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Magazine Title: Touched

Minimal Level

1

10 23 marks

Basic Level 2

2435 marks

ro!cienc"

Level 3

3#4$ marks

%&cellence

Level 4

4'#0 marks

framing a shot,including and

excluding

elements as

appropriate

Some photos,like the

closer photo

seem to be

framed

reasonably

well. No

irrelevant

backgrounds.

using a variety of

shot distances as

appropriate

There are alot of

dierent

shots used.

Not all

perfect

however a

variety of

shot ideas

have been

presented.

shooting material

appropriate to the

task set

Shooting

material is

not very

appropriate

as the photos

look like they

should be in

a home or

cooking

magazine.

selecting miseen

sc!ne including

colour, "gure,

lighting, ob#ects

and setting

The

background

in the photos

are not

related or

linked to

music.

The lightly is

fairly good

and eective,

with the

clothing and

text colour

matching to

create a

consistent

colour

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scheme.

manipulating

photographs as

appropriate to the

context for

presentation,including cropping

and resizing

0hotography

has been

cropped well,

showing #ustthe models in

the photos.

They have

also been re

sized

eectively

with no

stretching.

accurately using

language andregister

+anguage

isn1t really

music

related, the

&0S article is

more linked

to gossip and

the persons

likes and

dislikes

rather than

music.

appropriately

integrating

illustration and

text

$ost text on

the cover has

been

eectively

placed

however it

isn1t very

uniform and

appears to beall over the

place.

showing

understanding of

conventions of

layout and page

design

2ontents is

fairly well laid

out. 3ery

uniform and

neat.

4owever the

numbers in

the bottombox are

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curving round

which doesn1t

look good.

The rest of

the mag is

laid out "ne,basic

understandin

g.

showing

awareness of the

need for variety in

fonts and text size

Not much

awareness

shown, most

text is big

and then

smallshowing that

none of the

text is more

important. (ll

a bit messy.

using '2T

appropriately for

the task set

5asic '2T

knowledge

used. 0hotos

resized well,

cropping isgood and a

variety of

fonts used.

(ummar" )omment: *verall an average magazine+ The genre is slightl"

con,using as it looks more like a home magazine rather than a music

one+ (ome -hotos have .een cro--ed and edited /ell /hilst others are

slightl" suashed or stretched like the ones on the (+ ed has .een a

consistent colour scheme throughout /hich is good+ ot a .ad attem-t

at all+

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