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    E P O R T I N G A N D C O M M U N I C A T I O N O F R E S E A R C H F I N D I N G S

    Research Report

    The purpose writing research report is to document the research findings, to share the results with other interested

    groups, and apply the results in practice.

    It is a challenging job and requires imagination, creativity, and resourcefulness. The research report aims at telling

    the readers the problem identified, investigated and methods adopted, the results found and the conclusion

    reached.

    The highest standard of correct usage of word and sentences is expected.

    The outcome of the study should be presented in a way that the consumer should understand the findings.

    The results can be presented through written word or through various kinds of pictorial displays.

    Graphs and tables are the two common methods of communicating results.

    Graphs are generally used to describe the data in question, and tables are used to summarize the findings

    (Brockopp &Hastings-Tolsma, 2003).

    Criteria for evaluating the effectiveness of both graphs and tables include the clarity of the presentation, its

    conciseness, and its adequacy in conveying appropriate information (Wilson, 1987, p.295).

    Bar graph, histogram, frequency polygon, pie diagram, pictorial charts are the common methods of displaying

    results diagrammatically.

    Tables are generally used to summarize the meaningful results of a study.

    They should be numbered in sequence and are referred with in the text.

    Tables should be accompanied by factual, precise description of their meaning.

    Scientific writing is the presentation of a set of reasons in support of a thesis, or proposition.

    The format suggested by the Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association, can be consulted for

    detailed matters of style (web address). A scientific report requires the same attention to good writing as does any other form of written persuasion.

    Key concepts are clarity, brevity, and felicity. Authors should be careful to avoid sexism and ethnic bias .

    References are cited in the text by author name and date of publication.

    Harvard style and Vancouver style are the commonly used methods of writing references.

    The reference list contains an entry for each work cited in the text, and no others.

    The parts of a paper are:

    1. title,

    2. authors and their affiliations,

    3. abstract,

    4. introduction,

    5. method,

    6. results,

    7. discussion,

    8. references,

    9. footnotes,

    10. tables,

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    11. figure captions, and

    12. figures.

    The title should convey the main idea of the paper in a few words.

    The authors of the paper are listed in the order of the importance of their contributions.

    The abstract is a brief summary of the paper and includes elements from the introduction, method, results, and

    discussion sections.

    The introduction states the general problem the paper deals with, discusses the relevant literature, and states what

    the paper will contribute to the understanding of the problem.

    The method section tells what you did in the experiment in such a way that another person can evaluate the

    validity of the conclusions of the study and can repeat it in all essentials.

    The method section describes the subjects, apparatus, design, and procedure.

    The results section describes the results and their statistical analysis.

    Graphs and tables are described here.

    The discussion section interprets the results and relates them to the literature.

    It states the contributions that the study makes to the understanding of the problem posed in the introduction, and

    it deals with any weakness in the data or any qualifications of the conclusions.

    C o m m u n i c a t i n g R e s e a r c h R e s u l t s

    Scientific communication takes place in many ways, including archival publication in scholarly journals and informal

    communication among groups of scientists, known as invisible colleges.

    Research outcome needs to be shared with other professionals, regardless of the studys outcome.

    The investigator can present the findings in an oral format (conference presentations) or written format (journals or

    scientific publications).

    Nursing is a relatively a new profession and the body of knowledge needs to be developed.

    Publication of research findings in international journals makes the findings of the study available to professionals

    of other countries.

    The investigator should decide the appropriate format for presenting the findings.

    The steps in the publication process include choosing the journal, submitting the final manuscript along with a

    cover letter, revising the paper to account for reviewers comments, resubmitting the paper, reviewing the

    copyedited manuscript and reading the page proofs.

    Oral presentations include most of the elements of the written paper in specified format.

    Practicing the talk before a sympathetic audience, preparing good visual aids, and speaking from an outline rather

    than reading the paper directly are keys to a good presentation.Poster presentations are an increasingly popular

    form of communicating results at scientific meetings.

    The various parts of the paper are placed on a vertical surface in such a way that they can be read from a distance

    of several feet.

    The author remains near the poster to discuss the results with passersby.

    R e s e a r c h U t i l i z a t i o n

    Nursing research contribute positively to the health care system.

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    Research utilization is the process of transferring research knowledge into practice, thus facilitating an innovative

    change in practice or the verification of existing practice protocols.

    Knowledge about published materials and what other people have tried is vital when exploring solutions to a

    problem.

    To enhance the integration of research and practice, nurses must have an organizational environment to in which

    enquiry and critical thinking are valued.

    Research utilization is helps in improving nursing practice by providing process by answers to clinical questions,

    evaluating effectiveness of the nursing actins, testing theories relevant to nursing practice and expanding nursing

    knowledge (Lanuza,1999)

    Chapter 2: Scientific Paper Writing /Written Communication

    Introduction

    Whether writing a report, scientific literature review, or preparing a manuscript for

    publication in a major scientific journal, the quality of the final product is a reflection of

    the amount of work put into its preparation. In addition to our scientific background

    and creative abilities, a basic knowledge of the mechanics of scientific paper writing

    is essential.

    An overall rule of thumb is to remember the "3 C's": Conciseness, Completeness

    and Clarity. Each term is related to the others. For example, if one is concise, one is

    also clear. Clarity brings about understanding, and a total understanding is enhanced

    by the completeness of the discussion.

