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DIRECTORATE FOR QUALITY AND STANDARDS IN EDUCATION

Department of Curriculum Management

Educational Assessment Unit

Annual Examinations for Secondary Schools 2014

FORM 4 ENGLISH LITERATURE MARKING SCHEME

DO NOT PENALISE LANGUAGE ERRORS AS LONG AS THE ANSWER IS

COMPREHENSIBLE.

SECTION A – DRAMA (25 marks)

SECTION B – POETRY (25 marks)

SECTION C – PROSE (25 marks)

Candidates should be rewarded for their knowledge of the text (including quotations) and

for relevance.

Answers should be written in a coherent and organised manner.

Candidates should be penalised for contradictory, irrelevant and disorganised answers.

21 - 25 marks

Excellent Essay shows a sound and detailed knowledge of text

Content is detailed, relevant and accurate

Ideas are supported by quotations and/or close references

Meaning is clear and accurate

16 - 20 marks

Very Good Essay shows a sound knowledge of text

Content is generally detailed, relevant and accurate

Ideas are supported by quotations and/or close references

Meaning is generally clear and accurate

11 - 15 marks

Pass Essay shows an adequate knowledge of text

Some of the content is relevant

Ideas are occasionally supported by quotes and/or close references

Expression is satisfactory

6 - 10 marks

Weak Essay shows limited knowledge of text

Content is mostly irrelevant or inaccurate

Ideas are not supported by quotes and/or close references

Meaning is frequently not clear

1 - 5 marks

Very Poor Essay shows poor knowledge of text

Content is too short and generally irrelevant

Ideas are not supported by quotes and/or close references

Meaning is not clear

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SECTION D: UNPREPARED TEXT 25 MARKS

Except in cases where factual and specific answers are required, markers should reward valid

responses from candidates that may not be covered by the answers given below.

1. Tick () the most appropriate answer. (2 marks)

The passage describes

c. a violent storm in a tropical country.

2. In the passage we first read that Father ‘yelled furiously’ (line 9) and then that ‘he was afraid’

(line 13). Suggest a reason for each of these feelings. (2 marks)

Award answers that reflect the context, such as: Father was angry at the children for leaving

the house during a storm. (1 mark) He was frightened because he realised that they were in

danger. (1 mark)

3. What impression do you get of the relationship between the father and his children? Give a

reason for your answer. (2 marks)

Award suitable answers such as: They had a close/warm/loving relationship. In fact they

used to run out to meet him when he returned from St Anne. / They used to return home

perched on each of his stirrups. / They were aghast when he yelled at them.

4. From between lines 1 – 8, find 2 separate words that are used to suggest sounds. (1 mark)

Accept any 2 of the following: clattering, explosions, thunder

5. ‘And John and Emily could hardly eat.’ (lines 15 – 16) What does this sentence show about the

way they were feeling? (2 marks)

They were tense / frightened.

6. The wind is treated as if it were alive.

(a) From lines 15 – 24 find the three words/phrases that suggest this.

(b) What do we call this figure of speech? (4 marks)

(a) the wind occupied the room, snatching pictures from the wall, sweeping the table bare.

(accept either individual words or phrases – 3 marks)

(b) personification (1 mark)

7. For each of the following, identify the figure of speech and explain the effect created through the

image: (6 marks)

When marking these answers award 1 mark for correct identification of figure of speech.

Award suitable answers such as:

(a) ‘The shutters were bulging as if tired elephants were leaning against them’ (lines 16 – 17)

Simile

The writer wants to show how strong the wind was. / The simile makes us imagine the shutters

being pushed in by the wind.

(b) ‘the rain poured in like the sea into a sinking ship.’ (lines 19)

Simile

The writer wants to show that a lot of rain entered the house.

(c) ‘Branches were leaping about loose in the sky’ (lines 23)

Metaphor / personification

It brings out the way the branches were being tossed in the air.

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9. In about 40 words show how the writer creates a sense of danger. In your answer you are

expected to mention at least three different ways. (6 marks)

Award marks to candidates who bring out the sense of danger by referring to at least

three ideas such as the following:

The father’s anger / fear when he saw his children outside the house.

The sound of the storm/ thunder is compared to explosions.

The lightning which seemed to flash constantly.

The destructive effect of the storm on the house.

The house seemed to be about to be destroyed with the family inside it.

The floor began to ripple.

The violence of the natural elements brought out through the choice of words e.g.

‘snatching’; ‘sweeping’.