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4/7/2014 1 Effective Writing & Communication Matt X. Ryan, CFE, MBA Francis X. Ryan, CPA, MBA Last Update: March 2014 Introduction – Matt X. Ryan Financial Services & Risk Analysis Public Accounting/Internal Audit Alternative Investment (Hedge Fund) Accounting Strategic & Operational Risk analysis (manufacturing, start-ups, financially- troubled companies, etc.) Pennsylvania Army National Guard Captain, Company Commander for Distribution/Logistics Company Operation Iraqi Freedom (2008-2009), Executive Officer & Medical Logistics Officer Operations/Strategic planning for battalion of 750+ soldiers Non-profit Board experience PICPA – Education Committee Political Committees & State Senate Candidate Treasurer Education & Certifications MBA – The Wharton School B.S. Finance – Penn State University Certified Fraud Examiner 2

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Effective Writing & Communication

Matt X. Ryan, CFE, MBA

Francis X. Ryan, CPA, MBA

Last Update: March 2014

Introduction – Matt X. Ryan

Financial Services & Risk Analysis

Public Accounting/Internal Audit

Alternative Investment (Hedge Fund) Accounting

Strategic & Operational Risk analysis (manufacturing, start-ups, financially-troubled companies, etc.)

Pennsylvania Army National Guard

Captain, Company Commander for Distribution/Logistics Company

Operation Iraqi Freedom (2008-2009), Executive Officer & Medical Logistics Officer

Operations/Strategic planning for battalion of 750+ soldiers

Non-profit Board experience

PICPA – Education Committee

Political Committees & State Senate Candidate Treasurer

Education & Certifications

MBA – The Wharton School

B.S. Finance – Penn State University

Certified Fraud Examiner 2

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Introduction – Frank Ryan Turnaround/Crisis Manager

Author, series “Rebuilding America”

Marine Colonel (Retired)

Iraq & Afghanistan

Civil Affairs & Economic Warfare

Board Experience

Public & Non-profit boards

Former Chairman, Audit Committee

Chairman, Non-profit board

Former Congressional Candidate

Education & Certifications

MBA

CPA, CGMA

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Agenda

Why study effective communication & writing?

Best Practices

Listening

Writing

Emails (and smartphones)

Presentations

Social Media

Employee Engagement Trends – Appendix A

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Why Study Effective Communication? The Cost of Poor Communication

Employees become less engaged (Appendix A)

Top performers become even less engaged

Employee – Client conflicts

Lost opportunities/future sales?

Contract cancellations

Employee – Employer conflicts

Hostile work environment?

Affects productivity

Employee – Employee conflicts

Affects productivity, teamwork

Estimates: 6 hours of every 40-hour workweek (15%) are wasted due to poor communication between managers and staff

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Why Study Effective Communication?

Causes of Poor Communication

Fragmented thoughts/directions

Poorly thought-out comments

Personal experiences: perception

Misinterpretation

Misunderstandings

Integrity issues

Poor listening skills

Constant complaining

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Why Study Effective Communication?

Perception

What color is a stop sign?

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Why Study Effective Communication?

Perception

What color is a yield sign?

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Why Study Effective Communication?

Conflict from Communication

Miscommunication often leads to conflict

Two or more people view the same situation differently

BUT not all conflict is bad

“Good” conflict can produce stronger results as long as there is an attempt to resolve the problem

Forces us to make a stronger case for our own idea/point-of-view

Avoiding “bad” conflict

Keep people continuously informed

Ask questions and LISTEN

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Listening 40% of all communication

is LISTENING

Most communication problems occur because of listening issues.

Selective hearing/listening?

Selective attention?

Distracted/other things on the mind

Have you forgotten the name(s) of someone you were introduced to just a few minutes (or seconds) ago?

Why all the problems with listening?

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Listening Why all the problems with listening?

Speed: Thought speed is greater than speaking speed

Most individuals speak at a rate of 125 words/minute

Mental capacity: up to 400 words/minute

We are inefficient listeners

Listening skills deteriorate with age

Ralph Nichols, author of Are You Listening?:

“If we define the good listener as one giving full attention to the speaker, first-grade children are the best listeners of all.”

Listening is hard!

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Listening Bad Listening Habits

Assume subject matter “uninteresting”

Criticize the delivery and/or appearance of the speaker

Become too stimulated

Submit to emotional words: politically-charged

LUNA:

Listen to

Understand

Not to

Agree

Listen only for facts

Fake attention

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Listening Improve Listening Skills

Anticipate the speaker’s next point

See if you’re following his/her train of thought correctly

Make mental summaries as you listen

Ask for clarification if confused

Admit if you weren’t paying attention and/or were distracted, and then PAY ATTENTION

Practice, Practice, Practice

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Writing How you write says a great deal about your

professionalism.