    Generally, a good paper answers the following questions:

    1. WHY? Why was the research undertaken? Why is it important?

    2. HOW? How was the "why" answered? How was the research carried out?

    3. WHAT? What was found? What questions were answered? What questions or

    problems remain to be answered?

    This provides a working format around which the finished product is constructed. The

    actual section titles and content will vary depending on the specific type of the paper

    you are preparing. This chapter will give you step-by-step guidance on the basics of

    communicating your research findings in writing with particular emphasis to scientific

    paper writing for the purpose of publication. The basic principles, however, are

    applicable to writing any research reports not intended for publication. This chapter

    will also discuss important tips related to publishing your work.

    Aim

    The main purpose of this chapter is to enable health care professionals to

    communicate their research findings in writing more effectively.

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    Learning Objectives

    By the end of this module, the trainee should:

    Be able to define a scientific paper

    Understand the basic sections of a scientific paper.

    Learn the purpose and organization of the various sections and the elements that

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    comprise them.

    Understand principles and styles of writing in public health and epidemiology.

    Appreciate the importance of quality in writing a scientific paper.

    Learn about effective strategies for dealing with requests of journal editors and

    reviewers /assessors.

    Be aware of ethics in publication

    Be aware of authorship responsibilities

    Be aware of the publication process

    Content

    2.1. What is a Scientific Paper?

    A scientific paper is a written and published report describing original research

    results. The format of a scientific paper has been defined by centuries of developing

    tradition, editorial practice, scientific ethics and the interplay with printing and

    publishing services. The authors purpose is to inform an audience or others

    [scientists] about an important issue and to document the particular approach they

    used to investigate that issue. Scientific papers should be reviewed by scientific

    peers and published in a primary journal. In other words, a scientific publication is: i)

    the first publication of original research results, ii) in a form whereby others can

    repeat the experiments and test the conclusions, iii) in a peer reviewed publication (a

    journal or other source document) which is readily available within the scientific

    community.

    Chapter 3: Oral Communication /Presentation Techniques

    Introduction

    Effective oral communication is an important but often overlooked and under

    practiced skill in scientific and academic endeavours. There are very few people

    having a natural talent for delivering outstanding presentations. On the other hand,

    foresight, hard work, and practice can carry most of the rest of us into the very good

    level of presentation skills. The purpose of this chapter is to provide basic strategies

    for presenting technical and scientific information in an oral presentation. This

    chapter is written as an introductory guide and a general reference for use when

    preparing a presentation. It contains useful tips and principles which can be applied

    whenever you are faced with making a public presentation.

    Aim

    The main purpose of this chapter is to enable health care professionals to orally

    communicate their research findings more effectively.

    Content

    The ability to make a good presentation is as crucial as the ability to write effectively,

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    as it is one of the commonest ways of disseminating your research findings to a

    variety of audiences. Clear organization is vital to effective speaking to lead

    listeners mentally from where they are at the beginning of the presentation to where

    they are supposed to be at the end. The following steps will provide you tips that help

    you deliver good presentation.

    3.1 Initial planning

    This is where you begin to tailor the talk to the situation, and for that reason this

    stage is very important for successful oral presentation. If the environment and

    audience are unfamiliar to you, this is a critical stage. It is important to begin this

    stage early the more lead time there is, the more time there will be to think about

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    good approaches to the topic and the more interesting and substantial the

    presentation will be.

    3. Preparation

    After a clear idea is obtained on the purpose of the presentation and the audience,

    the next step is to start preparing what needs to be said and how. Unlike a

    conversation or a written document, a presentation is a one-shot attempt to make a

    point. For this reason, it is essential that presentations are well constructed and tidy,

    and that points be presented to the audience both in a logical sequence and

    unambiguously. This all takes a fair amount of time of preparation. So, start early!

    Determining the purpose of your presentation

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    The purpose of the presentation must be conceived in terms of the audiences

    perspective. The purpose need to be clearly evident at the beginning of the

    presentation. By knowing what they will be hearing from the beginning of the

    presentation, the audience can more easily focus their attention on the content

    presented and see connections between parts of the presentation.

    Main purposes of a presentation

    To instruct

    To inform/educate

    To persuade

    3.2 Organizing the presentation

    The primary purpose of a presentation is to provide information which the audience

    will then remember at a later date. Detailed referencing of material or extensive

    review of data wont be remembered and becomes boring. A question that is often

    asked at this stage is Is this enough material for the presentation? It is important to

    develop a realistic view of how much material is appropriate, and the ability to be

    selective and eliminate non-essential material. These abilities are important factors

    in determining the quality of the presentation.

    Generally, oral presentations have an introduction that ends with the main point and

    a preview of the rest of the presentation, a main body, and a conclusion. These

    sections of a presentation need to fit together, and be linked clearly. A poorly

    structured talk will confuse and frustrate the audience

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    Writing a research report

    A research report can be based on practical work, research by reading or a study of an organisation or

    industrial/workplace situation.

    1.Preparing

    Identify the purpose/the aims of the research/research question.

    Identify the audience. lecturer/supervisor/company/organization management/staff. The amount of background

    included will vary depending on the knowledge of the audience.

