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This estimate simply estimates the cost to physically build the project, which is our educated guess to what the contractors will bid on the project.
Wordiness
All of the documents are done right there at the station rather than being sent all the way downtown.
Sentence Rewrites
Which is a major because if anyone has a problem with a project they have to be able to get a hold of him to check on it.
Singular/Plural
These documents are worded very technical and describe property boundaries I high detail.
Sentence Corrections
The length of a document depends on what happen, for instance, if there was a really big fire than there will be more to write which will make for longer report.
Essential/Nonessential Clauses
He has spend several long hours adding a frequently asked question page that is all inclusive. and includes troubleshooting assistance to the customer.
Parallel Structure
Writing allows us to have record of a past patient, keep in touch with our referral clinics, and allows us to stay aware of new products and scientific findings.
Use of Quotes
To wrap this paper up I asked “does a great deal of collaboration come with a mechanical engineering degree.”
Acronyms
At the Wireless Network Operations Center we utilize these tools intensely. In a network environment minutes wasted looking for the right materials to get a site or piece of equipment operational could mean thousands of dollars, or thousands of customers lost to the competitors . . . . Things in the NOC move very fast.
Sentence Corrections
They are members of several professional organizations such as IEEE, (Institute of Electronics and Electrical Engineers) this is a networking out let and also includes a magazine subscription that has the latest developments in the field.
Comma Splice
If an E-mail is too short it may confuse people, if it is long-winded it will quickly find it’s way to the “To read when I have 2 hours to kill” folder.
Sentence Corrections
He uses e-mails for many of these writing tasks yet sometimes an old fashion letter is still essential.
Fragments
There were all the briefs of different cases and having to put so much information into what is described by the name, a brief. Summaries of the actions that had taken place, or are going to take place in the court.
Sentences
A few types of documents that they have to do are: memos, incidents reports, directives, policy procedures, training lessons, and apparatus specifications.
Sentence Corrections
A white paper list problems and ways to solve the problems and recommends which solution that would be most economical and beneficial for the company.
Passive Voice
There are actually many memos and reports that are documented throughout the station by many of the fire fighters.