224

Reflections are a little distracting, work is photographed well, interchange the colors, pale, black and red, pale, black and red; dark wood pedestals with dark red drapes is too similar, possibly black pedestals would work: take off glass case for photo

Descriptions of art? Remove the glass cover. Are the photo work in the booth?

1978587

Each photo needs its own description. Booth: roof is distracting. Layout good. Square, rectangle, square, rectangle is good. Photos with white "mat" and black frame (like appears in booth) looks good, photos pop, better than just piece on black (when showing black framing, piece looks matted)

NO descriptions. The roof of the booth is distracting. Nice layout.

1988180

Very sophisticated work, almost luminous, booth looks a little cluttered, remove a few of the little pieces, bring booth shot up to the sophistication of the artwork; in the booth, shelving on right is distracting, stick with pedestals, try straight on shot

Vary the choices of the work. The shelving on the right does not work. everything else is staged nicely.

1984925

4th photo should be 1 piece. 2nd - take from more of an angle. Like color reflection. Booth: well laid out, get rid of bottom shelf, change table sticking out on right. Crop out trees. Likes color combo. Maybe plate, vase, plate, plate (separate pieces)

4th has four pieces of artwork? Switch presentation. Table on the left?

1961239

really delicate and lovely, different and unique, as a group, excellent selection; booth is clean, loves the armature in the middle, very upscale booth; grass a little distracting in booth, but great shot; good level of sophistication, not gimmicky, handling metals and jewelry beautiflly.

Corner poles are showing. Really do not see the artwork in much of the booth.

1987108

First impression of work is great, but maybe vary a bit to show work in booth. (1 and 4 great, maybe switch 2,3) Booth is great! booth titled 2017, show what shows newer work, photos or booth? Other juror thinks work and booth is consistent. Only one image needed, not 3. A little less flowers in booth.

Booth is really nice. Is this how it would look in a show? I would have varied the artwork choice in photos

1964298

Images are consistent and different, intrigued that the work is painted and be outdoors, booth is as clean as you can get, looks very gallery-like, raise booth shot to avoid getting the framing of the tent; category could be 2D mixed media or painting, change or consider changing to which is more comfortabe.

The floor looks off with the black in front of the carpet.

1969532captivating presentation. switch so not two faces on ends (switch 2 and 4). Booth: a bit dark, rug to cover grass, very clean, not cluttered

Lighting on the left looks dark in the booth.

1967179

Placement is great with images, gradient background would make them look more professional; corner shot a little distracting, especially with shadows on the back, panels would help, not too cluttered, banner curling on right is distracting; you could crop for cleaner look

Booth needs work. Cinder block, the lighting, curved banners. Houses in background

1987574

Very cool work - curious looking. Booth: clean, good, are pieces curved like 4 images? what are 4 small pieces hanging? Hang smaller wall pieces lower.

The very small hanging pieces? What are they?

1987624

beautiful work, wondering if gradient background would work better, flowers distracting right up front in the booth, should be straight on in booth shot, angle makes the booth look confusing, grass distracting, could glass cases come off for booth shot?

It looks very busy but it is not. Glass cases are distracting in this shot.

1977259

You do not need to put how long it takes to make each door in the statement/description. Too much going on in background. One door per image. Booth: make 10X10 space, don't show too many doors - make to look more like a gallery. Rug is too busy. Looks cluttered.

The photos have too much going on in the background. Booth shot is not possible. What would it look like.

1961852

very professional presentation, each image is varied and different, booth has nice display cases, very clean, good color tone; first image has reflection that is a little distracting, too bad you can't see what's in left display case, possibly slant up a bit more.

Reflective photos? Pull the front flap out of the shot, cannot see what is in the cases on the left. Booth: focal point is clear, perhaps rug over grass.

1982836

Use gradient background (white is blinding when projected). Booth: back panel looks nice, side panels need straigtening. Cover asphalt with neutral rug. Is artist picture on back wall - needs removed. Likes statement - made juror look again at artwork

I did not see any of the photo art in the booth. Remove any artist information in booth. Photo, statement, etc.) In this case, booth images are cleaner.

1987178

A really nice statement, work very contemporary, number one and three a little distracting with lighting and background, very prominent reflection in number 4; very appealing booth shot, loves the layout; redo third shot because work is lost, cohesive work

The booth shot does not seem standard. Glass cases take away a little of the appeal. Reflection in the photos take away from the artwork.

1961125

Four photos are nice. 2 is dark on bottom. Booth is cropped too much at top, can't see how everything is hung. A bit heavy on inventory, esp. back table, angle up back tables more

Booth needs a little tweaking. Shot needs to show more. Straighten canvas in back.

