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Edexcel GCSE
History Controlled Assessment
CA2: Russia 1917– 39Teacher Support Book 2012
Edexcel GCSE
History
Controlled Assessm ent
Teacher Support Book
History A: The Making of the Modern World
History B: Schools History Project
Unit 4 CA2: Russia 1917–1939
W elcom e to the GCSE
History 2 0 1 2 Controlled
Assessm ent Teacher
Support Book This CA Teacher Support Book has been designed to support you with the
teaching and assessm ent of Cont rolled Assessm ent Unit 4: Representat ions in
History. I t has been updated for 2012, drawing on the experience and insight
gained over the past 3 years. I t also contains learning support m aterials for
candidates.
The book is divided into seven sect ions. I t contains content which is
applicable for all opt ions and som e content which is specific to your chosen
opt ion. I nside you will find som e fantast ic guidance, inform at ion and sam ple
m aterial, including:
● an exem plar schem e of work
● suggested resources to support your teaching
● sam ple m aterial for your chosen opt ion
● exem plar candidate responses and m oderator com m ents
● representat ion sources which m ay be used as choices for the Part B( ii)
representat ion quest ion.
Expert advice from the people w ho know
We hope you find this docum ent useful and look forward to
cont inuing to work with you on our GCSE specificat ions. We are on
hand to answer your quest ions so please feel free to get in touch.
Angela Leonard
Chair of Exam iners
GCSE History
Mark Bat tye
Subject Advisor
To contact our GCSE History senior exam ining team please
call 0844 576 0034 or em ail:
To contact our History Subject Advisor, Mark Bat tye, please
call 0844 576 0034 or em ail: [email protected]
W e look forw ard to w orking w ith you.
Contents 1 I nt roduct ion to controlled assessm ent 1
A brief overview of the unit and the 2012 changes.
2 Assessm ent inform at ion 2
I n this sect ion we answer your key quest ions, but we also provide
inform at ion for candidates, which you m ay choose to copy for them .
3 Suggested resources 1 8
Som e useful resources such as published texts and websites. This
sect ion will be updated as m ore resources are m ade available.
4 Support ing you w ith your controlled assessm ent 1 9
Som e useful contacts and sources of inform at ion to support you.
5 . Exem plar schem e of w ork 2 0
A suggest ion about how you m ight st ructure your teaching, based on
the exem plar task provided.
6 Sam ple task w ith candidate responses 2 3
A sam ple cont rolled assessm ent which you can use with candidates
as a pract ice task.
7 Candidate handouts 3 6
Topic t im eline
Assessing representat ions
Understanding enquiry and representat ions
What are notes?
What is an enquiry?
Student proform as for plans and notes
Sect ion 1 : I nt roduct ion to controlled assessm ent
GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 1
Unit 4 : Representat ions of History
W hat has changed for 2 0 1 2 ?
The GCSE 2012 History specificat ions set out the linear requirements for first
teaching in September 2012 ( for 2-year courses) and assessm ent in June 2014.
Candidates applying for cert ificat ion from summer 2014 ( i.e. those following a 2-year
course from September 2012) must sit the three external exam inat ions at the end of
the course, along with the subm ission of cont rolled assessm ent .
Can w e st ill do the controlled assessm ent in
Year 1 0 ?
You can st ill schedule the cont rolled assessments as appropriate, but the cont rolled
assessment unit will need to be entered at the same t ime as the candidate is sit t ing
the GCSE. You’ll need to make sure that you are using the appropriate task for the
year of GCSE ent ry: check the dates on the task and ensure they are valid for the
year you are subm it t ing.
Can a candidate carry forw ard m arks from a
controlled assessm ent unit?
I f a candidate wishes to retake the whole GCSE History qualif icat ion, then they will be
able to carry forward the m ark they received for the cont rolled assessm ent unit . They
can do this whether or not the task is st ill valid for that cohort of learners, as they
are carrying forward the UMS mark they were awarded.
W ill the controlled assessm ent tasks follow the
sam e pat tern?
There are no changes to the cont rolled assessm ent content as a result of these
reform s. However, we have taken the opportunity to respond to feedback from
cent res saying that they would prefer the Part A enquir ies to be expressed as a
quest ion, so we are m aking this change to the way the tasks are presented for the
tasks released from summer 2012 onwards.
I s controlled assessm ent affected by the new
m arks for spelling, punctuat ion and gram m ar
( SPaG) ?
No, these addit ional SPaG marks are only in the externally exam ined units. Quality of
Writ ten Com m unicat ion (QWC) rem ains in the mark scheme for cont rolled
assessm ent , however.
Sect ion 2 : Assessm ent inform at ion
GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 2
Overview of assessm ent ● Controlled assessment is weighted at 25% of the course.
● I t is worth 50 raw m arks and 100 UMS.
● I t can only be subm it ted in the June series at the end of the course but it can be
sat at any t ime, provided the task is valid for the year of subm ission.
● Candidates are assessed through a single internally assessed, externally
moderated assessment consist ing of one task, split into three parts.
● There are 12 topics in the Modern World (MW) specificat ion and 13 topics in the
Schools History Project (SHP) specificat ion. The tasks are ident ical for both
Modern World and SHP.
Non- Brit ish
Germ any 1918–39
Russia 1917–39
USA 1919–41
China 1945–76
Vietnam 1960–75
Government and protest in the USA
1945–70
The I ndian subcont inent : The road to
independence 1918–47
Brit ish
Crime, policing and punishment in England
c1880–c1990
Northern I reland c1968–99
The im pact of war on Britain 1914–50, or
The impact of war on a locality in Britain
1914–50
Change in Brit ish society 1955–75
Power and polit ical t ransformat ion in
Britain 1970–90
History around us – a local com m unity
(SHP)
Modern World Unit 3
Candidates who do Opt ion 3C, USA
1945–70, must do a Brit ish cont rolled
assessment .
Prohibited combinat ions
CA1: Germany 1918–39 m ust not be
com bined with MW Unit 2 Opt ion A, MW
Unit 3 Opt ion C or SHP Unit 2 Opt ion C.
Preparat ion
For Part A (Historical Enquiry) candidates
can do their own research without
supervision. The Part A enquiry task can
be given to candidates at a t ime decided
by the teacher.
For Part B candidates may be given the
task and sources 2 weeks before it is
taken. They cannot take the m aterials
away with them.
W rite- up
Candidates will have 2½ hours to write the
assignm ent under cont rolled condit ions.
Write-up: the task does not have to be
done in silence but must be supervised at
all t im es. The write-up m ay happen over
m ore than one lesson but work m ust be
kept securely at all t im es.
Sect ion 2 : Assessm ent inform at ion
GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 3
Each task is split into three parts
Part A – Carry out a histor ical enquiry
Assessment Object ive 1/ Assessment Object ive 2 ( recall knowledge and dem onst rate
understanding of key concepts and key features)
Suggested t im e to com plete write-up: 1 hour
20 marks
Candidates carry out an enquiry. The enquiry will focus on one or more of the bullet
points in the specificat ion and will change each year. Edexcel will provide the focus of
the enquiry but there will be a choice of enquiry focus for teachers to choose from.
Tasks for CA10L and CA13 (SHP) will target local history. For these, you may adapt
the task by relat ing it to your locality, but you will not be able to change the subject
or focus of the enquiry.
Candidates are expected to support their answer with knowledge and understanding
from their program m e of study. Candidates need to show that they have found
relevant sources of informat ion and selected informat ion for the purpose of the
enquiry. I n writ ing up they should show that they can organise their informat ion to
answer the quest ion and assess it in order to reach a conclusion.
Part B( i) – Com pare tw o representat ions of History: Analyse
and com pare representat ions
Assessm ent Object ive 3b (understand, analyse and evaluate how aspects of the past
have been interpreted and represented in different ways as part of a histor ical
enquiry)
Suggested t im e to com plete write-up: ½ hour
10 marks
Candidates are expected to analyse two representat ions provided by Edexcel in order
to show how the past has been represented in different ways. At least one of the two
representat ions will be from a period later than the event , issue or individual being
represented.
I n this task candidates need to understand what representat ion is, what is meant by
port rayal of an aspect of the past and how a view or port rayal is conveyed by what
its creator chooses to include and/ or the t reatm ent given to what is included.