    2. Collecting and organising information

    There are two main sources of information depending on the research task:

    1. Reading theory and other research

    2. Research experiments, data collection

    questionnaires, surveys, observation, interviews.

    Organise and collate the information in a logical order. Make sure you record the bibliographic information of your

    reading as you go along.

    See Quick Tips on mind mapping techniques.

    3. Planning

    Before writing the report, prepare a detailed plan in outline form.

    Consider the following:

    Logical organisation

    Information in a report must be organized logically. Communicate the main ideas followed by supporting details and

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    examples. Start with the more important or significant information and move on to the least important information.

    Headings

    Use headings and suitable sub headings to clearly show the different sections. In longer reports the sections should

    be numbered.

    4. Writing the report

    1. Draft the report from your detailed plan.

    2. Do not worry too much about the final form and language, but rather on presenting the ideas

    coherently and logically.

    3. Redraft and edit. Check that sections contain the required information and use suitable headings,

    check ideas flow in a logical order and remove any unnecessary information.

    4. Write in an academic style and tone.

    Use a formal objective style.

    Generally avoid personal pronouns; however, some reports based on your own field

    experience or work placement can be reflective the first person can be used. For example, I

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    Section Purpose

    Title page Title of report

    Student name/student number

    Course/subject

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    Date due

    Table of contents Shows the sections of the report

    Executive summary Gives a summary of the whole report

    Outlines -purpose, research method, findings, main conclusions and

    recommendations

    Mainly past tense

    Written last

    Introduction Outlines context, background and purpose

    Defines terms and sets limits of the research

    The reader/audience can easily identify what, how, why

    (Mainly uses past tense and can be written later although presented first)

    Methodology Explains how research was done and outlines how the data was collected

    Results/Findings

    may be combined

    Presents findings of the research

    Facts only - no interpretation

    Uses graphic form (eg. tables & graphs)

    Discussion Presents an interpretation and evaluation of the results.

    Analyses results - draws together different aspects of the findings, findings

    of other studies and refers to literature

    Conclusion

    may be combined

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    Brief statement of what was found

    Recommendations Suggest suitable changes/solutions

    Appendix Attachments of additional information (eg. surveys, questionnaires, glossary etc)

    References All references used

    Sections of a research report

    The table below summarises the general headings often used in research or laboratory reports. Check with your lecturer on

    the headings required for your assignments.

    NB Further headings and subheadings are content based and are particular to the individual report.

    Writing a research report

    or Abstract

    purposes of writing research report

    Reports communicate information which has been compiled as a

    result of research and analysis of data and of issues. Reports cancover a wide range of topics, but usually focus on transmitting

    information with a clear purpose, to a specific audience. Good

    reports are documents that are accurate, objective and complete.They should also be well-written, clearly structured and

    expressed in a way that holds the reader's attention and meetstheir expectations. The true value of the research may be

    assessed through a report since the written report may be the

    "only tangible product of hundreds of hours of work. Rightly orwrongly, the quality and worth of that work are judged by the

    quality of the written report - its clarity, organization andcontent" (Blake & Bly, 1993: 119). Often reports are structured in

    a way that reflects the information finding process and the writing

    up of the findings: that is, summary of the contents, introductionor background, methods, results, discussion, conclusion and/or

    recommendations. The inclusion of recommendations is onereason why reports are a common form of writing in industry, as

    the informed recommendations are useful for decision making.

    The scope and style of reports varies widely. It depends on threekey factors: the report's intended audience, the report's purpose

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    and the type of information to be communicated; for example,technical reports communicate technical information, so the

    degree of technicality in the report will depend on the reader'sfamiliarity and understanding of technical concepts.

    At university, you may be required to write several different typesof reports.

    Technical and Business disciplines with an applied focus suchas Engineering, Information Technology, Commerce,

    Accounting and Finance, will set report writing assignmentsthat simulate the process of report writing in industry.

    Assignments are set in the form of a problem or a case study.The students research the problem, and present the results of

    the research in a report format to an imaginary client.

    Field reports are common in disciplines such as Law, IndustrialRelations, Psychology, Nursing, History and Education. These

    types of reports require the student to analyse his or her

    observations of phenomena or events in the real world in lightof theories studied in the course. Examples of field reports are

    a Court observation report, an observation report of a child ora patient for Developmental psychology or Nursing, a History

    site report, and a teaching observation report for Education.

    Scientific reports (also called laboratory reports) are another

    kind of report. They are common in all the Sciences and SocialSciences. These reports use a standard scientific report format

    describing methods, results and conclusions to report upon anempirical investigation. A more detailed and extensive type of

    this report is the research project report for fourth yearhonours students or research students involved in

    postgraduate studies.

    Methods

    Of writing research report

    - you can either use a qualitative or a quantitative method, depending on your subject and personalpreference.

    - it is the method that you used in your research.QUALITATIVE METHOD: The aim is a complete and detailed description of what you have

    observed. Your data will be shown in pictures, words and/or objects. It is a subjectivemethod of research due to the researcher's interpretation of events.

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    QUANTITATIVE METHOD: The aim is to classify features, to count them, and to constructstatistics in an attempt to explain your observations. Your data will be shown in the form of

    numbers and/or statistics.So depending on either you are using qualitative or quantitative methods for your research

    will change your research method.Your research method will change depending on which method you use, but it will always be

    an explanation of the organized, systematic way (the method) that you used to find theanswer (conclusion) to your question (the aim), but it will be relevant to the subject you arelearning.