1986304

Cohesive pieces, yet each one is different, great placement of artwork; display case in booth works well, looks clean and nice; scale works well when projected

Booth shot is a little dark. All photos are also on the banners.

1962407

4th looks a little out of character compared to first three, otherwise like selection of artwork. Booth: grass is very distracting in back, cannot see artwork. get rid of chairs, take straight on so can see side walls

Booth shot, backdrop. water bottles chairs, and glare from cases.

1987099

Very interesting, great work, intermingle horizontal and vertical images, booth looks clean, maybe different color on walls to make work pop, artwork is great, its the booth shot to work with, dark panels could work better

Spend more time on the background. Booth walls need help

1990451Use 4 different frames in photos. Booth: bin is hiding image behind, skirt bottom of walls. Clean gallery-like booth shot

Vary the frames used in the photos. You have more in the booth shot. Nice booth shot. Skirt the bottom of the walls

1960563

Images work well together, fourth image loses the bottom, actually first four do...eerie effect but you really want to see whole piece; why is there writing on last one, writing is distracting

Nice selection of art..............then no booth shot

1987562

Switch 1 and 2. Very consistent and interesting. Booth: intermix dark and light images (now separated top and bottom), skirt bottom, cover grass

Flipping or intemixing the location of the artwork. Dark on top and brighter on the bottome. Grass was ok ( they mowed it )

1991154

number one, don't need to see its a panel, that in description, don't need to see at the angle; lighting in images need to be done professionally, image three loses the black square in projection with a black background, definitely a challenge to photograph

105? What? Chair, left side wall. Mix and match?

1987752Like selection of 4 pieces. Booth shot very good, clean. Border on rug ok, a bit distracting. two images on back left are getting lost. Fun stuff.

Nice booth shot. Would like to see the side art a little better.

1961943

Intensity is what is being conveyed! A lot of energy, booth shot looks like a gallery, would love to see piano piece instead of singing guy, two figures and two instruments, juror says glad you are getting help, did a great job improving booth shot

Really nice booth. I like the colors better than the photos with the black cropping. Back panel is slightly crooked, and right panel is dented at the bottom

1961978 Improve description-needs more details. Pieces in selection are great, and order good. 5 is weakest. Need more descriptions. no booth shot

1987144

Very reminiscent of French impressionist painters, very similar continuity yet we are not bored; switch 3 and 4 for better flow of color tones; booth does not do the work justice, panels would help

Artwork is not in the booth. Corners need help. Flooring.

1987493

Put a description in each image. Like selection. Booth: take straight on, no visible weights, name is visible. Show full size of canvas (hard to tell first two were up close)

Dont need to be minamalist on the descriptions. I would take a straight on shot of the booth The curtain takes away from the work.

1990433

Very effective, would be better with two stripes and two circular images, can't see what's on the left side of booth, maybe one row less of those smaller ones; nice layout in booth overall, very nice and clean

Lost a little of the back artwork from the angle. Floor is what? Is it just because you were on a white floor?

1982870

First image seems washed out. Booth shot should be straight on, can see poll on edge. A bit cluttered, remove some artwork. Need to cover floor. There is a image on the left that doesn't fit. It's ok to used mixed media and experiment, as long as it is cohesive to the booth.

Nice booth, but the pole is in the shot. Corner booth? First shot is washed out too much. Booth: take a quarter of the art work out, straight on shot.

1964737

work looks like a new body, exciting and fabulous, looks different from work in booth; might need a little deviation in the body of work so they are a little different from each other; possibly an old booth shot, make notes in comments, take a more current booth shot

Booth is bigger than standard. There are other photos that I would have selected to vary the selection.

1960401

Like 2 and 4. 4 shows frame and gives perspective of what it would look like in booth. Like selection, maybe leave out 1. Other juror says leave out framed piece when you get booth shot, or show like 2nd image. 2 is a favorite.

No Booth. I like 2 and 4 best

1987813

has a watercolor effect to it, very exciting, choices are good, but maybe switch them around, pieces are so big, maybe only two on back wall of booth and three on each side, very powerful, don't want to push people away

Nice selection. Did find similar art in the booth. Not sure but I would rearrange the art in the booth.

1964432

Like selection, but change out one of the horse images. Booth: Trees, chair, wrinkles in rug are distracting. Elephants hang over the edge, so remove images so it fits. Can't see left panel, barely the right. booth need redone.

