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Mt trong bn tiu ch chm IELTS Writing task 1 l tvng a dng phong
ph. Tuy
cc i tng so snh trong writing task 1 khng nhiu, nhng thc tcc bn
li ang
gp phi 1 vn : Thiu tvng paraphrase i tng c so snh.
Di y l nhng tv cm tc tng hp li gip bn gii quyt vn trn.
Hy c kv dtrnh dng sai!
1. Tvng vnhm tui
One person:
He is 10 years old.
He is a 10-year-old.
He is aged 10.
More than one person:
The children in the class are all 10 years old.
It is a class of 10-year-olds
It is a class 10-year-old children.
The children in the class are all aged 10.
Age groups with more than one person:
The chart shows the hobbies of chi ldren (who are) between 10
and 12 years old.
The chart shows the hobbies of 10- to 12-year-olds
The chart shows the hobbies of 10- to 12-year-old chi ldren.
The chart shows the hobbies of chi ldren (who are) aged 10 to
12.
The chart shows the hobbies of chi ldren who fall into 10 to 12
age group
Ngoi ra mt s t khc nh:
Children = youngsters = the young = young people
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The number of people in their forti es(nhng ngi tui 40, tc t 40
49 tui)
Teenagers (miu t tui teen, tc t 11-19 tui)
The elderly = elderly people = senior citizens
Adult (ngi ln)
2. Gii tnh
- Male v femaleva l danh t m c va l tnh t, v n c dng cho
ngi bt c tui no
Eg: The number of males aged under 14 years old was 100
The number of male children aged under 14 years old was 100- Men
v womench dng cho ngi ln. Tc khi bi ni i tng l
children hoc l ngi di 18 tui th khng nn dng t ny thay th
- Boys v girlsch nn c dng cho tr em
3. Lng chi tiu hng tun
- Average weekly spending
- spent on average
- average expenditure
- weekly spending figures
- levels of spending
- spent per week
-expenditure per week
4. Tvng vtn nc v ngi nc
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Tn nc Ngi nc
Canada Canadians
England The English/ English people
Turkey The Turkish/ Turkish peopleSpain The Spanish/ Spanish
people
The USA Americans
Germany Germans
Italy Italians
Sweden The Swedish/Swedish people
Mexico Mexicans
Japan Japaneses
Ireland The Irish/ Irish people
Trong phn bi, nu cu hi khng lit k tn nc (e.g. "in three
countries"), bn c
hai cch vit li trong introduction ca mnh nh sau
- "in Britain, France and Germany"
-"in three countries, namely Britain, France and Germany".
Khng qun dng the trc 1 s nc nh "the USA", "the UK" v the US
Cc cu trc cu c th dng vs tn nc
The number of elderly people in the USA rose.
The number of Americans aged 65 and over rose over the period
shown.
Canada also saw a rise in the number of elderly people.
However, the figure for Australia fell.
5. Ngi dng Internet
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The percentage of people who used the Internet
The percentage of people using the Internet
The percentage of people who had access to the Internet
Internet usage
The percentage of Internet users
Eg:
- The proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was
about 20%.
- The proportion of Internet users in the USA was about 20%.
6. Tltht nghip
The proportion of people who were unemployed
The proportion of people who were jobless
Levels of unemployment
Unemployment rate
The proportion of people without jobLevel of joblessness
Eg:
- The number of 16 -to 24-year-olds who were unemployedin
England was around
18% in 2000
- Level of unemploymentin England fell to only 10% in 2002
- Unemployment ratein England was higher than the figure for
Mexico
-The proportion of English 16 -to 24-year-olds without jobwas
around 18% in
2000
- Level of joblessness in England fell to only 10% in 2002
- The proportion of people who were joblessin England fell to
only 10% in 2002
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7. Tlngi ngho
Poverty rate
Level of poverty
The percentage of people who live in povertyThe percentage of
people who live under the poverty line
Poverty level
Be poor
Eg:
- Poverty ratein Vietnam was much higher than that of Canada, at
10% and 2%
respectively.
-The percentage of people who live in povertyin Vietnam was much
higher than
that of Canada, at 10% and 2% respectively.
- 10% of Vietnamese people were poor, compared with only 2% of
Canadians.
8. Doanh thu bn hng
Sales = turnover
- Sales offast food increased over the period shown
-Turnover fr omfast food increased over the period shown
- Fast food earned/obtained/gainedjust under $6 billion
9. Hng nm, hng thng, hng tun
Per person = per capita = an average of = average + Noun
Annual = yearly = per year
Per week = weekly = each week = a week
Eg:
- Average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly
$200
- Consumption of pizza dropped to 10 kilograms per person per
year
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- The per capita consumption of beef in the US rose from around
60 to a peak of 90
pounds
- US beef consumption rose from around 60 to a peak of 90 pounds
per person
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The amount of beef consumed by the average American rose from
around 60 to apeak of 90 pounds
10.Chi tiu
Danh t: Spending = expenditure
ng t: be spent on = be allocated for = be used for = be expended
= be paid out
for
Danh tchngi: SpenderEg:
- In 2010, expenditur e onmobile phones rose to around $750.
- In 2010, spending onmobile phones rose to around $750
- In 2010, Swedish consumersspentaround $750 on mobile
phones
- In 2010, around $750 was allocated for mobile phones by
Swedish
consumers
-Swedish people were the largest spenders on mobile phones, with
around
$750 expended on this
- Sweden had the highest percentage of expenditurefor mobile
phones
11.Phng tin giao thng
Cc tv cum tparaphrase slng ngi dng xe t, chng ta sdng tng t
vi nhiu phng tin khc nh bus, train
The number of people who use cars
The number of people driving to work
The number of car commuters
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The number of people who commute by car
The number of people who travel by car
The number of car users
Eg:- Approximately 5 million was the number of bus users in
2010.
- Around 5 million commuters traveled by bus in 2010
- The bus was used by about 5 million people in 2010
Nu i bng xe p: The number of people who cycle to work = the
number of
cycling commuters
Nu i bng tu ha: The number of rail passengers
12.S sn xut v tiu th
- Tiu th
(Noun) Consumption
(Verb): be used, be consumed, be drunk or be eaten
- Sn xut:
(Noun): production, manufacture
(Verb): be produced, be made, be manufactured,