    It's basically how you did your research.

    -Sorry that it's a lot to read, but it's hard to explain without knowing your level of researchand what subject it has to do with, so I tried to explain it in a couple of different ways... But

    I hope that helped.

    Apa style of writing research report

    Running head: SAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 1

    Sample APA Paper for Students Interested in Learning APA Style6th Edition

    Jeffrey H. Kahn

    Illinois State University

    Author Note

    Jeffrey H. Kahn, Department of Psychology, Illinois State

    University.

    Correspondence concerning this sample paper should be

    addressed to Jeffrey H. Kahn,

    Department of Psychology, Illinois State University, Campus Box

    4620, Normal, Illinois

    61790-4620. E-mail: [email protected] FOR STUDENTS 2

    Abstract

    The abstract should be a single paragraph in block format

    (without paragraph indentation), and

    the appropriate length depends on the journal to which you aresubmitting, but they are typically

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    between 150 and 200 words. (Students should consult theirinstructor for the recommended

    length of the abstract.) Section 2.04 of the APA manual

    (American Psychological Association

    [APA], 2010) has additional information about the abstract. The

    abstract is important because

    many journal readers first read the abstract to determine if theentire article is worth reading. The

    abstract should describe all four parts of an empirical paper (i.e.,

    Introduction, Method, Results,

    and Discussion). Consider writing one or two sentences

    summarizing each part of a paper, and

    youll have a nice abstract.SAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 3

    Sample APA Paper for Students Interested in Learning APA Style

    Before getting started you will notice some things about this

    paper. First, everything is

    double-spaced. Second, margins are 1-inch wide on all sides.

    Third, there are several headings

    used throughout to separate different parts of the paper; some of

    the headings are in bold. Fourth,

    there is exactly one space after each punctuation mark (except

    for periods at the end of a

    sentence, after which there are two spaces). Fifth, the upper leftof each page has a running head

    in all capital letters, and the upper right has the page number.Try to pay attention to all of these

    details as you look through this paper.

    Now that those details are out of the way, you should know that

    this first part of the paper

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    is called the Introduction section, yet it does not have aheading that actually says

    Introduction. Instead, the title of the paper is typed at the top

    of the first page (be sure to center

    the title, but do not put it in bold). In this section you would often

    start with a topic paragraph

    that introduces the problem under study. The importance of thetopic should be pretty clear from

    the first paragraph or two of the Introduction. Section 2.05 of the

    APA manual (APA, 2010) will

    help give you some ideas about how to write this.

    The bulk of the Introduction section is background literature on

    the topic. Here a

    literature review is often very helpful to provide a theoretical orempirical basis for the research.

    Try to provide the reader with enough information on the topic tobe able to conclude that the

    research is important and that the hypotheses are reasonable.Any prior work on the topic would

    be useful to include here, although prior work that is mostdirectly related to the hypotheses

    would be of greatest value.SAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 4

    Remember to cite your sources often in the Introduction andthroughout the manuscript.

    Articles and books are cited the same way in the text, yet theyappear different on the References

    page. For example, an article by Cronbach and Meehl (1955) and

    a book by Bandura (1986) are

    written with the authors names and the year of the publication inparentheses. However, if you

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    look on the References page they look a little different.Remember that APA style does not use

    footnotes or anything like that for citations. Two other things

    about citations are important. When

    a citation is written inside parentheses (e.g., Cronbach & Meehl,

    1959), an ampersand is used

    between authors names instead of the word and. Second, whenciting an authors work using

    quotations, be sure to include a page number. For example,

    Rogers (1961) once wrote that two

    important elements of a helping relationship are genuineness

    and transparency (p. 37). Notice

    that the page number is included here. Unless a direct quote istaken from a source, the page

    number is not included.

    The last section of the Introduction states the purpose of theresearch. The purpose can

    usually be summarized in a few sentences. Hypotheses are alsoincluded here at the end of this

    section. State your hypotheses as predictions (e.g., I predictedthat...), and try to avoid using

    passive tense (e.g., It was predicted that...). You will notice

    that hypotheses are written in past

    tense because you are describing a study you have finished.

    Method

    The Method section is the second of four main parts of anempirical paper (see Section

    2.06 of the APA [2010] manual). (Be aware that some papers are

    reviews of the literature and

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    therefore would not have a separate Method section.) There aretypically three or four majorSAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 5

    subsections in the Method although there can be more. These

    subsections are separated by

    headings which are described in sections 3.02 and 3.03 of the

    APA manual (APA, 2010).

    Participants

    This brief section describes the people who participated in your

    study. (They should be

    called participants, not subjects, by the way.) Mention thenumber of participants, the

    percentage of female and male participants, the mean age

    (where mean is abbreviated M), and

    their ethnicity or cultural background. Any other demographicinformation would be appropriate

    here.

    Research Design

    Experimental studies often have a section in the Method

    describing the design of the

    study. Typically the independent variables in the study would bedescribed here. For example, the

    study might involve a 2-by-2 design with one independent

    variable being treatment/control

    conditions and the other independent variable being biological

    sex. It would be helpful to

    describe dependent variables in this subsection as well.

