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Write a diary entry about your day at home. Write at least 12 sentences. Use words such as besides, also, in addition..

Think of aspects like.. What was your last week at home like? What was different from a week at school? What did you do? What did you want to do but couldn’t do? Why or why not? Did or didn’t you miss school or your friends? Are you afraid of something? Are you looking forward to something? (...)

o My last week was cool/interesting/boring/different/nice/exciting/sad/weird … o It was different that I … o My English/German/Maths homework was … o I went / didn’t go to … o I miss / don’t miss school / my friends at school because … o I texted / phoned my friends …

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LET‘S MAKE THE STORY MORE INTERESTING!

Chuck crashed on a deserted island. Chuck was the only person who survived thecrash. He lived for more than 2 years on the island. The first days on the island werevery hard. Chuck did many things. He wrote „HELP“ in the sand on the beach. Hehoped that someone would find him. He learned how to make fire and roasted somemeat. He heard a strange noise. It sounded like a helicopter. He ran to the beach. Helooked for the helicopter. He looked in the sky he saw the helicopter. It landed on thebeach. Three men jumped out of it. Chuck was so happy that someone came to rescuehim. Finally, the helicopter crew brought Chuck back home. His family was very happyto see Chuck alive. Today, Chuck teaches people how to survive on a deserted island.

You can improve this story. Rewrite the text with your ideas.

1. Find a title: ___________________________________________________________

2. Chuck crashed on a deserted island. (Add a sentence starter)

3. Chuck was the only person who survived the crash. He lived for more than 2 years on the island. (Connect the sentences with a sentence connector)

4. The first days on the island were very hard. Chuck did many things.(Give some detail. Whatdid he do?)

5. He learned how to make fire and roasted some meat. (Add some adjectives)

6. He heard a strange noise. (Add a sentence starter)

7. It sounded like a helicopter. He ran to the beach. He looked for the helicopter. He looked in the sky he saw the helicopter. It landed on the beach. (Make 2 sentences out of the 5 sentences)

8. Three men jumped out of it. (describe the men. What did they look like?)

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