Candidates should see sim ilar ity and difference in the details and emphases of the
representat ions – and will achieve Level 3 if they show clearly what those differences
amount to in the overall impression created of an event or issue and if they make
and support a judgement .
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GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 4
Part B( ii) – Analyse and evaluate three representat ions of
history: Evaluat ion of representat ions
Assessment Object ive 3b
Suggested t im e to com plete write-up: 1 hour
20 marks
Candidates are expected to evaluate the two representat ions provided by Edexcel
and a third cent re choice (provided by Edexcel or the teacher) .
Candidates must have a basis for judging the representat ions. They should use the
overall cr iter ia of object ivity, accuracy and com prehensiveness. These can be further
broken down and applied depending upon the representat ion focus.
W hat are the representat ion focuses?
These are listed below – they are the broad themes which will remain consistent
throughout the lifet ime of the qualificat ion. All representat ion quest ions within tasks
will relate to this focus.
CA1 How were the Nazis able to cont rol Germany 1933–39?
CA2 How was Stalin able to cont rol Russia 1924–39?
CA3 How did the USA deal with its econom ic problems in the 1930s?
CA4 What was Mao’s impact on the development of China (hero or villain)?
CA5 How did people in the USA react to the war in Vietnam?
CA6 What was the im pact of m ass protest in US society 1955–70?
CA7 How important was the role of Gandhi in achieving independence for I ndia?
CA8 How effect ive was policing in late Victorian Br itain?
CA9 How im portant were param ilitary organisat ions in prevent ing a peace
set t lement in Northern I reland?
CA10 How did civilians in Britain react to the experience of war in 1939–45?
CA11 ‘The Swinging Sixt ies’. An accurate descript ion of Britain in the 1960s?
CA12 How did Britain respond to the Falklands Crisis?
CA13 What was the impact of indust r ialisat ion on a local community?
Sect ion 2 : Assessm ent inform at ion
GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 5
Teaching controlled assessm ent
The following guidance draws on the principal moderator’s feedback on the 2010 and
2011 series, in addit ion to exist ing guidance on the cont rolled assessment .
W hen w ill I see the task?
“
A new task (Part A and B) will be released every year. The task will be released
via secure download from the Edexcel website (www.edexcel.com) in the
sum m er term of the year before the controlled assessment is to be taken. Each
task is valid for 2 years which means that there will always be a choice of two
different tasks. You can look at the task in advance and use it to plan delivery
and adjust your scheme of work to reflect the focus of the task. I t is important
that you ensure the task you use is valid for the year in which you will subm it
the cont rolled assessm ent .
”W hen can candidates see the task?
“
Part A
You can give candidates the Part A enquiry task whenever you feel they are
ready.
Part B
Candidates can also know the focus of the Part B representat ion quest ions in
advance but m ust not have access to the actual Part B( i) representat ions unt il
2 weeks before they are due to complete their Part B quest ion. They should not
be allowed to take the representat ions out of the classroom, even after the
task has been com pleted. I f you plan to split the Part B quest ions and offer
Part B( ii) later, you need to collect the representat ions in after com plet ion of
Part B( i) and reissue them, under the sam e terms of cont rol, no m ore than
2 weeks before candidates are due to complete Part B( ii) . This is to ensure the
high level of cont rol required in cont rolled assessment .
”
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GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 6
W ill there be any choice?
“
Each task will be valid for 2 years, which means that after the summer 2010
series, there will always be a choice of two different tasks.
Within each task there will be a choice from two Part A enquiry themes. Each
theme will have internal choice. Part B representat ion quest ions will always
have the same focus throughout the lifet ime of the qualificat ion. There will be
no choice of quest ion in Part B. Part B( i) will ask candidates to compare two
provided representat ions. I n Part B( ii) , candidates will evaluate the two
representat ions with a third which you choose. Edexcel will provide examples
which you can choose – or you can choose one of your own. These examples
are provided in this document .
You may choose the enquiry theme and focus (Part A) for your candidates, or
given them the choice of focus within the theme.
You must not m ix Part A and B quest ions from different cont rolled assessm ent
tasks.
”W hen can I offer the controlled assessm ent unit?
“
Candidates must subm it their cont rolled assessment in the final summer series
at the end of the course. However, this does not prevent candidates from being
assessed much earlier in the year provided completed assessments are
retained securely at the school prem ises before subm ission in May. Therefore,
Unit 4 can be offered throughout the course alongside other units, or
intensively, provided that the task is st ill valid when the work is subm it ted.
”
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GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 7
Part A guidance
I n order to do well on the Part A task, it is important that candidates:
● address the enquiry focus, rather than simply writ ing everything they know on
the topic
● show that they have selected and used m aterial from a range of relevant sources
(books, websites, etc.) .
W hat is a ‘range’ of sources?
Candidates are expected to use five or more different sources of informat ion in their
enquiry. There are no rest r ict ions on the type of sources to be used – they can be
textbooks, work by histor ians, books for the general public, websites, media sources,
etc. However, the expectat ion is that ‘sources’ here m eans sources of inform at ion
( i.e. works of som e kind) rather than short ext racts or images which are used as
sources in Unit 3. An exam ple of an appropriate source of inform at ion could be a
‘chapter’ (often one or two double-page spreads) in a GCSE textbook, a web page
devoted to the specific topic, a museum display, and so on.
How do candidates show they have selected and used a range?
The mark scheme refers to candidates’ ‘select ion and use’ of m aterial. For teachers to
be able to reward this in marking, candidates’ prepared notes should be evidence
that they have done this. Although notes m ay not contain prepared passages of
answers in full sentences, they m ay contain ext racted phrases or whole sentences as
quotat ions from sources consulted. I n their response to the enquiry quest ion, GCSE
candidates are not required to reference their sources through footnotes (although
this is obviously acceptable) but they should make it clear that they are select ing and
deploying inform at ion from a range of sources. This m ight be done through direct
com m ent in the text , for example ‘as Leonard and Whit tock’ say or ‘the picture on
page XX of Waugh and Wright ’.
Because they can prepare a bibliography to bring into the write-up session,
candidates could also number the items on their bibliography and then put the
number of the relevant work in the margin or in brackets in the essay.
The following paragraph from the 2011 principal moderator’s report should also be
noted:
Since candidates are rewarded for ident ify ing and select ing material from
appropriate sources, they should not be provided with a standard set of
sources and told how to use them in the essay. I t is recognised that schools
with large cohorts may have problems resourcing this aspect of the enquiry
and it is perfect ly acceptable to make a core set of texts and list of websites
available to candidates for them to consult and m ake their own select ion of
detail. I n the same way, all the class will have access to the same source if a
film clip is used or a visit to a museum is organised but individual candidates
will m ake different use of these sources. Therefore the candidates’
bibliographies m ay be sim ilar but m oderators would expect to see m arked
differences in the notes m ade, and the use made of these sources. A single
bibliography used by all candidates is not appropriate.
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Part B guidance
W hat is a representat ion?
A representat ion is a source that
aim s to represent some aspect of
the past . I t could be the work of a
histor ian or an archaeologist ’s
report , but it could also be a film , a
paint ing, a cartoon or a novel. The
key is that it sets out to give an
impression: a private let ter, a will or
a set of census data couldn’t be
used, as these are examples of
evidence of the period, but are not
representat ions of it .
W hat do candidates need to do
in B( i) ?
Part B( i) asks candidates to
compare two representat ions
provided by Edexcel and to reach a
judgem ent about how far they
differ. Candidates m ust consider
sim ilar it ies and differences in port rayal;
they are not required in Part B( i) to
explain why the two representat ions
differ and they are not required to
evaluate them .
To do well in Part B( i) , candidates must
grasp the concept that representat ions of
history are created to give a view of an
aspect of the past . The im pression they
give, the port rayal they create, is the
product of deliberate choices m ade by
their authors: the author/ art ist began
with an empty page and each inclusion is
the product of a deliberate choice
designed to convey an overall message.
To reach the highest level, candidates
must be able to analyse the way in which
select ion and t reatm ent of m aterial in the
representat ions has deliberately created
a part icular view of the issue
represented.
