HAIKU

POEM

Poem

Freedom

Freedom from pain, Freedom from hunger

Freedom to learn, freedom to teach

Freedom to laugh and so can you cry

Freedom from freedom

My messages is important because freedom is a very important concept in life, and in my poem, I'm trying to deliver that messages to the audience, I'm trying to deliver the idea of freedom, by showing what freedom can be capable of, in this poem I used repetition in parts like “ freedom from pain, freedom from hunger”, and I used diction in parts like “freedom from freedom” I think I’m successfully delivering my message, because the poem is very interesting to read, and it means something.

DIAMANTE

Diamante

Freedom

u n c h a i n e d h o p e f u l

h o p i n g p r o t e c t i n g l i m i t i n g

l i m i t s e n d s a f t e r m a t h w i l l

K i l l i n g r e g r e t t i n g t e r r o r i z i n g

D e a t h r e g r e t

W a r

In this poem, im trying to compare the differences between freedom and war, I used word choice, for the whole poem, I had the rights, to choose related words, I came out with words like : “unchained, regret, killing, protecting…”. I know this poem would success fully deliver a message, because little kids don’t like long poems, they would like short, and more “shaped” poem. I think it is important because to express freedom in different ways, it would be more effective

LIMERICK

limerick

There was a young wild bird

Who always whistle of the unheard

Freedom whistles but no one listened

more he tried more it blurred

His whistles were louds and clear

In this poem I’m trying to say that, freedom is not perfect, and that the concept of

freedom, is very had to apply, I used contrast in such parts like “who always whistles of the unheard” and comparison when I compare a human trying to fight for freedom

to a bird. I think my poem is successfully delivering the message, because limericks has a pretty neat rhyme scheme, I think it is important because freedom is very

important in life, and it is needed in life.

ABC POEM

ABC poem

Although it is not perfect

But it is unchained and hopeful

Continue the path, the path of freedom

Do not give up

Even when its hard

Freedom will always be in bound

I this poem I'm trying to explain that, fighting for freedom is hard, and freedom is not completely all good, similar ideas to the earlier limerick poem, in this I used contrast in parts like “ unchained; hopeful” I think my message is successfully delivered because the form of poem I choose, is very different from other types, and it would be fun to read.

It is very important, because I'm trying to express freedom in a more fun way

FOUND POEM

Found poem

Change will not come

if we wait

for some other person

or some other time.

We are the ones

we've been waiting for.

We are the change

we seek.

In this poem im trying to express that freedom can change, I used enjambment. I emphasize some words, I know it is successfully delivering the messages

because it is short, and fun to read, I think my message is important because it is quoted out from an actual speech.

“Rosenberg, Simon. ""We Are the Ones We've Been Waiting For"" NDN. Ndn.org, 2 July 2008. Web. 01 Apr. 2013.”