    Measures

    This section describes the tests or instruments used to collect

    data. It would be

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    appropriate to describe any questionnaires that you used. Forexample, if you used the MarloweCrowne Social Desirability

    Scale in your research, you may say that the Marlowe-CrowneSocial

    Desirability Scale (MCSD; Crowne & Marlowe, 1960) comprises 33true-false items that

    measure social desirability. You would also provide the readerwith information regarding the

    MCSD scores reliability and validity. Do this for each and everymeasure used in the study. In

    the event that the purpose of your paper is to develop a new

    questinnaire, you may wish toSAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 6

    describe reliability and validity in the Results section (see below).However, you would only do

    this for a scale-development project.

    Procedure

    This section describes in great detail the data-collection

    procedures. Describe how

    participants were recruited, whether they participated alone or ingroups, how informed consent

    or assent was obtained, what they were asked to do, how they

    were compensated for their

    participation, etc. It is hard to make this section too detailed. Youshould describe the procedure

    in a way that another researcher could conduct the same study

    (i.e., replicate it) just by reading

    about the procedure.

    Results

    The Results section may be the most difficult to write, at leastuntil you get a little

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    practice with reporting statistical analyses. This is the sectionwhere the results of the data

    analyses are presented. Section 2.07 in the APA manual (APA,

    2010) will help a little bit. Its

    often helpful to use tables (see Table 1) to help describe your

    results, especially when you have a

    lot of data to report, such as means and standard deviations.Table 2 provides another example of

    a table, this one describing correlations.

    You may find it helpful to remind the reader of the hypothesisbefore presenting each

    result. It is also a good idea to tell the reader what type of data

    analysis was done (e.g.,

    correlation, ANOVA) before it is presented. State what alpha levelyou adopted; an alpha level of

    .05 is the standard. Although you should be sure not to try tointerpret or explain your results

    here, it is appropriate to state whether or not your hypotheseswere supported. Just dont try toSAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 7

    explain why the hypotheses were or were not supported; thatswhy you have the Discussion

    section.

    Discussion

    The Discussion is the fourth and final section of the paper. This is

    the part where you

    interpret and explain your results. Try to explain why you foundwhat you did in your study. Is it

    what you predicted? If not, why? You may have to think about

    your results in a theoretically

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    meaningful way. Also, how do your findings fit in with previoustheory and literature? Are your

    results consistent or inconsistent with what has been found in the

    past? If they are inconsistent,

    how can you explain this? The explanation and interpretation of

    results will probably be the

    biggest part of the Discussion.

    There are at least two additional parts of the discussion. First,

    include limitations of the

    study. Describe the ways in which the internal or external validityof the study may have been

    compromised. Was the sample biased? Were the measures

    problematic? Think about what you

    would do different next time if you conducted a similar study.Future research ideas are often

    discussed when limitations are discussed.

    Second, describe the implications of your findings to theory and

    practice. Answer the

    question, How does my study add to psychological theory? Also,

    think about practical

    applications of your findings. Perhaps give some additional

    directions for future research. When

    youve done that, you have written a paper in APA style!SAMPLEFOR STUDENTS 8

    References

    American Psychological Association. (2010). Publication manual ofthe American Psychological

    Association (6th ed.). Washington, DC: Author.

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    Bandura, A. (1986). Social foundations of thought and action: Asocial cognitive theory.

    Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice Hall.

    Cronbach, L. J., & Meehl, P. E. (1955). Construct validity inpsychological tests. Psychological

    Bulletin, 52, 281-302. doi:10.1037/h0040957

    Crowne, C. P., & Marlowe, D. (1960). A new scale of socialdesirability independent of

    psychopathology. Journal of Consulting Psychology, 24, 349-354.

    doi:10.1037/h0047358

    Rogers, C. R. (1961). On becoming a person. Boston: HoughtonMifflin. SAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 9

    Table 1

    Sample Table Describing Fake Data

    Variable A Variable B

    M SD M SD

    Men (n = 100) 32.61 8.95 17.08 5.25

    Women (n = 80) 33.02 9.17 16.91 5.13

    Note. These data were totally made up. They are just presented

    to give you an idea about how to

    present information in a table. SAMPLE FOR STUDENTS 10

    Table 2

    Convergent and Discriminant Validity of Depression Scale

    Variable Correlation

    Convergent Validity

    Self-Esteem .44*

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    Hopelessness .51**

    Discriminant Validity

    Social Desirability .11

    Anxiety .22

    *p < .05; **p < .01.

    Referencing using Vancouver style

    About this resource

    Vancouver style

    Part 1: In-text citations

    Part 2: Collating a reference list A sample reference list in Vancouver style

    Further reading

    Printable copy of this resource (69 KB)

    About this resource

    The Vancouver style of referencing is so named because it was first published by the Vancouver Group,

    which expanded and evolved into the International Committee of Medical Journal Editors (ICMJE).

    ICMJE produces and updates their guidelines for publication, which are known as the Uniformrequirements for manuscripts submitted to biomedical journals. These guidelines are available on

    the ICMJE web site. For referencing formats consistent with the Uniform requirements, users are

    directed to the sample reference list in the Vancouver style, which is available on the web site of

    the United States National Library of Medicine (NLM). The Vancouver style is largely based on the style

    NLM uses for its databases.