Lengthy descript ions of the content of the
representat ions and assessing the
representat ions for reliabilit y are not
appropriate in this task and will not score
highly. The m ost successful answers
begin by ident ifying and comparing
the overall impression created in
each representat ion and then using
the detail of each representat ion to
support this analysis.
'The Withdrawal from Dunkirk' by Charles
Cundall, an official war art ist . Despite com ing
from the t im e, the paint ing is a good exam ple
of a representat ion. Cundall is conveying an
impression of orderliness and quiet heroism .
Even the t it le is significant – withdrawal not
ret reat .
A Punch cartoon of 22 September 1888.
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GCSE History Version 2012 Cont rolled Assessment Teacher Support Book 9
How can I help candidates to analyse representat ions for Part B( i) ?
Below are some possible st rategies for developing analysis of select ion and
t reatm ent .
● An analysis of advert isements – use of colour, language, emphasis. How is the
overall message created?
● An analysis of an individual’s social network hom e page. What im pression of the
individual does it give, and how has that im pression been created?
● A review of the school prospectus: What photographs have been included and
why? Which aspects or areas of the school are om it ted? What aspects are
emphasised in the text? How is language used to create a good impression?
Overall, what im pression of the school does the prospectus give?
● A piece of word-processed text is created into which candidates can ( i) insert
alternat ive phrases from negat ive or posit ive statem ent banks and ( ii) excise or
insert addit ional informat ion. How does the overall image change? How does
om ission and inclusion of informat ion make a difference?
● Candidates annotate call-outs inserted onto cartoons or visual im ages to
com m ent on issues such as expression, posit ioning, reason for inclusion of
part icular objects, etc.
W hat do candidates need to do in Part B( ii) ?
I n Part B( ii) candidates need to evaluate three representat ions. Two of these
representat ions will be the same as in B( i) ; the third is provided by the teacher.
To do well in Part B( ii) , candidates need to be able to apply cr iter ia in the process of
making their evaluat ions. Examples of cr iter ia are given in the level descript ions
(accuracy, com prehensiveness, object ivity) but others may be used, such as the
author’s focus or purpose. The highest level requires the applicat ion of three criter ia,
and the use of support ing contextual knowledge that helps the candidate make
judgem ents in relat ion to the three cr iter ia.
The principal moderator’s report from 2011 contains the following advice:
Candidates should be clear that in Bii they are assessing how the range of
detail, the t reatm ent of the m aterial, and the author’s purpose or his
object ivity affects the quality of the representat ion. I t m ight help them to
grasp this concept if they prepare for the task by thinking about the decisions
made in compiling a souvenir magazine or creat ing a t ime capsule – if there is
only space for one representat ion, which one would best convey the specified
issue?
How can I help candidates to evaluate representat ions for Part B( ii) ?
Below are some possible st rategies for developing candidates’ skills in applying
cr iter ia as part of a process of evaluat ion.
● Evaluat ing a TV advert on a scale of 1 to 5 according to different cr iter ia chosen
by the candidates. How do cr iteria affect the rat ing given?
● Choosing three criter ia by which to evaluate three films or TV programmes and
then rat ing them against each cr iter ion on a scale of 1 to 5. Overall, which is best
and why?
● Evaluat ing a social networking hom e page/ a school report / the school prospectus
against the cr iter ia of accuracy, com prehensiveness, object ivity. Using own
knowledge of the individual/ school to support the judgem ents m ade.
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W hat ’s the role of know ledge in Part B( ii) ?
Candidates must be able to apply relevant and precisely selected own knowledge to
gain high marks for their evaluat ion of the representat ions. The following ext ract
from the principal moderator’s report for 2011 shows the importance of candidates’
applicat ion of knowledge direct ly to the given representat ions:
I t is not enough at Levels 3 and 4 to assert ‘These details are accurate
because I know this did happen’, or to say ‘This coverage is not complete
because it does not m ent ion X’. Candidates’ own knowledge needs to be used
to support any com m ent about accuracy or to explain why it is significant that
som ething has been om it ted. Com m ents about com prehensiveness should
also take account of the focus of the representat ion, for exam ple if the focus
of a representat ion [ in CA6] is on the student protest movement , the
comment that it does not cover civil r ights protests, should not be highly
rewarded. Even where addit ional own knowledge was present in the answer, it
was somet imes used to explain the representat ion or the context rather than
to test and evaluate the accuracy/ comprehensiveness of the representat ions.
How do I choose the third representat ion?
The focus of the representat ion quest ions for each opt ion will stay the sam e
throughout the lifet ime of the specificat ion. The representat ions provided by Edexcel
will change each year but because the focus of the quest ions will remain the same,
you can choose a third representat ion and use the same one every year. You could
choose one of the representat ions in Sect ion 6 of this document , or select one from
past cont rolled assessm ent tasks. You don’t need to seek approval for your own
choice of third representat ion, however you may em ail
[email protected] for advice from our senior exam iners or to check
that a third representat ion of your choice is suitable. Bear in m ind the guidance about
what is – and what is not – a representat ion.
When submit t ing candidate work for moderat ion, please ensure that you enclose a
copy of the chosen third representat ion.
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Support ing your candidates
W hat sort of research can candidates do for Part A?
“
Candidates are free to research responses in their own t im e and in school t im e.
They may use librar ies, museums and the internet , for example. Candidates
should subm it a list of sources they have used in the form of a bibliography.
The bibliography m ay be writ ten on the form in the back of this document , or
candidates may create their own proforma. There is no page lim it for the
bibliography.
”
W hat are notes?
“
● Notes are pieces of evidence relevant to candidate enquiry or
representat ions.
● Notes are not cont inuous sentences or paragraphs.
● They can be bullet points, numbered points or short quotat ions.
● They could be lists of key dates, nam es, events, causes or consequences.
● Candidates can have plans and notes. The pages will be st r ict ly lim ited
(maximum two sides of A4 of notes and one side for plans for 20-mark
quest ions; one side of A4 of notes and one side plans for 10-m ark
quest ions) .
● Notes m ay be writ ten on the form s in the back of this docum ent . Teachers
and candidates m ay create their own notes proformas provided they are A4
size and conform to the page lim its above. Plain or lined A4 paper may also
be used.
● Notes m ay be handwrit ten or word processed (m inimum font size 12) .
”
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How m uch support can teachers give candidates?
“
Teachers may support candidates in the preparat ion of both parts of the task.
Teachers may, for example:
● m ake sure candidates understand and can com pare the sources
● teach them about the topic
● help them find relevant informat ion for the enquiry.
Teachers may not provide:
● writ ing frames specific to the live task
● words or phrases for candidates to include in their answers.
Discussion of individual details and general advice about planning and
st ructuring an essay are both acceptable, but specific advice about the plan to
be followed or the detail to be included in the assessed work should not be
given.
”
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Adm inister ing the controlled assessm ent
How do I conduct the controlled assessm ent?
“
● Arrangements can be decided by the cent re.
● Controlled assessment can take place in norm al lesson t im e, supervised by
teachers.
● When there is m ore than one teaching group, they can com plete the
cont rolled assessm ent at different t im es, and indeed, stages in the course.
● Candidates can have plans and notes. The pages will be st r ict ly lim ited
(maximum two sides of A4 of notes and one side for plans for 20-mark
quest ions; one side of A4 of notes and one side plans for 10-m ark
quest ions) to aid teacher checking. Candidates m ay use copies of the
Edexcel proformas at the back of this docum ent . Teachers and candidates
may also create their own proformas, or use plain or lined A4 paper.
● Candidates must create a bibliography, list ing all sources used in
preparat ion for the write-up.
● Plans, notes and bibliographies m ay be handwrit ten or word processed
(m inimum font size 12) .
● Candidates m ay not take annotated copies of the representat ions sources
into the write-up session. Clean copies should be provided by the teacher.
● Teachers should check that the materials contain only plans, notes and
bibliography and not a draft answer before they are taken into the
cont rolled environment . The plans, notes and bibliography should be
retained with the candidates’ responses in a secure place and will be
required as part of the sam ple for m oderat ion ( there is no requirem ent to
send in the complete folder of the whole unit from a candidate as in
previous specificat ions) .
● Candidates who are absent may complete the assignm ent another t ime.