Careers are made AND broken by poor writing skills.

Some careers never begin!

What kind of writer are you?

Methodical

Brainstorm

Combination?

STICK TO YOUR STYLE

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Writing The Writing Process

Preparation Time

Composition

Review

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Writing Preparation Time

Planning

What is your purpose for writing?

Informing

Requesting

Persuading

Thanking

Research & compiling information

Reliable sources?

Maintain list of sources

Analysis – reasoning

Reflection

Outline structure

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Writing

Composition Drafting the idea

Revising the structure

BLUF: Bottom Line Up Front

KNOW YOUR AUDIENCE

Level of expertise

Role and level in the organization

When in doubt, simplicity counts

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Writing Review

Revising

Reorganizing

Editing

Proofreading

Take a break before proofreading

Finalizing

Font selection, document size, margins, etc.

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Writing - Emails

___% of CFOs surveyed (2,100) start their day by checking emails

E-mail etiquette

Keep it short & sweet

Subject lines are Headlines

Send one email per main topic

Helps in getting faster responses

Keeps thoughts/topics more organized

If a response is required, be specific about what is required in the response

Use speel chek

Internal emails: can be less formal, but assume they could be shared with individuals outside the firm

Avoid using slang

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Writing - Emails Time Management Ninja: Top 10 Bad

Emails Being Sent at Your Company The One to Everyone: “REPLY ALL”

The Broadcast: Usually from senior leadership, 4-5 paragraphs, could be 1 sentence

The Paper Push: “It’s not my job”, delegation

The Look Busy: “Hey, I’m working! Really.”

The Typo Email: You need a decoder wheel to read it. Often sent from smartphones.

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Writing - Emails Time Management Ninja (con’t)

The Email Novel: If you’re re-writing Moby Dick, put it in an attachment

The Flame Mail: Writing something you’d never say in person

The Signature Email: Signatures containing more information than the email (quotes, propaganda, disclaimers, etc.)

The Large Attachment: The 20MB file that doesn’t reach half your intended recipients. And then you resend. Four times.

The Email Virus

BONUS: The One That Should Have Been BCC: When you don’t want people “Replying All”

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Writing - Emails Important Notes for Emails:

BE CAREFUL of forwarding

UPDATE distribution lists

Internal & External

Who has administrative rights to distribution lists?

If angry, do NOT send an email

If you want to write a draft, do NOT address to anyone until you’re ready to send

Assume EVERYONE will read your email (even those you don’t send it to)

Wait at least 24 hours to send

If topic must be addressed sooner, call or speak to the individual(s)

Follow-up with email summarizing what was discussed on the call or in the meeting

Organize and SAVE your emails

FINAL NOTE: if it’s URGENT, pick up the phone!

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Writing – Emails & Smartphones Using smartphones to write/respond to emails

Signature line: “Please pardon any typos…” or “Sent from my _____”

Most people understand the occasional typo when sending an email from a cell phone

BUT repeated errors can make emails more difficult to read

KNOW who is on the email

DANGER: Autocorrect

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Writing – Smartphones Texting

Avoid “shorthand”

How r u 2day? Im gr8!

Autocorrect

KNOW the technology:

iPhones: replying to a text message will reply to ALL on that message (newest models can turn off group messaging, but there have been glitches)

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Presentations Large images and text don’t mix

Flow charts should flow

Color schemes: stick to 2 or 3 main shades

More complicated charts, graphs & tables ≠ better presentation

More clipart ≠ better presentation

More animation ≠ better presentation

Lengthy bullet points & endless “summaries”

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*List adapted from “The World’s Worst PowerPoint Presentations” by Sarah Purewal, PCWorld

Presentations

Large images and text don’t mix

Even if you change the color scheme, like the font color, you can run into issues with changes with the coloring within the image.

Changing font colors mid-slide may not rectify the issue.

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Presentations Flow charts should flow (and be self-explanatory)

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Presentations

Color schemes

Stick to 2-3 main color shades (even if you’re selling tie-dye t-shirts)

Use a corporate template (if available) and DON’T deviate from the template when dealing with clients

Use a basic Microsoft template if corporate template unavailable

Easier to view presentation

Easier for others to open the presentation on their own PCs/laptops

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PresentationsBUT: avoid the black and white only “template”

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Presentations More complicated charts, graphs & tables ≠ better

presentation

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Presentations More clipart ≠ better presentation

Only use visuals that communicate the respective point or tie-in to the presentation

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Presentations More animation ≠ better presentation

Using minimal animation, like fade-ins, can be useful to keep the audience from jumping ahead

BUT when you have too much animation, your message can be lost

If you rely on animation to make a point, the message will be lost on printed slides

You may also end up spending more time setting the right animation than actually writing and researching the presentation

How many minutes did I spend on this one slide?