    The examples of reference list entries provided in this resource are selected from the sample Vancouver

    style reference list on the NML web site, updated August 2009. Many more examples are available at

    the NLM web site.

    You should always check your unit guide and/or with academic staff (unit chair, lecturer or

    tutor) to make sure this is the correct style for your unit.

    Your assignment will present facts and conclusions based on those facts. It is necessary to reference the

    sources of your information. This establishes the authority of your work and acknowledges the

    researchers and writers you have drawn on in your paper.

    http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#about_this_resource_5_1http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#vancouver_style_5_3http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#part_1:_in-text_citations_5_5http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#part_2:_collating_a_reference_list_5_7http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#a_sample_reference_list_in_vancouver_style_5_14http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#further_reading_5_16http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/assets/resources/study-support/study-skills/vancouver.pdfhttp://www.icmje.org/http://www.icmje.org/http://www.nlm.nih.gov/bsd/uniform_requirements.htmlhttp://www.nlm.nih.gov/bsd/uniform_requirements.htmlhttp://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#about_this_resource_5_1http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#vancouver_style_5_3http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#part_1:_in-text_citations_5_5http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#part_2:_collating_a_reference_list_5_7http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#a_sample_reference_list_in_vancouver_style_5_14http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/study-support/study-skills/handouts/vancouver.php#further_reading_5_16http://www.deakin.edu.au/current-students/assets/resources/study-support/study-skills/vancouver.pdfhttp://www.icmje.org/http://www.nlm.nih.gov/bsd/uniform_requirements.htmlhttp://www.nlm.nih.gov/bsd/uniform_requirements.html
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    You must reference allmaterial you use from allsources and acknowledge your sources in the body of

    your paper each time you use a fact, a conclusion, an idea or a finding from someone's work.

    It is necessary to cite your sources each time you:

    reproduce an author's exact words (quote), that is, copy word for word directly from a text use you own wording (summarise or paraphrase) to explain or discuss what someone has said.

    If you copy an entire table, chart, diagram or graph or if you take only some of the data contained in

    such sources, you must provide a reference.

    Sources such as journals, books, encyclopedias, computer programs and software, information from the

    internet, reports, newspapers, interviews, radio and television must be cited in the body of your paper

    and detailed in a reference list at the end. Information from Deakin study guides and readers must also

    be acknowledged.

    Vancouver style

    The Vancouver style consists of the following elements:

    (1) citations in the body of the paper, using consecutive numbers in parentheses. Note that some

    journals use superscript (raised) numbers rather than numbers in parentheses.

    (2) a numbered reference list at the end of the paper giving the details of each source referred to.

    Part 1 of this resource deals with citing sources in the body of the paper.

    Part 2 deals with how to present reference entries for some of the common types of sources that

    students are likely to use in their assignments.

    Part 1: In-text citations

    In-text citations are references provided in the body of a paper to each work cited - books, journal

    articles, reports, material from the internet and the like. Consecutive numbers (either in parentheses or

    superscript) are used for the sources cited.

    The same number is used for a source throughout a paper. This number is determined by the firstcitation of the source. So, for example, if a work is the fourth source cited in a paper, it will be referred

    to as (4) or by the superscript number 4 throughout that paper.

    When two or more references appear at the same point in the text, the relevant numbers are separated

    by commas, e.g. (4, 7) or 4,7 if using superscript. Three or more consecutive citations are joined by a

    hyphen, e.g. (4-7) or4-7.

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    Reference numbers are usually placed outside full stops and commas, but journals vary in their practice.

    The example that follows demonstrates the use of in-text citations. It is from the Uniform requirements

    for manuscripts submitted to biomedical journals, updated April 2010.

    An "author" is generally considered to be someone who has made substantive intellectual contributions

    to a published study, and biomedical authorship continues to have important academic, social, and

    financial implications.(1) ... In the past, readers were rarely provided with information about

    contributions to studies from those listed as authors and in acknowledgments.(2) Some journals now

    request...

    Part 2: Collating a reference list

    An important purpose of the reference list is to identify the sources cited in the paper so that readers

    can locate them. The reference list should appear at the end of the paper and provide the full

    bibliographic information about the sources cited. The list is arranged in numerical order, so readers cango from the number in the body of the paper to the full details of the source.

    Initials follow the family names of authors and editors, with no space or full stops between the

    initials of an author, e.g. Halpern SD, Ubel PA, Caplan AL.

    Commas are used to separate each author's name. Note that 'and' is not used to separate thelast two names.

    Each entry is set flush against the left margin, and the number is followed by a full stop, as in

    the examples that follow.

    Journal article

    The following information is included for journal articles: author(s), article title, abbreviated journal title,

    year, month (if applicable), day (if applicable), volume number, issue number (if applicable), page

    numbers.

    Minimal capitalisation is used for the article title, i.e. only the first word and words that normally

    would begin with a capital letter are capitalised.

    Full stops are used after the last author's initials, after the article title, after the abbreviatedjournal title and at the end of the entry.

    The date is followed by a semicolon (with no space after it) and the volume number or issue

    number is followed by a colon (with no space after it).

    Journal titles should be abbreviated. For the accepted abbreviations, consult the NML web site

    No punctuation is used in journal abbreviations, except a full stop at the end.

    Months are abbreviated to the first three letters.