Booth chair. Straighten the rug. Move closer for the shot to take out the trees. I actually like the greenery next to the back wall.

1989479

Very cohesive and well done, good choice for combination on portraits, animal, and full body, add more of a description on each image, good luck to this artist!

No booth. More description would help.

1960968Change the order...1,3, 5,4 or 2. Put 5 in 3 spot to alternate color and neutral images. Hard to tell...need a lot more info...like booth or frame.

No Booth. I would go 1,3,5,4 or 2

1960863watercolors are terrific! handled this paper's reaction to the watercolors beautifully, separate 3 and 4 because color tones are similar

No Booth. More description. switch 3 for 5.

1987616

I like the work, 2 and 4 could be a bit different - replace one with something like bottom left in booth. Booth looks good. This juror likes image 4, very inviting. Like combination of images.

Banner hanging down in the booth shot. I would have picked a couple of the pieces in the booth

1980915

Variety of pieces, but cohesive; one with animals should lose the red matte to all be handled the same way; the booth, remove chair, grass is distracting, definitely need new booth shot, mixing colors in tablecloth, show more consistency, so much can be distracting. go neutral, remove some artwork.

remove the chair, photo washed out the left side. Remove items off the table on the right. Cannot see the items on the sides. Staged table and flat table dont seem to go together.

1986516

I like selection of 4 images and layout. Booth: see through walls are distracting, paintings hanging at an angle (forward), table should be simplified, get rid of weights.

The weights, The see through panel (Palm trees!!) The card holder on the table. Clean up the extras on the table. I would put a little more of the bigger art on the right panel.

1987462

Number 3 is creative, but doesn't work in this blend of images, but likes to see experimentation, the other triptych works well; booth is clean, could lose a little inventory so there is not so much work; keep exploring! work on left side of booth should visble.

I would choose one with a structure in the work. Try to get the art to lay flat against the wall. The shot should be able to see the work on the left.

1978257

description really helps, selection is good. Booth: are foot prints intentional? Too much artwork on wall. Blurred out background is distracting. Stage your booth shot.

The booth shot needs help. The foot prints? blurring seems quick but not thourough.

1987084

Like the choice of pieces, first one is a little blinding in the light, carpet is really distracting in booth, color is good, but lines are bothersome; a lot of artwork in the booth, fish eye style doesn't really work in booth, take out inventory; remove som eart at the bottom

Regulation size booth? Remove some of the art at the bottom. Skirt bottom. Try to get the top part out of the shot. Remove name from artist statement.

1981079

replace 2 and 3 or 4 with some images in booth shot, Booth: remove artist statements on left, thin out right panel, a bit dark. 4 images are nice abstracts, but see patterns and flower in booth. Work in booth is not consistent with 4 images.

Unroll the backdrop. What is hanging at the top? Gap in the right panel. Vary the artwork chosen for pics.

1991280

Couldn't really see the people, wants to know more about that reference, be careful when you do that in description because jurors started searching for the little people and not looking at entire body of work, booth can lose some inventory, give your work some room to breathe

Better lighting in the shot. Closer to the booth. Wrinkles in the canopy. I think you picked the good photos

1980917art work deserves better booth. These four images are not as consistent as first application. Booth shot needs redone - see other comments.

Chair, Lighting, tables and the mess on the tables, table versus right display. too busy

1962607

Have done a wonderful job painting water, very difficult to paint, color of walls in booth does not enhance the paintings, grey would work better; fourth image seems a little out of place to the first three, other paintings in booth would work better, neutral walls do not enhance work -- grey or black.

Might have used the art on the left. Booth looks clean. Shot hides the right side a little.

1961669

Very nice, great selection. Likes 3. Booth: cropped to close - cut off some images. Lose bin. Crop out lightening and tent structure. Not overbearing. I would not crop the artwork to be square. Not all paintings have to be square. Maybe make some paintings that are not square.

Baclk up on the shot dont cut off any of the artwork. Good selection of work.

1980952

Consistent, all portraits, very stylistic, clean, well done, well presented; table is distracting in booth, take that out when photographing your booth, do straight on shot, not from the corner; juror questioning what else do you have since we can't see the rest of the booth

Corner booth papers on the table. Move the one frame on table. Is there any other work?

1965275I like the pieces, good selection. Booth: The hanging system sticks out - distracting. everything else clean. good job on booth

Nice booth. Hanging system. Carpet could be longer because I have lost sight of the corners.

1960810Well done, very moody, very different, almost look like etchings; very clever to show body of work together, works really well as a unit

Not a booth shot. Are these new photos that are altered to this look?

