Breaking Dawn Sequel! Part three :)

8/9/2019 Breaking Dawn Sequel! Part three :)

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Chapter Sixteen Ten The third part to my Breaking

Dawn sequel. Please read and enjoy!

And please comment! xoxoxo

Jacob POV:

I was on one knee, with my moms old ring in my hand, and the most amazing person on the planet

was looking down at me.

I couldnt tell what Nessie was thinking, she looked confused and shocked, but she had one arm

slightly extended towards me.

I brought my hand out in front of me and opened up my hand to show Nessie the ring.

It was my moms old wedding ring, silver with four diamonds embedded in the top.

She looked at the ring and her eyes widened slightly.

Renesmee... I started, but she cut me off.

You`re serious? Jake, im like seven years old.

I reached for her hands and pulled her down so we were both on our knees.Yes im serious. But I know that youre only young, so... I held the ring in my fingers and held it in

front of her Im only proposing. Asking you to marry me, in ten years. When youre seventeen, the

same age as me. Renesmee Carlie Cullen, in ten years, will you marry me?

I picked up her left hand and kissed it, waiting painfully for her answer.

Yes.

I smiled and slid the ring into place on her finger.

I didnt see that one coming, you are so confusing she laughed.

Im confusing? Ness, I spend most of my time trying to figure you out, youre so...

But I couldnt finish, her cool lips were suddenly pressed against mine.

I laid back onto the floor and kissed her back, her body was on top of mine and I knew we were close

to interruption.

I pulled us up off the floor; she looked confused Your parents was all I needed to say.

I pulled her to her bed and we sat down, she curled up against my chest and whispered This ring,

its beautiful, where did you get it from?.

It was my moms wedding ring

And youre okay...with me wearing it?

I kissed her nose Youre silly, just like my mom was. She would take her ring off all the time, scared

to ruin it. And thats why I gave you this ring, it reminds me of you.

The diamonds sparkle in the sunlight...like you. I gently stroked her arm. Its beautiful, its gentle,

its soft I trailed my hand from her arm, across her ribs and up to her cheek.You`re turning all soft Jacob Black, I hope im not doing this to you she giggled.

Nope, im still big and tough. Want me to prove it?

Im sure exploding into a wolf proves your point pretty well. So ten years then, huh?.

Ten years I kissed her softly for a moment then pulled her blanket over her.

Ive got to go to La Push I whispered.

What? Right now? she whispered back.

Yeh, need to check up on Sams pack. Like a meeting. Il be back in the morning.


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Kay. Love you.

Love you more.

She laughed softly then rolled onto her side, closing her eyes and cuddling up into the blanket.

I kissed her cheek then quickly looked down at the ring on her third finger.

I smiled and turned for the window.

Chapter Seventeen - Evolution

Edward POV:

Stupid sister Bella whispered.

I walked into our closet to find Bella rummaging through the drawers.

Why does Alice only buy clothes that I will never wear? Its so frustrating she ranted.

I chuckled at her kitten anger and the next thing I knew she was in my arms, her lips against my

cheek.

If I didnt love her so much, I would kill her she laughed.

I took her hand and towed her to the end of our closet. Here, jeans and a blue shirt I kissed her

quickly then reminded her Its Nessies first day at school today

I turned to look at her and she was gone.

Renesmee POV:

I was just waking up slowly and still groggy when Bella burst through my door.

Ness, wake up, first day of school she beamed.

Youre turning into Alice, Mom

Dont say that, never ever say that she laughed.

I stretched and walked to my bathroom. I showered, dressed and was ready for school in

less than 20 minutes.

I walked into the kitchen to see Edward talking to Bella So, whos taking me in? I asked.

I am Edward smiled. He walked forward and kissed my forehead. He took my hand and led

me towards his Volvo, but I let go and ran forward to hug Bella.

Bye Mom.

Bye Nessie, have fun

All of a sudden, I couldnt see. I could feel warm hands covering my eyes and I giggled

Jake?

How dyo guess? he laughed, picked me up and swung me around in a circle.

He put me down and kissed my cheek Have a good day Ness.

Okay, lets go I jumped up and down a little where I stood. Edward laughed and led me out

the door and into his car.


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Im nervous I laughed.

Youll be fine. Just be yourself, and try not to know too much, youre not supposed to be

fully tutored already Edward said.

Okay. Thanks Dad, Il see you later I leant across the car seat and kissed his cheek, thenhopped out of the car and into Forks High School.

It was third period, half way through Biology.

The teacher was talking about the process of Evolution which I already knew as I stared

out of the window and watched the rain trickle down the window.

The seat next to me moved and as I looked I saw a girl smile at me.

