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Bennett, Bond, McGettrick 1
Emma Bennett
Isabella Bond
Elizabeth McGettrick
Ms. Hutton
PIB English 2: 1st
Hour
17 October, 2012
Benjamin Franklin was an author who usually wrote satire. His works were typically
written to better himself or reader. Thomas Paine was an author whose works were motivational,
typically to gain support of a cause that others had assumed to be a waste of time or a battle that
had been presumed to be already lost. Although both authors wrote about different subjects, they
both wished to persuade others to undergo a change; be it a change of heart or a change of
attitude. These authors use sentence structure, rhetorical devices and tone in different ways to
achieve the same purpose; change.
While both authors use a fast pace, Franklin uses more precise sentences and Paine uses a
more flowing style, which helps to achieve personal and societal change . Franklins precise style
shows discipline in only saying what is necessary. In his autobiography, Franklin opens the
section Leaving Boston by saying that [a]t length, a fresh difference arising between my
brother and me, I took upon me to assert my freedom, presuming that he would not venture to
produce the new indentures. (Franklin 74) Although this sentence is relatively long, when it is
looked at closely, no part of it is unnecessaryhe sticks to describing what happened. This
contributes to his personal change because discipline is required to [arrive] at moral perfection
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with traits like cleanliness, order, temperance, and industry (Franklin 78). He practices discipline
in writing precisely and can use that discipline to simulate personal perfection. Paine, on the
other hand, opens The Crisis, No. 1 by saying [these] are the times that try mens souls.
(Paine 94) This sentence is not a fact and it is not necessarily vital to have, but far from being
drivel, it adds an emotional aspect which lets it transcend more to a broad range, societal change,
which Paine is going for. Although they use different sentence structures, both Franklin and
Paine have a similar rhythm; they both write with a fast pace. Franklin does this by adding lots of
detail so that there is no repetition. (Franklin 74-79) Paine achieves this by using emotional
sentences so that when reading it feels very energetic and fast. (Paine 94-99) Both of these uses
cause the reader to have to pay closer attention and therefore add resonance. This helps achieve
change because for change, an internal belief and feeling about the cause must be held.
Franklins use of rhetorical devices is more modern and easy to understand while Paines
is more ornate and intricate, which helps to achieve societal change . Since Franklins use of
rhetorical devices is more modern, the change he wishes the reader, the settlers, to undergo is
easier to follow. In Remarks Concerning the Savages of North America,Franklin states that
the sellers call the Native Americans savages because their manners differ from [the settlers],
which [the settlers] think the perfection of civility; [the Native Americans] think the same of
theirs. (Franklin, 84) This expresses to the settles that their view of the Native Americans as
savages is one of inferiority, and should be changed to a view of equality. Paine, on the other
hand, uses rhetorical devices in a more ornate way to rally citizens or have them give their
approbation to a certain cause or movement. In The Crisis, No.1,Paine elicits troops from the
colonies by stating that he who stands [the war] now deserves all the love and thanks from
every man and woman. (Paine, 88) By saying this, Paine achieves change by hinting that those
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who fight this war will become meritorious. Franklin achieves change of the settlers view of the
Native Americans with his modern use of rhetorical devices. Paine achieves change of the
settlers motivation to fight for their freedom with his use of intricate and ornate rhetorical
devices. Both authors achieve the same desired purpose, to motivate readers to change, yet they
use different forms of rhetorical devices to do so.
Paines tone is very motivational while Franklins is witty, making change possible. In Thomas
Paines work, he is motivational, which implies the change he wishes to occur. The Crisis, No. 1 ends
with a sentence meant for rallying the troops, for if they go into battle with perseverance and fortitude,
[they] have the prospect of a glorious issue. (Paine 99) By doing this, Paine creates the image of a better
solution if the troops become more motivated. Alternately, Franklins witty tone expresses how he wishes
to ameliorate himself. In his autobiography, he attempts to begin the bold and arduous project of arriving
at moral perfection. (Franklin 78) Because of how Franklin is able to acknowledge the hardship of his
desired change, he makes it seem worthwhile and possible to achieve. Benjamin Franklin and Thomas
Paine both use tone in order to point towards change in their writing, though they use it differently.
Franklins autobiography talks about how he wishes to live without fault (Franklin 78), but Paine writes
in his work The Crisis No. 1 how cowardice leads to a lurid future, inveighing on anyone who does not
fight (Paine 99). The more realistic look on life is encouraging in Franklins autobiography, while Paine
is able to use fear to motivate. Even though the authors use two different types of tone, each is successful
to gain their purpose in their writing.
Both Franklin and Paine had the same purpose of change. Franklin focused mostly on
personal change; achieving moral perfection. (Franklin 78) Paines focus, alternatively, was on
the change of an entire societyspecifically, rallying troops. These reasons are different but
inherently the samethey are aimed at the bettering of an individual; the whole is made up by
many ones. Though the authors had different subjects to improve, they still achieved the same
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thing through similar rhythm, and using different rhetorical devices; sentence structure; and tone.
These styles contribute to the change by emphasizing the authors desire to have the change in
place.
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Works Cited
Franklin, Benjamin. From The Autobiography. Elements of Literature, fifth course
Eds. Robert Anderson et. al. Austin: Holt, Rinehart, and Winston. 1989. 81-83. Print.
Franklin, Benjamin. Remarks Concerning the Savages of North America.Elements of
Literature, fifth course. Eds. Robert Anderson et. al. Austin: Holt, Rinehart, and Winston.
1989. 84. Print.
Paine, Thomas. The Crisis, No. 1.Elements of Literature, fifth course. Eds. Robert Anderson
et. al. Austin: Hold, Rinehart, and Winston. 1989. 88-90. Print.