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  • PROSE A Handout

    Gusti Omkang Hingmane, S. Pd For the Fifth Semester Students of Academic Year 2011/2012

    English Studies Program

    Faculty of Teacher Training and Education

    Tribuana University

    2011

  • Gusti O. Hingmane, S.Pd English Teacher at SMAN 1 ABAD and lecturer at Untrib University Page 2

    CHAPTER ONE

    Proses Meaning and Kinds

    1.1 Definition of Prose

    Prose is the most typical form of written (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Language),

    applying ordinary grammatical structure and natural flow of speech rather than rhythmic

    structure (as in poetry). While in http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/prose, prose is, 1a

    : The ordinary language people use in speaking or writing; b : a literary medium distinguished

    from poetry especially by its greater irregularity and variety of rhythm and its closer

    correspondence to the patterns of everyday speech; 2: a dull or ordinary style, quality, or

    condition. In other words, prose is defined as free story. Or, prose is any type of written word

    that is not poetry (in http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_the_different_types_of_Prose).

    1.2 Kinds of Prose

    Some well known kinds of prose are essays (including articles), history, biography,

    autobiography, anecdotes joke, speech, letter, journals, diaries, tale, short story, novels, myth,

    legend, fiction, comedy, and drama (Djoneng, 2008: 30; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose;

    http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_are_the_different_types_of_Prose). While in

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20070623054553AArnNOA, there are eight types

    of prose, namely: short stories, factual prose, letters, novels, diaries, testimony, journals, and the

    personal essay. Some of them are explained like below:

    1.2.1 Essay. Essay may be formal or informal. They are formal if they follow strict rule of

    discourse, and informal if they do not follow these rules very strictly and tend to put forward

    opinions that are markedly personal.

    1.2.2 History. A history gives chronological accounts of event undergone by a nation, political

    group, an institution, or an organization. Histories often derive their material from biographies

    and autobiographies as well as other documents.

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    1.2.3 Biography. A biography is an account of a personal life, or a stage of his life, given by

    another. While a autobiography is account of personals life or a stage of his life, given by

    himself and tending to subjective.

    1.2.4 Anecdote. An anecdote is an account of an incident in a personals life that depicts a facet

    of his character.

    1.2.5 Jokes. Jokes are accounts of humorous incidents, factual or imagery.

    1.2.6 Speech. A speech is an oral discourse deliver on an important topic during the important

    occasion.

    1.2.7 Letter. A letter is written missive from one person to another (its quality and important will

    determine its place in literature).

    1.2.8 Journal. A journal is day to day account of occurrences connected with an important

    undertaking such as sea voyage, a project, etc.

    1.2.9 Diary. A diary is a day to day account of occurrences during certain stage of a personals

    life, written by himself.

    1.2.10 Tale. Tale is a kind of story that includes some wonderful and magical events. There is

    also a kind of summary, but there isnt any detailed drawing of characters. The main goal is the

    revelation of the marvelous things rather than insisting on presenting the characters. As the

    example may be considered Jack and the Beanstalk, which is an English folk tale. The most

    important are the marvelous beanstalks with giants is than Jacks personality

    (http://www.bryk.pl/teksty/studia/j%C4%99zyki/angielski/16637-types_of_prose.html).

    1.2.11 Short Story. A short story is that kind of prose narrative, which length is limited. That

    kind of prose is probably as old as the literature. Moreover, this form of prose has existed for

    many years before the same art of writing was invented. Probably the oldest example of short

    story is an Egyptian tale entitled "The Two Brothers", which dates back around 3200 B.C. What

    is more, until today the original of that prose remains unbroken. The short stories usually are

    consisted of description, some dialogues or commentary. However, the most important is the fact

    that every short story has a compact narrative and characters are well-drown. The examples of

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    such stories are: "To build a Fire" written by Jack London and "Well-lighted Place" written by

    Ernest Hemingway(http://www.bryk.pl/teksty/studia/j%C4%99zyki/angielski/16637-

    types_of_prose.html).

    Short story is a fictitious narrative, the length is limited. It was defined by Edgar Allan

    Poe (Djoneng, 2008) as a story whose one main requisite characteristic is that of unity. This to be

    achieved by means of unity of character, unity of time and place, unity of theme, unity of plot,

    and unity of discourse.

    For unity of character (C), there should be only one main character (MC), the other

    characters to be mostly supportive in function; or, if the other characters are equally important,

    they must be extremely to the MC. Unity of C includes unity of viewpoint. The story is usually

    told from the point of view of the MC. The narrative may be done either in the first person (using

    I and we), or in the third person for all characters (Lukeman, 2003: 148).