There are no rest r ict ions on communicat ion between candidates who have
and who haven’t com pleted the assessm ent , as there would be in a live
exam inat ion. All candidates will know the task in advance.
”
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W hat opt ions do I have w hen organising the controlled assessm ent
t im e?
“
The cont rolled assessm ent write-up could be as follows.
● One session – preparat ion has been done throughout the teaching of the
program m e of study, and at the end, candidates com plete the cont rolled
assessm ent write-up (Part A and B) in one session last ing 2½ hours.
● Two sessions – after preparat ion for the enquiry (Part A) is done, a 1-hour
write-up session is com pleted by the candidates. After preparat ion for
Part B is completed, a 1½ –hour write-up session is completed by the
candidates.
● Three sessions – after preparat ion for the enquiry (Part A) is done, a
1-hour write-up session is completed by the candidates. After preparat ion
for Part B( i) is completed, a ½ hour write-up session is completed by the
candidates. After preparat ion for Part B( ii) is completed, a 1–hour write-up
session is completed by the candidates.
(These t im ings are advisory, but candidates m ust not exceed the 2½ hours for
the whole cont rolled assessment .)
”
W hat can candidates take in to the w rite- up session?
“
● Part A enquiry – two A4 sides of notes – for example bullet points, spider
diagram/ m ind map, quotes, key words – not complete sentences or
paragraphs, AND a plan on one side of A4.
● Part B( i) – one A4 page of notes AND a plan on one side of A4.
● Part B( ii) – two A4 sides of notes – for example bullet points, spider
diagram/ m ind map, quotes, key words – not complete sentences or
paragraphs, AND a plan on one side of A4.
● A bibliography of sources used in preparat ion for the write-up.
● Clean copies of the provided representat ions for Part B ( to be supplied by
the teacher) .
”
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Can candidates do the task on their com puter?
“
Yes, the assignm ent write-up can be word processed, provided the com puter is
checked prior to use for any saved informat ion and provided it does not
connect to the internet or int ranet . Spell check may be used by candidates.
When work in a write-up session is completed this must be saved onto a
portable m edium and retained securely by the cent re. The cont rolled
assessment response must be printed out for marking and standardisat ion.
I f the task is to be word processed, teachers should ensure that candidates use
a clear and legible font , font size and page layout , for example Times New
Roman, font size 12, 1½ line spacing and margins to allow for teacher
comments.
”
W hat if I decide to use a visual ( e.g. film ) clip or song as m y third
representat ion source in B( ii) ?
“
I f you are using a visual film clip or song as your own choice of third
representat ion you will need to ensure that candidates can have access to the
material during the write-up session. I n the case of a song you m ay wish to
provide candidates with a printed version of the lyr ics. I n the case of a film clip
you may provide candidates with a writ ten, factual descript ion of the clip,
which could include the screenplay or a summary of it .
You should send a recording of this material to the m oderator when the work is
subm it ted for moderat ion, along with any printed m aterial created to
accom pany it . This could be sent on a CD or mem ory st ick.
”W hat about candidates w ho qualify for ext ra t im e in exam inat ions?
“
Some candidates qualify for ext ra t ime in exam inat ions due to special
circum stances – in such cases the ext ra t im e can also be applied to the write-
up t im e for cont rolled assessm ent , but this must be carr ied out under the high
levels of cont rol required in cont rolled assessment .
”
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So, in sum m ary…w hat are the m ain cont rols?
“
The Part A enquiry and focus of Part B m ay be given out at any t im e. The
Part B quest ions and sources m ay be given out no m ore than 2 weeks before
the write-up is scheduled to take place. Sources for representat ions 1 and 2
m ay not be taken out of the classroom , both during the preparatory period,
and after the write-up session.
Candidates must complete the write-up within 2½ hours in a cont rolled
environm ent . Once the write-up has taken place, all work, tasks and sources
must be collected in and kept securely. The work then needs to be marked by
the teacher, and a sample sent off for m oderat ion.
”
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Subm it t ing the controlled assessm ent
W hen does controlled assessm ent need to be subm it ted?
“
Cont rolled assessm ent can only be subm it ted in the summer series (May
deadline) ; for assessm ent from 2014 this must be at the end of the course.
However, you can offer the unit earlier in the course, retain the cont rolled
assessment securely, and subm it it in the final summer series. For example,
you could teach the cont rolled assessment in the autumn term , candidates
could write the response in January, and you could retain the responses
securely and subm it these in the summer series. However, you m ust ensure
that the tasks you use are valid for the year of subm ission.
”Can I use live controlled assessm ent tasks as a m ock for candidates?
“
Each cont rolled assessm ent task will be valid for 2 years, and there will be a
new task released each year. From 2010 there will therefore always be a
choice of two different tasks. Within each task there will be a choice from two
Part A enquiry them es, each with internal quest ion choice.
You may therefore:
● use one cont rolled assessment task as a mock for candidates, then the
following year use the new cont rolled assessm ent task as the actual
cont rolled assessm ent task to be subm it ted
● use one of the Part A enquiry tasks for candidate pract ice, then use the
other Part A enquiry task as the actual cont rolled assessm ent task to be
subm it ted
● use the sample task provided in this docum ent as a pract ice or m ock
exercise with candidates.
You m ay not , however, use the sam e cont rolled assessm ent quest ions for a
m ock and actual cont rolled assessm ent task to be subm it ted.
”
Sect ion 3 : Suggested resources
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Suggested resources to support teachers and candidates
Before you begin, you will need to have an idea of available resources to support
your teaching of the course.
The following is a provisional list of resources, which m ay be updated as publishers
begin to produce new resources to support this cont rolled assessment topic.
CA2 : Russia 1 9 1 7 – 3 9
At present there are no published GCSE resources writ ten specifically for this
cont rolled assessm ent topic. However, teachers can use any GCSE Modern World
student book on Russia to teach the enquiry sect ion – for example:
GCSE Modern World History Unit 2B Russia 1917–39 Student Book, by Jane Shuter,
I SBN 9781846905483 (Pearson)
GCSE Modern World History for Edexcel: Russia 1917–1939, by Waugh and Wright ,
I SBN 9780340984406 (Hodder) .
There are m any other published resources on this period available from major
publishers for both GCSE and GCE which teachers can use to help plan their
teaching and students m ay find them a good source of addit ional reading.
Edexcel have produced a detailed scheme of work for the Modern World Unit 2B
exam ined topic on Russia 1917–39 – this scheme of work contains several links to
useful websites and references to other useful resources and can be found on the
link below under Editable Schemes of Work:
www.edexcel.com / quals/ gcse/ gcse09/ history/ a/ Pages/ default .aspx
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assessm ent
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Support ing you w ith your controlled assessm ent
Need help with cont rolled assessm ent? Our experts are on hand to support you...
• Email your Subject Advisor, Mark Bat tye ,
direct ly at [email protected]
• Call 0 8 4 4 5 7 6 0 0 3 4 to speak to a m em ber of
the Subject Advisor team for history
• Visit the History Com m unity Forum to speak
to other teachers, ask advice and see
docum ents and links that Mark Bat tye has
posted
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Ask the Expert , our free email service, puts you in direct contact with a senior
exam iner who will help answer any subject -specific quest ions concerning the
teaching of history. They will email you within two working days of receiving your
quest ion.
You can find docum ents relat ing to cont rolled
assessment below.
You should also refer to the JCQ controlled
assessm ent guidance docum ent .
Here's an indicat ion of what you'll see in some
of the document categories:
Assessm ent form s
You'll find the cont rolled assessm ent form s you need here.
Exem plars
New exemplars from the June 2012 series will be available here short ly.
Teaching and learning
We've updated the cont rolled assessm ent Teacher Support Books with answers to
FAQs from you.
All these docum ents can also be found on the m ain GCSE History A/ B
page, alongside other key documents including:
• The specificat ion , which includes the controlled assessm ent m ark schem e
• Principal Moderator reports
Don't forget that you can also download a centre- specific m oderator report for
your cont rolled assessm ent unit .
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Support ing your delivery of controlled assessm ent
The following resources are designed to support your delivery of the cont rolled
assessm ent . The program m e of study is our suggest ion for how you m ight st ructure
the teaching, based on the exam ple task further on in this document . I t is not
m andatory and you m ay adjust your programme of learning each year to reflect the
focus of the chosen enquiry for Part A.
