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  • 1. Theyre our signal that a text is poetry, notprose. They can create rhythm. They control the pace/speed of a poem. They can emphasize words or ideas. May contain breaks called caesuras (usuallyindicated by punctuation or spacing) Can differ from line to line

2. When people read your poem out loud, or intheir heads, they will pause slightly at the endof each line. For example: I bet you can figure out wherethe line breaks should be in this example: Hickory, dickory, dock the mouse ran up the clock the clock struck one and down he run hickory, dickory, dock. 3. Hickory, dickory, dock.The mouse ran up the clock.The clock struck oneAnd down he run;Hickory, dickory, dock. 4. Lines control the pace ofPower word:the poem. Shortening orlengthening the lines canspeed up or slow downthe way people read. Is the following fast or slow?a break in the line that a wind shakes pulls the reader into the them but they next line. wont go oh no there goes one now. No. 5. Crippled with desire, he questioned it. Evening upon the heights, juice of the pomegranate: who could connect it with sunlight?Crippled with desire, he questioned it. Evening upon the heights, juice of the pomegranate: who could connect it with sunlight? 6. Arrangedto emphasize and compliment the other (musical, contextual, etc.) elements of language 7. Howthe poem looks on the page - Does the poem look light, delicate, with a lot of white space around the lines? Or are the lines packed solidly together? 8. William Carlos Williams This Is Just to Say in Varied Forms 9. This is just to say I have eaten the plums that were in the iceboxand which you were probably saving for breakfast. Forgive me;they were delicious so sweet and so cold.This Is Just to SayI have eaten the plums that were in the iceboxand which you were probably saving for breakfast.Forgive me; they were delicious so sweet and so cold.Whats the difference between these two poems? 10. This Is Just to Say This Is Just to SayI have eaten the plums that were in the iceboxIand which you were probably saving for breakfast. haveForgive me; they were delicious so sweet and so cold. eatenthe plumsthat were inthe iceboxand whichyou wereprobablysavingforbreakfastForgive methey wereWhats the difference between these two deliciouspoems?so sweetand so coldWhat effect do the shorter lines have? 11. Stanza is Italian for room Think of stanzas of a poem as rooms of a house Indicates a pause Often coincides with the rhythm of a poem/song. Used strictly in forms Prevents confusion (through organization)/boredom in readers Poems form of a paragraph Best thing? Theres no right or wrong way todivide one of your own poems. 12. This Is Just to SayThis Is Just to SayIIhave haveeateneatenthe plumsthat were in the plumsthe icebox that were inand whichyou were the iceboxprobablysaving and whichforyou werebreakfastprobablyForgive me savingthey weredeliciousforso sweet breakfastand so cold Forgive me they were deliciousHow do the stanza breaks influence the so sweetreading of the poem? and so cold 13. This Is Just to SayThis Is Just to SayII have eatenhave the plumseatenthat were in the iceboxthe plumsthat were in and which you were probablythe icebox saving for breakfastand whichyou were Forgive meprobably they were delicioussaving so sweet and so coldforbreakfastForgive methey were How do the stanza breaks influence thedelicious reading of the poem?so sweetand so cold 14. Whathappens when you break a line/stanza mid-sentence? 15. Justification (left, right, center) Font Typeface Size Bold/italics/underline Shapeof poems Tabs Spacebetween words 16. attack my mind withcomplete and utter chaos.- Ashley J.