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Presentations Lengthy bullet points

Bullet points should normally be kept to one line, two lines max, because when you extend the bullet point beyond two lines it ceases to become a “bullet point” and instead becomes an entire paragraph; often a run-on paragraph at that.

Keep bullet points succinct

Use sub-points if needed

Ensure bullet points can “stand on their own” if reviewed by an outsider

Lengthy bullet points tend to create a situation where the audience may stop listening to the speaker entirely and just start reading ahead. Remember, we are able to process up to 400 words per minute, whereas we typically speak at 125 words per minute. Hence, you read ahead because you are mentally able to process it more quickly than I can go through each point. I bet many of you are reading this right now, whereas I’m probably not even past the first bullet on this slide.

Finally, now that you’ve finished reading this entire slide (and I’m still on point two about keeping bullets succinct), I bet some of you will start doodling on any notepaper you may have in front of you. You’ve already read the slide, so you’re anxious for me to click to the next one so you can read ahead again.

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Presentations

Additional presentation tips Does the material flow?

Is the material logical?

Does the material lead the audience?

Does your presentation “stand on its own”?

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Social Media

The benefits of social media are indisputable:

Product marketing

Branding

Customer relations

Human resources

BUT, there are tremendous risks associated with this communication forum:

Leaking sensitive information

Miscommunication going viral

Disgruntled employees

Legal/compliance discovery

Customer relations

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Social Media Leaking sensitive information

Sales rep: “Just landed my biggest deal with ABC Corp, $5 million sale!”

Personal sites (Facebook): “My wife may be laid off, her company is really have financial issues.”

Examples

2010: 10 British defense personnel disciplined for leaking sensitive information on social networking sites.

2012: 4 Indian naval officers disciplined for leaking the location of ships online.

Who may be seeking information on your company?

Who owns the information on your social media sites?

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Social Media

Customer/Public Relations

Deepwater Horizon Oil Spill (BP)

Nearly 1 month after the spill, BP finally began a social media campaign to combat bad press:

Purchased key words like “oil spill” on Google, Yahoo, Bing, etc.

Published videos of employees working on a cleanbeach

What could they have done?

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Social Media Customer/Public Relations

Kenneth Cole

Arab Spring uprisings in Cairo

Tweet: “Millions are in uproar in #Cairo. Rumor is they heard our spring collection is now online.”

CEO issued apology, tweet removed, but damage was done

What could they have done?

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Social Media Customer/Public Relations

What about your employees?

October 2012: 30-year old Massachusetts women posts an “ironic” photo of herself shouting and making an indecent gesture towards Arlington National Cemetery on Facebook.

Picture goes viral

Facebook lists where she works (she was on a work-related trip to Washington, D.C.)

After 2-3 weeks of complaints and a public relations backlash, her employer places her on unpaid leave

Further backlash comes against the employer for the delayed response and “weak” reaction

Over a month later, the employee is terminated

What could the employer have done?

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Social Media Other pitfalls for businesses

Spreading resources too thin: platform overload

Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn, YouTube, Pinterest, blogs, newsletters/emails

What do your customers value?

Indulging in self-promotion

Communication with consumers should be two-way

Use the forum to present information, NOT to sell a product/service

Assigning social media responsibilities to a new employee or intern

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Social Media What is your company’s policy on social media?

Who can post to the sites?

Who has administrative access?

What is the standard operating procedure (SOP) if something offensive is posted?

What if one of your employees or coworkers posts something offensive on their personal site?

In general, how is social media used?

Marketing/outreach to potential customers?

Information feed to current customers?

Tool for feedback from customers?

REMEMBER: Social Media is FOREVER

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Agenda

Why study effective communication & writing?

Best Practices

Listening

Writing

Emails (and smartphones)

Presentations

Social Media

Employee Engagement Trends – Appendix A

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Conclusion

Become a better LISTENER: what are your customers, employees, etc. really saying?

Assume every communication will be read, heard, etc. by people outside your organization.

Social media can be a great marketing and communication tool, but there are very common and severe pitfalls.

STICK TO YOUR STYLE

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Thank you! Any questions can be relayed to:

Matt Ryan

(412) 215-2983 (cell)

[email protected]

Frank Ryan

(717) 891-2707 (cell)

[email protected]

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