Exem plar schem e of w ork
Generic schem e of
w ork
Subject content Controlled
assessm ent
1 5 - w eek
program m e
Context , concepts
and applicat ion
The histor ical context
of the enquiry/ ies
ident ified in Part A.
The key features of
the period or issue.
Reasons for change
and developments.
Pract ise analysing
causat ion, change.
Pract ise writ ing
extended responses
with a focus on
causat ion, change,
etc.
Overview :
● The collapse of the Tsarist
regime 1917: the weakness of
Nicholas I I ’s government ,
discontent by both the
workers and the peasants, the
growth of opposit ion to the
Tsarist regim e, the impact of
m ilitary defeats, events in
Pet rograd, the Tsar’s
abdicat ion, the Provisional
Government .
● The Bolshevik takeover and
consolidat ion of power
1917–1924; Lenin’s return to
Russia, the role of Trotsky,
the reasons for the Bolshevik
seizure of power, early
Bolshevik decrees, the Treaty
of Brest -Litovsk, the Civil War
and reasons for Bolshevik
success, War Com m unism and
New Economic Policy.
● The nature of Stalin’s
dictatorship 1924–1939; the
st ruggle of power, Stalin’s
removal of r ivals, the purges
and use of terror, show t r ials,
secret police, propaganda and
censorship, the cult of Stalin,
cont rol of educat ion.
● Econom ic and social changes
1928–39; Collect ivisat ion of
agriculture, indust r ialisat ion,
Gosplan, Five-Year Plans, the
Stakhanovites, liv ing and
working condit ions, the
experiences of different
groups.
Weeks 1–4
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Generic schem e of
w ork
Subject content Controlled
assessm ent
1 5 - w eek
program m e
Enquiry: The Bolshevik
consolidat ion of power.
● Econom ic: How did the
econom ic policies help the
Bolsheviks to consolidate
power 1917–1924?
● Terror: How did the use of
terror help the Bolsheviks to
consolidate their power
1917–1924?
Part A Enquiry
Developing enquiry
skills:
● how to find,
select and use
sources of
informat ion
● support ing
candidates in the
process of their
research
● includes write-
up.
Generic Write-up
1 hour
Weeks 5–7
Part B Context
The histor ical context
of the
representat ions
issue.
Coverage of key
features of period or
issue sufficient to
enable candidates to
evaluate the
accuracy and
com prehensiveness
of the
representat ions.
How was Stalin able to cont rol the
Soviet Union?
● Econom ic successes: the
implementat ion of
collect ivisat ion; the Five Year
Plans rapid indust r ialisat ion,
Russia’s emergence as a
major world power.
● Use of propaganda, the arts,
educat ion and youth to
encourage support for the
governm ent .
● The use of terror: the use of
force and the ruthless
suppression of opposit ion: the
role of a secret police and the
purges.
Weeks 8–11
Part B Skills and
concepts
Understanding and
analysing
representat ions.
Pract ise comparing
and evaluat ing
representat ions of
the selected issue.
Generic Write-up
Part B( i) :
½ hour
Part B( ii) :
1 hour
Weeks
12–15
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Historical t im eline
We have provided a t im eline in the candidate handouts sect ion which we hope you
will find a useful resource.
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Sam ple task
Russia 1 9 1 7 – 3 9
Part A: Carry out a historical enquiry
ENQUI RY 1
The ways in which the Bolsheviks consolidated their power in the years 1917–24.
One of the following quest ions should be the focus of your enquiry:
Either
• How significant was War Communism in the consolidat ion of Bolshevik rule in the
years 1917–24?
Or
• How significant was the use of terror in the consolidat ion of Bolshevik rule in the
years 1917–24?
(Total for Part A = 20 m arks)
Part B( i) : Com pare representat ions of history
Study Representat ions 1 and 2. They are both representat ions of how Stalin was able
to cont rol Russia.
How far do these representat ions differ?
(Total for Part B( i) = 10 m arks)
Part B( ii) : Analyse and evaluate representat ions of history
Study Representat ions 1 and 2 again and Representat ion 3, which your teacher will
give you.
Choose the one which you think is the best representat ion of how Stalin was able to
cont rol Russia. Explain your choice.
You should use all three representat ions and your own knowledge to explain your
answer.
(Total for Part B( ii) = 20 m arks)
Note: I n the live tasks there will be a choice of enquiry themes provided in Part A.
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Representat ions for use in Part B
Representat ion 1
A Soviet poster on the process of collect ivisat ion. The capt ion reads ‘Joining of small farm s: the way to prosperity in the socialist
count ryside’.
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Representat ion 2
From Modern World History by Malcolm Chandler and John Wright , published by
Heinemann in 2001.
Collect ivisat ion
Collect ivisat ion was part of the first Five-Year Plan. I t was an at tem pt to get
r id of the ownership of land by ordinary people and m ove peasants to large
collect ive farms where machinery and skilled labour could be used more
effect ively. At first Stalin t r ied to persuade peasants to join collect ive farm s,
but food shortages in 1928 and 1929, led him to order the seizure of food to
feed indust r ial workers. Seizures were resisted by peasants – especially by the
kulaks who had taken advantage of NEP. I n Decem ber 1929, Stalin went even
further.
Com m unist Party officials began to use the term ‘dekulakisat ion’ to describe
the at tacks throughout the Soviet Union that began in early 1930. The
populat ions of whole villages were rounded up and sent by t rain to the labour
cam ps in the north. Resistance resulted in death. Villagers who t r ied to defend
their property were shot on the spot .
How m any kulaks died is uncertain. Stalin est im ated that there m ust be
5,000,000 to 6,000,000 kulaks in the Soviet Union, but he later claim ed that
as many as 10,000,000 suffered. The kulaks reacted by dest roying their
livestock and property, rather than hand them over to the collect ive farm s. By
the sum m er of 1930, 14,000,000 cows and one- third of the pigs in the Soviet
Union had been dest royed. The result was the worst fam ine in Russian history.
Altogether, 20,000,000 people m ay have died during the fam ine of 1932–33.
Representat ion 3 below can be used together w ith the tw o sources provided
by Edexcel each year for the controlled assessm ent as the third
representat ion. Or teachers m ay provide a third representat ion of their ow n
choice.
Representat ion 3
From Hope Abandoned, N Mandelstam , first published in 1971.
The only purpose of terror is int im idat ion. To plunge the whole count ry into a
state of chronic fear, the num ber of vict im s m ust be raised to ast ronom ical
levels, and on every floor of every building there must always be several
apartm ents from which the tenants have suddenly been taken away. The
remaining inhabitants will be model cit izens for the rest of their lives – this will
be t rue for every st reet and every city through which the broom has swept .
The only essent ial thing for those who rule by terror is not to overlook the new
generat ions growing up without faith in their elders, and to keep on repeat ing
the process in systemat ic fashion. Stalin ruled for a long t ime and saw to it
that the waves of terror recurred from t im e to t im e, always on an even
greater scale than before.
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Assessm ent cr iter ia
Part A: Carry out a historical enquiry
Target Assessment Object ive 1/ Assessment Object ive 2 20 marks
Level Descriptor Mark
0 No rewardable material 0
Level 1
QWC i- ii- iii
● Simple comment offered and supported by some
informat ion. The material will be mainly generalised.
There will be few, if any, links between comments
offered.
● A lim ited number of sources have been used in the
enquiry.
● Writ ing communicates ideas using everyday language
and showing some select ion of m aterial, but the
response lacks clar ity and organisat ion. The candidate
spells, punctuates and uses the rules of gramm ar
with lim ited accuracy.
1–5
Level 2
QWC i- ii- iii
● Statem ents are developed with support that is m ost ly
relevant and accurate but with an implicit focus on
the quest ion. The response m ay m ainly take a
descript ive form .
● A range of sources has been consulted and used.
● Writ ing communicates ideas using a lim ited range of
historical term inology and showing some skills of
select ion and organisat ion of material, but passages
lack clarity and organisat ion. The candidate spells,
punctuates and uses som e of the rules of grammar
with general accuracy.