1973918wonderful work! Booth: shadows, sunlight, hide sales table, bring artwork down lower. take out bin too.

Very clean, but the two tabs or white items at the floor on the left and the right. Take the picture a foot further back.

1989683

Really well done, number two is fantastic, puts you right there, question with third image: lost bottom on projected black background, panels in booth compliment black and white, light onto of booth is distracting

Sun is too bright in the shot. I am losing the artwork in the booth. Glare on the glass of the artwork

1988202Photography is great. No images in the booth match the 4 images, not even a corralation. People should not be in booth shot. Needs to be 10x10.

None of the photos are in the booth. Is this booth way too big? (people need to go)

1963760

Good selection, cohesive with work in booth, take as much care as you do for photography as you do in booth shot, need to see all three walls, placement of art in booth is great, very interesting what you do with camera, wondering if the skills are done in workshop or digitally?

Nice booth, but I would like to see the other wall (left). Photographers should take good photos of their booth. Panels should go to the floor.

1961167

Flows very well. Looks like you took it on location vs. digitally manipulated. Bin in middle may be a distraction, same as visiable rock on right and left bottom of booth. One likes booth in middle, it works there. One doesn't like the visible white matte

The rock walls right and left are distractions. Very nice shot for the booth.

1965997

Like hearing the statement to explain photography, gives the body of work continuity and unity, all images read well, very soft and mysterious, Booth shot looks good, not too much work, looks great, thumbs up! other juror feels there is a bit of a glare on glass

Layout seems simple. Poles are exposed and dont look level. Glare on the glass.

1961983

Question whether this is original art, first two do not match last two, or others in booth. Photos look from all over the place. Booth is a bit off, missing skirting on left, cover grass, two wide angle lens. It's ok to mix landscape and architecture

Did not finish the skirt at the bottom. Descriptions are short

1988203

Good descriptions with locations on each image, other body of work was stronger, still both bodies are not reflected in booth shot, no people in booth, very large booth

Booth does not appear to be the right size. Maybe the kid is throwing off the perception. Do not have people in the shot.

1987327I like the images, but questions whether images were taken by artist. Booth: moons on back wall disappears. Feels a bit commercial, too slick.

Nice booth and good selection of photos. The tile seems short

1987300

Fourth image stands out in this group, not cohesive, use descriptions to support images, images and booth have a "slick" feel, a bit commercial, missing a consistency in the images, focus on one style, not so broad, 2 and 3 are the strongest images, fourth not cohesive

??????? I just saw this

1987434Good description on 4 (where you were). Flip 2 and 3. Booth: take straight on. Would like to see more of what is on the left panel.

Photo of booth should be more centered to see the left side.

1987090

1,2 and 3 really go well together, 4 is a little different, not as well done, lacking that Hopper-esque feeling, not sure what we are seeing in booth, very dark, can't tell how art is being displayed, keep experimenting, create more of a flow in photographs

Not an understandable booth shot.

1987445

2 and 3 look good together, one is different (original?) 4 is cropped differently. Booth: remove chairs, needs to be from straight on and closer. Stick to one theme. Concentrate and see how it works.

Booth weights too far away, I cannot see the inside. Flower pot, booth in the back,

1986602

Image 3 doesn't quite blend with the other three. Loves the crab! Booth shot has a strange presentation, doesn't make any sense, something laying on floor, cropped work on edge, great carpet

Booth shot? Not good for a photographer. Panels look wavey. What is on the ground? I like the carpet.

1979417

Good theme. Each photo should have location of where you took it and how (close up, far away, under water). Booth: cover up grass, dog and house cat do not match "preservation" theme.

I would add a carpet and use one of the cat or dog photos. Impressive shot of the leapord.

1961371

Great, abstract composition, number 2 needs to be positioned better without sliver on top, great thought process to capture these images, cool stuff, jurors love how image 4 looks like a tree, add more description of context, what were you thinking, describe it

No booth

1963394

Love the work. Booth shot gives impresision of black and white as well. Booth: cut off pieces in back - simplify. Also, wondering what are pieces on side panel you cannot see. Skirt the bottom. Work consistent, makes me want to be there. Booth: a very consistent booth. very professional, some noticeable distractions.

CArpet too long. Banner in front noticeable. Skirt needs to be straight. Few less pieces.

1987098

Love triptychs, very contemporary, kind of small to view, both bodies of work are very clever, this body will appeal to the viewer's sense of humor, suggested horizontal, vertical, horizontal, vertical in flow, would definitely view better on monitor, not on projection screen.

Same ??????