    For unity of time and place, the main events including the climax should take place

    within only one limited span of time and place. A more remote time and place may be permitted,

    if necessary, only in the flashback or in characters nostalgic retelling of the past of the initial

    problem, occurring in a distant place after the passing of considerable length of time.

    For the unity of time, the short story should be about only one subject matter, and the

    initial problem or predicament must be clearly connected with the climax and denouement (the

    climax is the highest point of a story where all of the conflicting elements come together to a

    head) (Djoneng, 2008:32; Zaenuddin, 2004:66). The denouement is a solution, happy or sad, all

    of the conflicts in the story; it comes just before the ending sentence(s).these parts of a short

    story are given more treatment in connection with unity of line of feelings or emotion goes

    through the whole story. Unity of theme does not include unity of aim, for a work of fiction is

    not supposed to have any aim except to entertain the reader by giving him vicarious experience.

    For unity of plot, the short story should deal with only one story outline occurring to only

    one set of characters of limited number (Djoneng, 2008). All occurrences should fit into a

    beginning that show a predicament that the main character has to deal with; a development;

    which shows how he tries to deal with the predicament, the development culminating in a climax

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    by which the main character comes to a point which may mean either victory or defeat for hi;

    and then denouncement or solution which quickly followed by the end.

    1.2.12 Novel. For unity of plot in a novel, the connection between various sub-plots must be

    well shown. One of the sub-plots must be treated as the main plot with the other sub-plots being

    made subordinate to the main plot. The length of a novel allows it to have several such sub-plots

    (whereas a short story can accommodate only one).

    Novel is also a kind of prose, which is narrated on a bigger scale. Similar to the short

    story, a novel includes a lot of different kinds and possibilities. Its length is also longer than the

    length of short story. More extended narratives forms have been invented as soon as the same

    literature was invented. What is more, the novels are considered as the most popular literary

    form nowadays, in both criteria: in the quantity and the quality. However, if we consider the

    quality, it has a rival which a magazine short story. A lot of people dont want to read any other

    type of literature than the novels or short story. It is said that the novel is the best qualitative

    form literature. As the best authors are consider the class writers. The example of novels are

    book such as: Harry Potter and Philosophers Tone written by J.K. Rowling or Bridget Jones

    Diary written by Helen Fielding(http://www2.anglistik.uni-

    freiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm).

    The novel can be defined as an extended work of prose fiction. It derives from the Italian

    novella (little new thing), which was a short piece of prose (http://www2.anglistik.uni-

    freiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm). The novel has become an increasingly

    popular form of fiction since the early eighteenth century, though prose narratives were written

    long before then. The term denotes a prose narrative about characters and their actions in what is

    recognizably everyday life. This differentiates it from its immediate predecessor, the romance,

    which describes unrealistic adventures of supernatural heroes. The novel has developed various

    sub-genres:

    1.2.12.1 Epistolary Novel. In the epistolary novel the narrative is conveyed entirely by an

    exchange of letters.

    1.2.12.2 Picaresque Novel. A picaresque novel is an early form of the novel; some call it a

    precursor of the novel. It presents the adventures of a lighthearted rascal (pcaro = rogue)

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    (http://www2.anglistik.uni-freiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm). It is usually

    episodic in structure, the episodes often arranged as a journey. The narrative focuses on one

    character who has to deal with tyrannical masters and unlucky fates but who usually manages to

    escape these miserable situations by using her/his wit. The form of the picaresque narrative

    emerged in sixteenth-century Spain. Examples are: in the English tradition: Thomas Nash, The

    Unfortunate Traveler; Mark Twain, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn; Daniel Defoe, Moll

    Flanders.

    1.2.12.3 Historical Novel. The historical novel takes its setting and some of the (chief) characters

    and events from history. It develops these elements with attention to the known facts and makes

    the historical events and issues important to the central narrative. (e.g. Charles Dickens, A Tale

    of Two Cities)

    1.2.12.4 Bildungsroman. The Bildungsroman (novel of education) is a type of novel originating

    in Germany which presents the development of a character mostly from childhood to maturity

    (http://www2.anglistik.uni-freiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm). This process

    typically contains conflicts and struggles, which are ideally overcome in the end so that the

    protagonist can become a valid and valuable member of society. Examples are J.W. Goethe,

    Wilhelm Meister; Henry Fielding, Tom Jones; Charles Dickens, David Copperfield; James Joyce,

    A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man.