6–10
Level 3
QWC i- ii- iii
● The response at tempts an analysis which is linked to
appropriately selected informat ion. The response
shows understanding of the focus of the quest ion and
deploys sufficient accurate and relevant material to
support the points the candidate m akes. The
response may also include accurate material that is
descript ive and/ or that st rays from the quest ion
focus, and judgement may be implicit .
● A range of sources appropriate to the enquiry has
been ident ified and material from them has been well
selected.
● Writ ing communicates ideas using histor ical term s
accurately and showing some direct ion and cont rol in
the organising of m aterial. The candidate uses some
of the rules of grammar appropriately and spells and
punctuates with considerable accuracy, although
some spelling errors may st ill be found.
11–15
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Level 4
QWC i- ii- iii
● A sustained analysis is supported by precisely
selected and accurate m aterial and with sharply
focused developm ent of the points m ade. The answer
as a whole will focus well on the quest ion. An explicit
judgem ent is given, with a reasoned argument about
the nature/ extent of change/ significance/
consequences OR whether one factor was m ore
important than the others OR the response explains
the inter- relat ionship between two or m ore of the
factors.
● A range of sources appropriate to the enquiry has
been ident ified and material from them has been well
deployed.
● Writ ing communicates ideas effect ively, using a range
of precisely selected historical terms and organising
inform at ion clearly and coherent ly. The candidate
spells, punctuates and uses the rules of gramm ar
with considerable accuracy, although som e spelling
errors may st ill be found.
16–20
Part B( i) : Com pare representat ions of history
Target Assessment Object ive 3b 10 marks
Level Descriptor Mark
0 No rewardable material 0
Level 1 Comprehends the surface features of the provided
representat ions and selects m aterial from them.
Responses are descript ions, direct quotat ions, or
paraphrases from one or m ore of the sources.
1–3
Level 2 Comprehends the provided representat ions and selects
from them sim ilar it ies and/ or differences of detail. At low
level 2, there may be only one developed com parison,
and other comparisons will be undeveloped or
unsupported with m aterial from the sources.
4–7
Level 3 Analyses the sources and ident ifies a range of sim ilar it ies
and/ or differences in representat ion. Uses precisely
selected detail from the provided representat ions to
support the explanat ion and m akes a judgement about
extent .
8–10
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Part B( ii) : Analyse and evaluate representat ions of history
Target Assessment Object ive 3b 20 marks
Level Descriptor Mark
0 No rewardable material 0
Level 1
QWC i- ii- iii
● Comprehends the surface features of the provided
sources and selects material.
● Offers sim ple judgm ents about the representat ion,
and offers a lim ited am ount of accurate informat ion
about the period in quest ion. The m aterial will be
most ly generalised and linkage to the representat ion
will be implicit .
● Writ ing communicates ideas using everyday language
and showing some select ion of material but the
response lacks clar ity and organisat ion. The candidate
spells, punctuates and uses the rules of gramm ar
with lim ited accuracy.
1–5
Level 2
QWC i- ii- iii
● Comprehends the surface features of the provided
sources and selects from them key features of the
representat ions.
● Makes a judgement about the best representat ion
and provides detailed and accurate material about the
period in quest ion, but with lit t le linkage between
descript ion and judgem ent . Judgem ents m ay relate to
the accuracy or comprehensiveness of the
representat ion.
● Writ ing communicates ideas using a lim ited range of
historical term inology and showing some skills of
select ion and organisat ion of material, but passages
lack clarity and organisat ion. The candidate spells,
punctuates and uses som e of the rules of grammar
with general accuracy
6–10
Level 3
QWC i- ii- iii
● Analyses the provided sources and shows some of the
ways in which the past situat ion has been
represented. Uses detail from the provided
representat ions to support the analysis.
● Makes a cr it ical evaluat ion of the representat ion
based on well selected informat ion about the period
in quest ion and applying at least two clear cr iter ia, for
example, the author’s purpose or object ivity, or the
accuracy or comprehensiveness of the representat ion.
● Writ ing communicates ideas using histor ical term s
accurately and showing some direct ion and cont rol in
the organising of m aterial. The candidate uses some
of the rules of grammar appropriately and spells and
punctuates with considerable accuracy, although
some spelling errors may st ill be found.
11–15
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Level 4
QWC i- ii- iii
● Analyses the provided sources in order to show the
way in which the past situat ion has been represented.
Uses precisely selected detail from the provided
sources to support the analysis.
● Makes a cr it ical evaluat ion of the representat ion
based on precisely selected informat ion about the
period in quest ion and applying at least three cr iter ia,
for example the author’s purposes or object ivit y, or
the comprehensiveness and/ or accuracy of the
representat ion.
● Writ ing communicates ideas effect ively, using a range
of precisely selected historical terms and organising
inform at ion clearly and coherent ly. The candidate
spells, punctuates and uses the rules of gramm ar
with considerable accuracy, although som e spelling
errors may st ill be found.
16–20
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Candidate response: Part A historical enquiry
The w ays in w hich the Bolsheviks consolidated their pow er in the years
1 9 1 7 – 2 4 .
How significant w as W ar Com m unism in the consolidat ion of Bolshevik rule
in the years 1 9 1 7 – 2 4 ?
Extract from a candidate response
. . .War Com m unism was first used when the Bolsheviks took power. Maps show that
when the Bolsheviks first took power they only had cont rol of som e of the m ain towns
and cit ies. There were st ill food shortages and the Bolshevik's Red Army needed
feeding and weapons. Bolshevik propaganda posters show that they had to build up
st rong m ilitary forces to defeat the White Arm y. Lenin decided that the governm ent
had to take over all indust ry and the peasants had to hand over food. War
Com m unism also showed that they were using com m unist ideas. But it was not very
successful and there were m any st r ikes and many people were opposed to it . There
was also a serious revolt with the Kronstadt mut iny where sailors refused to obey
orders. I n 1921 Lenin changed his economic policies to the new 'New Econom ic
Policy'.. .
Moderator’s com m ents
“
This ext ract shows the qualit ies described in Level 2 of the mark scheme. The
student has found out about and described som e aspects of War Com munism .
The response shows the select ion of som e accurate detail and has m ade use of
relevant m aterial from sources. However, the student 's t reatm ent of m aterial is
mainly descript ive. To improve to Level 3 the response needs to be more
explicit ly developed and focused - such as the advantages the Bolsheviks faced
over the Whites and Lenin's ideological just ificat ions for War Communism. The
student could use the m aterial to show the extent of the problem s faced by the
Bolsheviks and the econom ic methods used to t ry and consolidate power. The
student could also bring in addit ional m aterial to support judgm ents about
significance.
”
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Part B( i) response
Study Representat ions 1 and 2 . They are both representat ions of how Stalin
w as able to control Russia.
How far do these representat ions differ?
Extract from a candidate response
…Representat ions 1 and 2 both show collect ivisat ion as a way of Stalin cont rolling
Russia by m aking changes in the count ryside. They both show that this m eant
m aking sm aller farm s into m uch bigger farm s and the use of m achinery such as
t ractors to m ake farm ing bet ter and to produce m ore food. Representat ion 1 shows
food being collected and in Representat ion 2 the author writes about food being
needed for the indust r ial areas. Representat ions 1 and 2 are different because 1
m akes it look as though it happened without opposit ion from the peasants.
Representat ion 2 tells us about the force used by Stalin to take cont rol of the
count ryside and also that m any peasants were against it and m any were killed during
collect ivisat ion. Som e peasants were so against it that many died and somet imes
they even killed their own anim als and dest royed their own farm s…
Moderator’s com m ents
“
This ext ract exemplif ies work which would gain a Level 2. The candidate takes
m any of the details of the sources at face value, report ing what the
representat ions show and say and not ing points of agreement and
disagreement . There is enough comprehension and com parison to allow
Level 2. The answer would move to Level 3 with more awareness of the
differences in port rayal. Representat ion 1 is deliberately created to port ray
collect ivisat ion in a posit ive way. The art ist ’s choice of idyllic looking images of
the count ryside reflects this.
”
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Part B( ii) response
Study Representat ions 1 and 2 again and Representat ion 3 , w hich your
teacher w ill give you.
Choose the one w hich you think is the best representat ion of how Stalin w as
able to control Russia. Explain your choice.
You should use all three representat ions and your ow n know ledge to explain
your answ er.