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    The page range is provided, i.e. the first and last page numbers of articles. The number of digits

    in the second part of the page range is limited to those needed for clarity, without repeatingdigits unnecessarily, e.g. 284-7 not 284-287.

    One to six authors

    For a journal article written by six or fewer authors, provide the names of all the authors.

    Example:

    1. Halpern SD, Ubel PA, Caplan AL. Solid-organ transplantation in HIV-infected patients. N Engl J Med.

    2002 Jul 25;347(4):284-7.

    Note: no 'and' separates the last two names.

    Continuous pagination

    Many medical journals use continuous pagination, i.e. each issue does not begin at page 1, but the

    sequence of page numbers continues through all the issues that make up a volume. In journals that use

    continuous pagination, page numbers are sufficient to indicate the location of articles in volumes.

    As an option, if a journal carries continuous pagination throughout a volume, the month and issue

    number may be omitted, as follows.

    Example:

    1. Halpern SD, Ubel PA, Caplan AL. Solid-organ transplantation in HIV-infected patients. N Engl J Med.

    2002;347:284-7.

    More than six authors

    For a journal article written by more than six authors, list the first six authors followed by the phrase 'et

    al' meaning 'and others'.

    Example:

    2. Rose ME, Huerbin MB, Melick J, Marion DW, Palmer AM, Schiding JK, et al. Regulation of interstitial

    excitatory amino acid concentrations after cortical contusion injury. Brain Res. 2002;935(1-2):40-6.

    Optional addition of a database's unique identifier

    If a database's unique identifier is provided, it can be added at the end of the reference list entry.

    Example:

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    1. Halpern SD, Ubel PA, Caplan AL. Solid-organ transplantation in HIV-infected patients. N Engl J Med.

    2002 Jul 25;347(4):284-7. PubMed PMID: 12140307.

    Organisation as author

    For a journal article that lists an organisation (rather than an individual) as an author, provide the nameof the organisation in the author position.

    Example:

    3. Diabetes Prevention Program Research Group. Hypertension, insulin, and proinsulin in participants

    with impaired glucose tolerance. Hypertension. 2002;40(5):679-86.

    Book

    When listing a book in a reference list, note the following points:

    As for a journal article, for a book written by more than six authors, the names of the first sixare provided, followed by the phrase 'et al'.

    If the author is an organisation, the organisation name is provided in the author position, as for

    a journal article.

    Book titles, like journal article titles, use minimal capitalisation.

    Edition number is provided only for second (or later) editions.

    Full stops are used after the last author's initials, after the book title, after the edition number (if

    provided) and at the end of the entry.

    The city of publication is followed by a colon (with a space after it) and the publisher is followedby a semicolon (with a space after it).

    A relatively unknown city/place of publication is followed by state or country abbreviation inparentheses, e.g. White Plains (NY).

    Personal author(s)

    The following information is included, in the following order: author(s), book title, edition number (if not

    the first), city, publisher, year.

    Example:

    4. Murray PR, Rosenthal KS, Kobayashi GS, Pfaller MA. Medical microbiology. 4th ed. St. Louis: Mosby;

    2002.

    Chapter in a book

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    In your assignments you may want to refer to an article, report or chapter in an edited book containing

    contributions by a number of writers. In this instance, you need to acknowledge the author(s) whose

    work you are citing with a number in parentheses (or a superscript number) at the relevant point in your

    paper, as you would for journal articles, books and other sources.

    In the reference list entry you need to give the name of the author(s) you cited plus the chapter title

    and information about the publication in which the work appears. The following information is included:

    author(s) cited, chapter title, editor(s), title of the book in which the work appears, city, publisher, year,

    volume number (if applicable) and page numbers.

    Follow the standard format for a book when presenting author, title, city and publisher of the

    book in which the chapter appears.

    Minimal capitalisation is used for the chapter title, as for the book title.

    The word 'In' is used to introduce the book in which the chapter appears.

    The page range is provided, i.e. the first and last page numbers of the article, limited to thoseneeded for clarity, without repeating digits unnecessarily.

    Note that the letter p. (for 'page' or 'pages') is used for chapters in books. The letter p. is notused for page numbers of journal articles.

    Example:

    5. Meltzer PS, Kallioniemi A, Trent JM. Chromosome alterations in human solid tumors. In: Vogelstein B,

    Kinzler KW, editors. The genetic basis of human cancer. New York: McGraw-Hill; 2002. p. 93-113.

    Newspaper article

    For a newspaper article, the following information is provided: author(s) if given, title of article, title of

    newspaper, year, month, day, section (if applicable), page or pages, column number.

    Minimal capitalisation is used for the article title.

    Maximal capitalisation is used for the newspaper title, i.e. all major words are capitalised.

    Note the abbreviations: Sect. for section; col. for column; months are abbreviated to the first

    three letters.

    The date is followed by a semicolon (with no space after it) and the section is followed by acolon (with no space after it).

    Section may not always be applicable.

    Example:

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    6. Tynan T. Medical improvements lower homicide rate: study sees drop in assault rate. The Washington

    Post. 2002 Aug 12;Sect. A:2 (col. 4).

    Audiovisual material

    For referencing audiovisual material such as audiotapes, videocassettes, slides and films, follow the

    format for a book and indicate the medium, i.e. the type of material, in square brackets after the title.

