雅思写作：如何让你的文章高大上

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雅思写作：如何让你的文章高大上

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小马公开课 400-663-1986


雅思写作分类 :Academic & GeneralTask 2 一致Argumentation or Report 250 words /40min Task 1 不同A ： Description of charts } 150 words /20minG: A letter怎么算分？小作文 40%大作文 60%


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Task 1 ：Describing trends (line graphs)Describing data (column charts)Describing proportion (pie charts + table + multiple

diagrams)Process & location & illustration

Tips:改写题目 & 替换词注意时态数字的含义以及单位筛选信息（高低值 & 特色值）


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Task 2:一 . 任务完成（ Task response ） 1. 内容是否切题2. 立场是否鲜明并得到有效阐释唱唱反调也挺好E.g.: Smoking: advantages outweigh disadvantages?3. 结构是否有逻辑性 4. 字数是否 250 以上

跑题 --- 5 分以下

不够250--- 基本达不到6 分

6 分— 280 字左右 6.5 以上– 320 字左右


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二 . 连贯与衔接（ Coherence & cohesion ）

文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。

1. 段落之间的“启”、“承”、“转”、“合”可通过表顺序的过渡词完成

开始： firstly, initially, to begin with, currently, at present

承接： besides, in addition, moreover, meanwhile

转折： however, whereas, while, on the other hand

表示结论： in conclusion, to sum up, overall


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2. 句子之间的逻辑关系也要通过一些逻辑连词来完成

表示原因： because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, since, consequently…

表达观点： in my opinion, personally, from my viewpoint …

举例说明： for example, for instance, such as…

表示让步： although, despite , regardless of…

（ in spite of / despite + n./n. 从句）


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3. 考官们常用的逻辑：依靠内容和句子间内在的联系

自然连接，地道流畅

Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.

那些觉得体育明星拿高薪是公平的人认为真正的体育人才非常少，高薪是对于他们技能及献身精神的一种认可。竞争一直在持续，每次运动员都要在相对短暂的生涯中接受考验。来自媒体的压力很大，因为频繁地曝光，这些名人几乎没有隐私。（剑 6 ）


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三 . 词汇资源（ Lexical resource ）1. 用词准确，具体辨析：老师提出一个问题question交通阻塞是个问题 problem日本核泄漏是个问题 event能否治理好核污染对日本政府是个问题 challenge引起国际上讨论的问题 issue


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2. 近义词的多种表达传说中的替换词

人：

people, person, individual, citizen, resident, the human race specialist, scientist, professor advocate, opponentchildren, student, teenager, adolescent, youngster, the youth, adult, senior


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3. 词性转换 &抽象名词

People in large cities rely heavily on their cars. Such increasing reliance leads to a series of problems associated with the environment and traffic congestion.

The availability of a decent job and a satisfying salary is frequently subject to the academic achievement that one has accomplished.


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四 . 语法多样性与准确性（ Grammatical range and accuracy ）1. 定语从句 E.g.: Bad books, which contain much description about

violence and porn, are detrimental to children.

2. 同位语从句 E.g.: It is an undeniable fact that environmental pollution

becomes increasingly serious.

3. 强调句 It is + 被强调的内容 + that E.g.: It is cars and factories that release a great deal of

gases, polluting the environment.


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4. 主语从句 E.g.: What has caught our attention is /It is noticeable that the

environment in both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating.

5.被动语态 E.g.: Every measure should be taken to protect the

environment.

6. 插入语一种独立成分 , 与句子的其它成分一般没有语法上的关系。 E.g.: Computer, an indispensable part in our life, has brought

us great conveniences. E.g.: Computers, however, caused some detrimental influences

on youngsters.


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TO 写作屌丝：怎么把你变成高富帅 /白富美：

1. Most useful vocabulary(nouns, verbs & adjectives)

2. Grammar ( Common grammatical mistakes)

3. Sentence structure (translation practice)

4. sufficient supporting details (Brainstorm )


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--- topic sentence

--- Supporting details

--- concluding sentence


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雅思写作： 如何让你的文章高大上

雅思写作：如何让你的文章高大上