Extract from a candidate response
…Representat ions 1 and 2 both tell us about changes m ade in the count ryside which
Stalin used to cont rol Russia. Representat ion 1 only gives us the view of the
governm ent which wanted collect ivisat ion to look very successful. Representat ion 2
gives us a m uch fairer understanding of collect ivisat ion and how Stalin used it to
cont rol Russia. I t tells us about how m uch force was used, how m any of the peasants
opposed it and that in som e ways it was not successful. Stalin thought that the
kulaks were to blam e for the food shortages. Stalin was also determ ined for Russian
agriculture to provide m ore food so that the workers in the towns and cit ies would
have bet ter food supplies. I think representat ion three gives us a very good sense of
how Stalin cont rolled Russia and so I think it is the best representat ion. From
Representat ion 3 we can see how m uch fear there was and how far Stalin went to
cont rol the Russian people. I t shows that they wanted to m ake people supporters of
Stalin and wanted to m ake sure that anyone who disagreed with Stalin’s policies
would suffer. Representat ion 3 also tells us that they eventually wanted a populat ion
that would all agree with socialism …
Moderator’s com m ents
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This ext ract suggests a response in Level 2. Key features of Representat ion 3
are selected to show how it helps us to understand the extent of Stalin’s
cont rol. The judgm ent is supported from the content of Representat ion 3. The
response also includes own knowledge about Stalin blam ing the kulaks and the
need for food to reach the cit ies. However, there is no applicat ion of this own
knowledge to reach a judgem ent about the accuracy of the port rayal. The
student for example could make further comments on the ideological mot ives
behind collect ivizat ion regarding the kulaks. To move to Levels 3 and 4 the
response should make more developed use of at least two cr iter ia and apply
well selected informat ion about Stalin’s cont rol.
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Addit ional Part B( ii) representat ion sources
One of the following three representat ion sources can be used, together with the two
sources provided by Edexcel each year for the cont rolled assessment , as the third
representat ion. Representat ions from past cont rolled assessm ent tasks can also be
used. Or teachers may provide a third representat ion of their own choice. Teachers
m ay adapt these representat ions for use with candidates. For example, they may be
shortened, and passages m ay be adapted for accessibilit y. The meaning should not
be altered, however. Amended sources should be submit ted with the candidates’
work for moderat ion.
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Representat ion 3 - A
A poster of Stalin.
Great Stalin – A symbol of the nat ions of the Soviet Union
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Representat ion 3 - B
From Russia and the USSR 1905–41, an SHP student book by Terry Fiehn, published
in 1996.
The labour camps were at the cent re of Stalin’s programme of terror. People
feared being sent to them alm ost as m uch as being shot . Few survived the
harsh condit ions there. The cam ps were found all around the Soviet Union, but
som e were in the frozen north, where condit ions were severe in the ext rem e.
I n the late 1920s and early 1930s, labour cam ps took the peasants accused of
being kulaks or who resisted collect ivisat ion and the workers accused of
sabotage and ‘wrecking’. These people were often used as forced labour to
clear ground for indust r ial towns or for big projects such as the building of the
Belomar Canal. After the purges began, the camps filled up with polit ical
pr isoners. There were also wom en’s and children’s cam ps.
Terror and propaganda were two of the chief ways in which Stalin cont rolled
ideas in the Soviet Union. People were too fr ightened to speak out against the
state, because someone m ight report them to the secret police. Stalin
m ounted a huge propaganda campaign in posters, film s, radio, books and
newspapers (all of which were state cont rolled) to push the government ’s
views.
Stalin regarded writers and art ists as dangerous. Writers were censored: their
books and art icles had to be subm it ted to commit tees before they were
published. They had m uch less freedom under Stalin than they had had in the
1920s. Art ists were forced to produce work which glor ified the achievements
of Soviet workers and peasants, or of the Revolut ion. This was called ‘Socialist
Realism ’. Socialist realist novels had as their heros ordinary people helping to
build the new Soviet society. Any work other than this was called ‘bourgeois’.
Writers and art ists accused of bourgeois tendencies could find their work was
never published or seen.
Educat ion was st r ict ly cont rolled. What was taught in schools was laid down by
the government . History was part icular ly im portant , and as the 1930s went on
it was rewrit ten to suit Stalin. Outside school, children joined polit ical youth
groups, which t rained them in socialism . These groups were taught polit ical
ideas through act ivit ies such as sports, camping, model-making and so on.
Representat ion 3 - C
From Hope Abandoned, N Mandelstam , first published in 1971.
The only purpose of terror is int im idat ion. To plunge the whole count ry into a
state of chronic fear, the num ber of vict im s m ust be raised to ast ronom ical
levels, and on every floor of every building there must always be several
apartm ents from which the tenants have suddenly been taken away. The
remaining inhabitants will be model cit izens for the rest of their lives – this will
be t rue for every st reet and every city through which the broom has swept .
The only essent ial thing for those who rule by terror is not to overlook the new
generat ions growing up without faith in their elders, and to keep on repeat ing
the process in systemat ic fashion. Stalin ruled for a long t ime and saw to it
that the waves of terror recurred from t im e to t im e, always on an even
greater scale than before.
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Candidate handouts The following handouts can be copied and adapted for use with your candidates:
● Topic t im eline
● Assessing representat ions: from com prehension to evaluat ion
● Understanding enquiry and representat ions
● What are notes?
● What is an enquiry?
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Topic t im eline
CA2 : Russia 1 9 1 7 – 3 9
1917 March – first Revolut ion.
1917 March – Tsar Nicholas abdicated his throne in favour of his brother, Grand
Duke Michael, who refused and as a consequence rule of the Russian Em pire
by the m onarchy cam e to an end.
1917 A ‘Provisional Government ’ took over with Prince George Lvov as Prime
Minister.
The ‘Provisional Government ’ decided to cont inue Russia’s involvement in the
First World War.
1917 April – the Germ ans allowed Lenin to return to Russia from his exile
in Switzerland.
1917 The ‘April Thesis’.
1917 The ‘June Offensive’.
1917 July – Alexander Kerensky took over as Prime Minister.
1917 October – Lenin urged the Pet rograd Soviet to take power from the
Provisional Government .
1917 November – the Bolsheviks occupied key buildings and the Provisional
Government was overthrown in Pet rograd.
1917 November – the Bolsheviks gained cont rol of other key cit ies e.g. Moscow.
1918 January – Bolshevik Red Guards dispersed the Assem bly ( it never m et
again) .
1918 Const itut ion int roduced.
1918 March – Treaty of Brest -Litovsk.
1918 April – armed resistance to the Bolsheviks signalled the start of a Civil War.
1921 Treaty of Riga.
1921 March – ‘Kronstadt Munt iny’.
1921 New Economic Policy int roduced.
1922 May – Lenin suffered his first st roke.
1924 January – Lenin died (aged 53) .
1924 After Lenin’s death Stalin and Trotsky engaged in a power st ruggle to
become the leader.
1924 Const itut ion int roduced.
1928 First Five Year Plan.
1929 Stalin emerged from the power st ruggle as leader.
1929 Policy of Collect iv isat ion of agriculture int roduced.
1933 Second Five Year Plan.
1934 December – murder of Kirov.
1936 Const itut ion int roduced.
1936 The ‘Great Purge’ starts.
1938 Third Five Year Plan.
1939 Nazi-Soviet Non-Aggression Pact .
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Assessing representat ions: from com prehension to
evaluat ion This handout helps you to understand the difference between com prehending and
evaluat ing a representat ion. To do well you need to be m aking a cr it ical evaluat ion.
Representat ion 1
Face value content of representat ion
● There was more machinery.
● Farm s got bigger.
● More food was being produced.
● Food could be delivered.
Evaluat ion of representat ion as evidence of how Stalin w as able to
control Russia
● The poster is propaganda.
● More food would give Stalin more support .
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate accuracy:
o Stalin was able to int roduce his policies
o collect ivisat ion was opposed and there was fam ine.
Crit ical evaluat ion of representat ion as evidence of how Stalin w as
able to control Russia
● The images are selected to port ray success and so increase cont rol.
● Shows how the image is propaganda to give impression of success.
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate accuracy of port rayal; did collect ivisat ion lead
to prosperity and thus support in spite of early resistance?