    Example:

    7. Chason KW, Sallustio S. Hospital preparedness for bioterrorism [videocassette]. Secaucus (NJ):

    Network for Continuing Medical Education; 2002.

    Electronic material

    CD-Rom

    For referencing a CD-ROM, follow the format for a book and indicate the medium in square brackets

    after the title, i.e. [CD -ROM].

    Example:

    8. Anderson SC, Poulsen KB. Anderson's electronic atlas of hematology [CD-ROM]. Philadelphia:

    Lippincott Williams & Wilkins; 2002.

    Journal article on the internet

    To reference a journal article published on the internet, provide the bibliographic details as for a print

    journal, with the following additions:

    After the abbreviated journal title, add the word 'Internet' in square brackets.

    Add the date you cited the material, providing year, month (abbreviated) and day in square

    brackets, with no punctuation marks, followed by a semicolon, e.g. [cited 2002 Aug 12];

    After the volume and issue number, provide an indication of the number of pages or the numberof screens in square brackets, e.g. [about 1 p.].

    Use the phrase 'Available from:' followed by the URL (web address).

    Example:

    9. Abood S. Quality improvement initiative in nursing homes: the ANA acts in an advisory role. Am J

    Nurs [Internet]. 2002 Jun [cited 2002 Aug 12];102(6):[about 1 p.]. Available from:

    http://www.nursingworld.org/AJN/2002/june/Wawatch.htm.

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    Article with a Digital Object Identifier (DOI)

    If an article has a DOI, this should be provided after the page number details. The number is added

    after the letters 'doi'.

    Example:

    10. Zhang M, Holman CD, Price SD, Sanfilippo FM , Preen DB, Bulsara MK. Comorbidity and repeat

    admission to hospital for adverse drug reactions in older adults: retrospective cohort study. BMJ. 2009

    Jan 7;338:a2752. doi: 10.1136/bmj.a2752. PubMed PMID: 19129307; PubMed Central PMCID:

    PMC2615549.

    Home page/web site

    For referencing a home page/web site it is necessary to provide the title of the home page/web site

    followed by the word 'Internet' in square brackets. Headquarters (city) of the organisation and the name

    of the organisation should be provided, together with the copyright date or span of dates. The date of

    update and the date the material was cited should be given in square brackets. The URL is provided

    after the phrase 'Available from:'

    Example:

    11. Cancer-Pain.org [Internet]. New York: Association of Cancer Online Resources, Inc.; c2000-01

    [updated 2002 May 16; cited 2002 Jul 9]. Available from: http://www.cancer-pain.org/.

    Note that standards for referencing material from the internet are still being developed. You will see

    certain variations in the referencing of online materials among journals that use the Vancouver style,

    just as there are slight differences in their referencing of print sources.

    It is important to be consistent in referencing sources within a paper, and to maintain as much style

    consistency as possible between the referencing of print and online sources.

    A sample reference list in Vancouver style

    References

    1. Halpern SD, Ubel PA, Caplan AL. Solid-organ transplantation in HIV-infected patients. N Engl J Med.

    2002;347:284-7.

    2. Rose ME, Huerbin MB, Melick J, Marion DW, Palmer AM, Schiding JK, et al. Regulation of interstitial

    excitatory amino acid concentrations after cortical contusion injury. Brain Res. 2002;935(1-2):40-6.

    3. Diabetes Prevention Program Research Group. Hypertension, insulin, and proinsulin in participants

    with impaired glucose tolerance. Hypertension. 2002;40(5):679-86.

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    4. Murray PR, Rosenthal KS, Kobayashi GS, Pfaller MA . Medical microbiology. 4th ed. St. Louis: Mosby;

    2002.

    5. Meltzer PS, Kallioniemi A, Trent JM. Chromosome alterations in human solid tumors. In: Vogelstein B,

    Kinzler KW, editors. The genetic basis of human cancer. New York: McGraw-Hill; 2002. p. 93-113.

    6. Tynan T. Medical improvements lower homicide rate: study sees drop in assault rate. The Washington

    Post. 2002 Aug 12;Sect. A:2 (col. 4).

    7. Chason KW, Sallustio S. Hospital preparedness for bioterrorism [videocassette]. Secaucus (NJ):

    Network for Continuing Medical Education; 2002.

    8. Anderson SC, Poulsen KB. Anderson's electronic atlas of hematology [CD-ROM]. Philadelphia:

    Lippincott Williams & Wilkins; 2002.

    9. Abood S. Quality improvement initiative in nursing homes: the ANA acts in an advisory role. Am JNurs [Internet]. 2002 Jun [cited 2002 Aug 12];102(6):[about 1 p.]. Available from:

    http://www.nursingworld.org/AJN/2002/june/Wawatch.htm.

    10. Zhang M, Holman CD, Price SD, Sanfilippo FM , Preen DB, Bulsara MK. Comorbidity and repeat

    admission to hospital for adverse drug reactions in older adults: retrospective cohort study. BMJ. 2009

    Jan 7;338:a2752. doi: 10.1136/bmj.a2752. PubMed PMID: 19129307; PubMed Central PMCID:

    PMC2615549.

    11. Cancer-Pain.org [Internet]. New York: Association of Cancer Online Resources, Inc.; c2000-01

    [updated 2002 May 16; cited 2002 Jul 9]. Available from: http://www.cancer-pain.org/.