She was my age, with long wavy brown hair and a cute round shaped face. Her eyes were icy

blue and she had a few freckles dotted across her cheek, just like me.

Hey, im Mary she smiled.

Renesmee I smiled back.

Miss Cullen, would you care to tell me who created the Evolution theory the teacher

asked he had caught me talking.

Charles Darwin

Correct. But please pay attention to the lesson.

It was hard to pay attention when you already knew the answers.

After sixth period, me and Mary walked to the car park.

So where dyo live? she asked me.

Just outside of Forks, its kind of hard to explain where!.

Cool. It takes me ages to get home, I live in Port Angeles.

Why dont you go to the school there?

I prefer this one, its smaller. Im not a fan of big schools, too many people . So I guess you

already know about Evolution then? she asked me.

Yeh. Uh, my Dad taught me some stuff when I was little. Speaking of him, I have to go, hes

here to take me home.

Oh, okay. Well Il see you tomorrow then she smiled and gave me a quick hug. I liked Mary,

she seemed nice.

I got into the Volvo and turned to Edward Hi Dad.Hey Ness. Did you have a good day?

Yes! I love it. Gym was really good, but you know me - I love sport, and Math and History

were good too. Biology was a bit boring, but only because I already knew about E volution.

And I met this girl Mary, she seems really nice. Thank you so much for letting me come to

school.

He laughed Youre very welcome. Now go tell everyone about your first day, their dying to


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know.

We were home already, and I hopped out of the car and into the house.

I leapt through the trees and across the river.

I was so glad I was old enough to hunt on my own, I felt more free.

I leapt down from a tree and landed gracefully onto the balls of my feet.

Then suddenly I felt and hand on my shoulder. I didnt know who it was so I grabbed their

arm and pushed down to the floor. But this person was quicker than me, they grabbed me

around my waist and pulled me backwards, until we were close to the rivers edge.

I pushed back against the body behind me, hoping to send that person into the river, but I

was suddenly blind. Hands were across my eyes. Hot hands.

I laughed Jake, you scared me, I didnt know it was you.

I guess my awesome fighting skills had you fooled.

Awesome skills? Please! I joked.

He picked me up and then tried to push me into the river, but I caught his leg and pulled him

down to the floor.

I laughed as I looked down at him bu t he reached up and took my hand, pulling me down

next to him.

He got up quicker than my human eyes could see and put me over his shoulder.

Jake, dont even think about throwing me in the river. I will actually kill you!

He was so fast, I didnt know how he could move himself and me so quickly.

I was suddenly on the ground, with his strong arms either side of my head. I could feel the

water from the river soaking the ends of my hair.

Give in? he asked.Fine!

Hey you two, stop acting like five year olds Emmett called out.

Jake pulled me to my feet.

Excuse us for having a bit of fun I teased.

What you doing out here anyway? Jake asked him.

Alice said she saw something weird happen to you, Ness. They want you to go back to the

house he shrugged.

I looked up at Jacob, confused. He just shrugged his shoulders and we ran back to the house.

Chapter Eighteen - Strength

Me, Jacob and Emmett walked through the front door. Everyone was in the living room -

surrounding Alice who was curled up on the floo r, concentrating hard on the future.

Whats going on? I asked.

Come here Sweetie Esme said as she opened her arms for me. I sat down next to her and

she wrapped her arms around me, hugging me tightly to her cold body.


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It was silent for a moment Seriously people, whats happening? I repeated.

Rosalie shifted uncomfortably in her seat and Esme hugged me tighter.

Alice said she saw you...she saw you trying to kill another human Jasper whispered.

What!? Thats crazy, I would never do that. Blood doesn t even bother me, at all, why

would you say that? I shouted loudly and got to my feet.I felt Jacobs hand on my shoulder Calm down he whispered softly in my ear.

But...I mean...youre...how can you say that? Alice, what did you see?

I saw you, in a hunting position and the next think you were killing a girl, a teenager

I would never ever do that

Renesmee, we dont know exactly what youre capable of, weve never tested your

strength or your hunting skills. And even though you no longer age, youre still human, and

your body and emotions will change, so... I didnt let Carlisle finish.

You think Il do it, dont you? You all think il kill this girl I looked at the faces of my family,

all faces of confusion and disappointment. They all thought I wa s a monster.

Dont you trust me? my voice was breaking, my eyes started to well up with tears.

Before I could hear an answer, I ran out the house.

I was lying across my bed, face down.

I had been in that position for over an hour, no one came to check o n me.

I felt my door creak open Go away I couldnt see who it was, but I picked up a pillow and

threw it towards the door.

Then I felt hot hands pulling me upright. Jacob pulled me onto his lap and wrapped his arms

around me. I started crying against his chest.

