Career Research PaperCRITERIA EXCELLENT GOOD FAIR POOR SCO

REEssential information included

Educational requirements College or tech school that offers this

degree in GA Licensure and/or credentialing

information included 10 tasks or skills performed in this

career Interview with someone in this field

(can be via email) Employers/companies in Georgia hiring

for this position. 50-40 points

ONE required element of essential information is missing

39-30 points

TWO required elements of essential information is missing

19-10 points

FOUR OR LESS of the required elements of essential are present in report

9-0 points

Written report-organization

All paragraphs are well constructed and includes several supporting details, along with an introductory sentence and concluding sentence. Introductory and closing paragraph present.

20 points

Almost all paragraphs are well constructed and includes several supporting details, along with an introductory sentence and concluding sentence.

Paragraphs include related information but are not typically constructed well.

Paragraphing structure was not clear and sentences are not typically related with in the paragraphs.

Written report-mechanics No grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors 10 points

Almost no grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors

A few grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors

Many grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors

Citation of sources All sources are accurately documented in the proper format (MLA)Use this web source:https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/

20 points

All sources are accurately documented, but a few are not in the desired format.

19-15 points

All sources are accurately documented, but many are not in the desired format.

14-8 points

Some sources are not accurately documented.

7-0 points

research

• https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0k7GPWBoCa0

• https://vimeo.com/7412164• http://www.abih.org/• http://

www.ors.od.nih.gov/sr/dohs/aboutDOHS/TAB/Pages/technical_branch_ih.aspx

INTRODUCTION

Have you ever felt unsafe at work? Certified Industrial Hygienists strive to protect workers and the public from many types of dangers. They defend workers from biological, chemical, ergonomic, environmental, and physical threats. A career in Industrial Hygiene encompasses science, math, and working with people. How does one become a CIH? (1.)

EDIT

• Did I use any resources to create this paragraph? • If so, how do I properly cite them?• Did I write in complete sentences?• Did I include the main idea or thesis of the

paper?• Did I introduce the topic well? Could someone

else reading it know what to expect in the paper?• Does the information in the paragraph flow and

make sense? (READ ALOUD)

1ST PARAGRAPH

Edit 1st paragraph

• Is each sentence grammatically correct?• Read the paragraph out loud- does it make

sense? Does it flow?• Are my sources cited within the paragraph?• Did I add the source to my bibliography?

Bibliography

1. n.p. American Board of Industrial Hygienist. 2014. October 19, 2015. <http://www.abih.org/>