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate completeness of port rayal.
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Representat ion 2
Face value content of representat ion
● There were food shortages.
● Collect ivisat ion was forced onto the peasants.
● Stalin wanted to get r id of the kulaks.
Evaluat ion of representat ion as evidence of how Stalin w as able to
control Russia
● To cont rol Russia Stalin needed to increase food product ion.
● Stalin was willing for force to be used to cont rol Russia.
● ‘Dekulakisat ion’ as part of Stalin’s policies to cont rol Russia.
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate accuracy.
● Use of own knowledge to consider how completely this port rays how
● Stalin was able to cont rol Russia.
Crit ical evaluat ion of representat ion of evidence of how Stalin w as
able to control Russia
● Author port rays the ruthlessness and violence used during collect iv isat ion.
● Overall the impression given of the huge loss of fam ine implies that Stalin’s use
of terror, rather than his econom ic successes, explains his cont rol.
● Evaluates object ivity of representat ion.
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate accuracy of port rayal.
● Use of own knowledge to evaluate completeness of port rayal of Stalin’s cont rol
over Russia.
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Understanding enquiry and representat ions
Part A
W hat is an enquiry?
● An enquiry m eans asking a quest ion or want ing to know about som ething.
● I t is a search for inform at ion.
● I t involves the exam inat ion of facts and ideas for accuracy.
● I t involves research using different sources of inform at ion, e.g. books, the
internet , newspapers and personal accounts.
● After informat ion has been gathered, it involves select ing which informat ion is
most helpful and using that informat ion to make judgements and reach
conclusions.
W hat skills w ill I learn w hilst carrying out m y enquiry?
I n carrying out your enquiry for Part A you will learn how to:
● plan an enquiry
● find different sources of inform at ion
● choose what inform at ion to use and what inform at ion not to use
● organise informat ion
● evaluate informat ion
● reach your own conclusion about your enquiry.
W hat preparat ion do I need to do to be successful in the enquiry?
● Keep in m ind what enquiry you are following and search for inform at ion that is
relevant .
● Use at least five sources of inform at ion. They don’t all have to be books; you
could use internet sites, television programmes, sites and museums if they are
relevant . Try to find a range of different sources – don’t just use five different
websites.
● Pract ise the skills you need in order to be successful: select ing informat ion;
organising inform at ion; evaluat ing inform at ion; reaching a conclusion.
● Make a plan – four or five key points from your enquiry.
● Make some notes which will help you organise your informat ion. These can be
handwrit ten on the Edexcel proforma or word processed. You could include key
nam es, events and dates; short quotat ions you will use in your answer. You will
be able to have these notes with you when you write up your cont rolled
assessment .
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W hat do I need to do in the assessm ent for Part A?
I n Part A you will write up your answer to your enquiry quest ion worth 20 m arks.
I n this part of the assessment , you will be successful if you:
● focus on the enquiry
● use good spelling, punctuat ion and grammar and communicate clearly
● show that you have selected sources of informat ion carefully
● use inform at ion from your sources to back up the points you want to m ake
● organise your points so that your answer leads to your conclusion
● at the end of your answer, sum up the reasons why you cam e to your conclusion
in the enquiry.
Part B
W hat is a representat ion?
● Sources that are designed to create an im age of som e aspect of the past .
● When histor ians write they create a representat ion of the past .
● Film m akers, painters, art ists, novelists do the same – when they pick a subject
or event in the past they create a ‘representat ion’ of it .
● Therefore, a representat ion is also an interpretat ion and it will probably have
st rengths and weaknesses in the way it conveys the past .
● A representat ion may only focus on one aspect and not tell the whole story, it
m ay be balanced and give m ore than one side, or it could be designed to
persuade and influence.
W hat skills w ill I learn in Part B?
I n assessing representat ions of History for Part B you will learn how to:
● understand representat ions of history
● compare representat ions and see differences in the ways they port ray the past
● use representat ions together with your own knowledge
● evaluate representat ions
● reach a decision which you can explain and support .
W hat preparat ion do I need to do to be successful in the
representat ion quest ions?
● Pract ise the skills you need to be successful: compare two representat ions;
assess a representat ion using your own knowledge – is it accurate? I s it one-
sided or is it object ive? I s it only giving part of the picture or is it com plete? Was
its author t rying to give an accurate port rayal, or sim ply to entertain?
● You will be given your representat ion sources 2 weeks before your cont rolled
assessm ent . Make sure you understand the viewpoints and message of each of
them .
● Make notes to help you com pare and evaluate the representat ions for quest ion
B( i) and ( ii) . You should use clear cr iter ia for your evaluat ion: you could have
these headings – How accurate? How object ive? How complete?
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W hat do I need to do in the assessm ent for Part B?
I n Part B you will write up your answer to two quest ions.
Part B( i) will ask you to analyse two representat ions. You will be asked how far the
representat ions differ. This quest ion is worth 10 m arks.
I n this part of the assessment you will be successful if you:
● ident ify points of difference clearly
● ident ify points of sim ilarity clear ly
● choose details from both representat ions to back up the points you make
● sum up what you’ve ident ified to show that you understand how far the
representat ions differ.
Part B( ii) will ask you to evaluate three representat ions. You will be asked to say
which you think is the best . This quest ion is worth 20 marks.
I n this part of the assessment you will be successful if you:
● explain how you are going to decide which representat ion is best – we call these
ideas the cr iter ia you are using to evaluate the representat ions
● evaluate all three representat ions using at least three cr iter ia (you can use more
if you choose)
● always back up your points using the representat ions and your own knowledge of
the issue.
At the end of your answer, sum up the reasons why you cam e to your conclusion
about which representat ion was best .
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W hich is the best representat ion?
Use this sheet to record your thoughts on your representat ion quest ions. [ This sheet m ay not be taken into the write-up session.]
How com plete?
How object ive?
How accurate?
Representat ion 1
Representat ion 2
Representat ion 3
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W hat are notes?
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W hat is an enquiry?
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Candidate proform as for plans and notes
The following proformas have been designed for candidates to write their plans, notes
and bibliography. The forms will be available for separate download on the Edexcel
website. These proformas are only suggested tem plates and are not com pulsory.
Candidates and teachers m ay, if they wish, create their own proform as based on this
design, provided that they are A4 size and conform to the st r ict page num ber lim its
detailed on page 14 of this document . Plans and notes m ay be handwrit ten or word
processed (m inimum font size 12) . Plain or lined A4 paper may be used. There is no
page lim it for the bibliography which should be as long as necessary.
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Student proform a – Page 1 of 1 0
These sheets (or cent re-designed versions of them) are designed to be taken into the
cont rolled assessm ent write-up and handed in at the end of the session. They should be
at tached to the front of the candidate’s work at the end of the write-up session.
Cent re number:
Cent re name:
Candidate number:
Candidate nam e:
Cont rolled assessm ent
opt ion:
(please circle)
CA1 CA2 CA3 CA4 CA5 CA6 CA7
CA8 CA9 CA10 CA11 CA12 CA13 (SHP)
This form has been designed for students to write their cont rolled assessment plans, notes
and bibliography, which should be brought into the write-up session. Students and teachers
m ay, if they wish, create their own versions of this form , based on this design, provided
they conform to the following st r ict page num ber lim its:
Part A: one side of A4 for plan and two sides of A4 for notes
Part B( i) : one side of A4 for plan and one side of A4 for notes
Part B( ii) : one side of A4 for plan and two sides of A4 for notes.
There is no page lim it for the bibliography which should be as long as necessary.
Plans and notes m ay be hand writ ten or word processed (m inimum font size 12) . Plain or
lined A4 paper may be used.
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Enquiry:
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Bibliography
Please list all sources used when preparing for your cont rolled assessm ent write-up. The
bibliography should be as long as necessary – no page lim it applies.
Edexcel gratefully acknowledges the following sources.
A Punch cartoon of 22 September 1888, page 6: reproduced with perm ission of Punch Ltd;
www.punch.co.uk
Every effort has been m ade to contact the copyright holders where possible.
I n som e cases, every effort to contact copyright holders has been unsuccessful and Edexcel
will be happy to rect ify any om issions of acknowledgements at first opportunity.