Sshh, baby, its okay.

No, its not okay. Everyone hates me.

They do not hate you, I certainly dont hate you. I know you, I know you would never hurt

anyone

Where is everyone? I asked him.

Alice and Jasper have gone out to hunt, and everyone else has gone to Charlies, theyll be

back tomorrow morning.

They left without telling me? Nice

Dont worry, im here

Yes, Jacob was here. With me.

I twisted in his arms and pressed my lips against his.He moved and I was suddenly led down on my bed, his warm body hovering over mine.

I moved my arms around his neck and pulled him down to kiss me again.

This kiss was more passionate than our previous kisses, maybe because this time we were

alone.

I wont hurt anyone I whispered as his lips brushed against my cheek.

I know you wont. But Carlisle said that maybe we should test out your strength, it


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wouldnt hurt to try...

Im not strong. Ive got human strength, maybe a teensy bit stronger. The only Vamp part

about me is my speed

Maybe. Well just have to see he said as he suddenly yanked me o ff the bed and pinned

me against the wall. His strong arms either side of my head.

He leaned in for a kiss but I ducked under his arm and sat back on the bed; teasing.

Hey! he complained.

He walked over to me but I raced out of the window and into the woods, climbed up a tree

and waited.

You know thats not fair. Im not so good at the tree climbing he laughed as he looked up

at me. I was sat on a branch, ten feet into the air.

I hopped down and took his ha nd, weaving my fingers through his. He smiled again.

Youre so happy, happier than I think Ive ever seen you I stated .

Its cos im with you he leaned down and kissed my hair.

Chapter Nineteen Storm

Right, so what do I have to do? I asked.

We were stood in our huge back garden. All of my family with Jake, Seth and Leah.

Carlisle wanted to test my Vampire abilities. It wouldnt work.

We will start off easy. Emmett? Carlisle called.

Emmett? They had to be kidding me. I took a step back.

Dont worry baby niece, I wont hurt you Emmett laughed.

Carlisle said Punch him

What?! I shrieked. Jacob laughed.

Yes, im being serious. You say your strength is only human, and if it is, Emmett wont be

able to feel your punch, so...

I am not going to punch my Uncle. Full stop

Cmon Ness, give me your best shot

No way

Fine. Maybe il just have to piss you off

Good luck I was starting to get annoyed anyway

Remember when you were four, you lost your favourite teddy bear? I accidently sat o n it

and squished its head

I loved that teddy bear! I brought my left arm back and threw it forward into Emmetts face

as hard as I could.

OW! It broke my hand. I shook my fingers and it healed in a second.

Okay, officially nota strong vampire.

I just think your lacking motivation, an adrenaline rush. You need something to kick start

your strength Edward said.

Why do I have to do this? Cant I just go inside? I have homework you know


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I suddenly had an idea. I walked over to Edward and placed my hands on his cheek. I closed

my eyes and looked for his worst memory. I needed something to motivate me. Apparently.

Ness, what are you...

Suddenly, an image of Jacob kissing my mom flashed through my head. I was so shocked

that I jumped backwards and fell over, landing on the cold wet ground. I was a vampire, Ihad never fallen over in my life.

Ness, its not what you think Edward said.

Everyone else looked confused; they didnt know what I had just seen.

How could he? He kissed my Mom? So that meant I was second best. He had said to me

before how much I looked like her. I guessed thats why he loved me.

Tears started to roll down my cheeks. I had never felt so empty; it was like all the happiness

had been sucked out of me.

Nessie, whats wrong? Jacob walked forward and touched my cheek.

I threw my hand towards his face and punched him so hard I heard his cheek bone crack.

You kissed Bella? My MOM? I loved you, I trusted you!

I felt Emmetts restraining hand on my shoulder so I pushed it off, but I hea rd bones crack.

She broke my hand Emmett sounded confused.

I was so hurt, so angry. As I cried, it started to rain, heavily.

Ness, listen to me. That was ages ago, before you were born. But thats over now; it was

just a teenage phase. I love you, please baby!

Dont call me baby. Ever. I hate you.

As he heard those three words, his face crumpled in pain. I knew those were not the three

words he wanted to hear. How could he? I was angry, confused, upset and heartbroken all

at once. My fingers curled up into a fist and as I blinked, lightning crashed down from the

sky. The wind was strong as it blew my hair behind me. We were in the middle of a storm,

and I was creating it....

Okay, so heres the thing. Im MAJORLY stuck for ideas. I have no idea what to right or how

to finish this part of the story. PLEASE HELP ME! Just a quick comment or email would be

the most amazing help ever! Thank you so much for reading. xoxoxo

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