    1.2.12.5 Gothic Novel. The gothic novel became very popular from the second half of the

    eighteenth century onwards (http://www2.anglistik.uni-

    freiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm). With the aim to evoke chilling terror by

    exploiting mystery and a variety of horrors, the gothic novel is usually set in desolate landscapes,

    ruined abbeys, or medieval castles with dungeons, winding staircases and sliding panels. Heroes

    and heroines find themselves in gloomy atmospheres where they are confronted with

    supernatural forces, demonic powers and wicked tyrants. Examples are Horace Walpole, The

    Castle of Otranto; Ann Radcliffe, Mysteries of Udolpho; William Faulkner, Absalom! Absalom!

    1.2.12.6 Social Novel. The social novel, also called industrial novel or Condition of England

    novel, became particularly popular between 1830 and 1850 and is associated with the

    development of nineteenth-century realism (http://www2.anglistik.uni-

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    reiburg.de/intranet/englishbasics/ProseTypes.htm). As its name indicates, the social novel gives a

    portrait of society, especially of lower parts of society, dealing with and criticizing the living

    conditions created by industrial development or by a particular legal situation (the poor laws for

    instance).

    1.2.13 Drama. A drama or a play is a story told, by means of dialogue, by living actors acting the

    story out on a stage. The movie or cinema is a contemporary of the dramas.

    By tradition, there are two kinds of dramas, the tragedy and the comedy. The theme of

    tragedy is usually a sad one and is more serious than that of a comedy. Tragedy centers on a here

    who struggles against powerful and evil forces that finally defeat him, the story ending in his

    death.

    In a comedy, the hero tries to deal with a predicament, and, while doing it, he undergoes

    humorous and ridiculous situation until, finally, he emerges successful, and, while doing it, he

    undergoes humorous and ridiculous situation until, finally he emerges successful and victorious.

    In both tragedy and comedy, characterization is made paramount, that is, the personality

    of each character, especially of the hero, is finely delineated, with the result that the audience can

    accept as people like themselves, or, at least, understand as to their motivation.

    There are some variations of tragedy, such as: melodrama (which has a sad ending like

    tragedy but is poor in characterization), interludes (short conversation exchange done between

    the acts of a long play to amuse the audience, while they waited), miracle (enacted stories from

    the bible and from the lives of the lives of the saints), and morality (play had abstract traits or

    quality-like peace, justice, patience, wisdom, beauty, or prudencefor characters to enact a

    message or teaching) (Djoneng, 2008: 37).

    Drama is divided into acts, and each act is divided into scenes. An act is roughly

    determined by one opinion and closing of the stage curtain. Five acts in one play used to be a

    regular and normal length for a play.

    1.3 Differences between Prose and Poetry

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    Prose and poetry are the two basic categories which language can be divided into. Poetry

    is characterized by its use of rhythm, and prose by not using a regular rhythm, which is the case

    for the vast majority of spoken and written language

    (http://www.usingenglish.com/glossary/prose.html). Prose lacks the more formal metrical

    structure of verse that is almost always found in traditional (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry"

    \o "Poetry); (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose). This web below links like the statement above:

    Jika bahasa berlaku sebagai pemeran pembantu dalam prosa, maka dalam puisi

    bahasa adalah pemeran utama. Ada kalanya muncul kiasan lain: prosa adalah

    bahasa dalam bentuk cair, puisi adalah bahasa dalam bentuk padat. Puisi adalah

    ungkapan bahasa yang gemar bersolek, aneh, samar-samar, bahkan gelap,

    sementara prosa adalah ungkapan bahasa yang wajar dan terang, makin wajar dan

    terang-benderang, makin baguslah prosa itu. Puisi mengigau sendiri; prosa

    berkomunikasi (http://bukuohbuku.wordpress.com/2010/06/06/perbedaan-puisi-

    dan-prosa).

    While, according to Djoneng (2009), both poetry and prose combine elements of

    description, narration, exposition and argumentation in a manner best suit to authors purpose. A

    poem may describe a scene, tell a story and explain a state of mind, and the poet may even use

    argument, for example, to persuade a woman he loves to return his love.

    Poetry differs from prose in that it is more concise, concentrated, intense, rhythmical and

    melodious than prose. A poem can express in a few lines what it would take prose counterpart

    chapter to explain. It does this by the selection of a few exact detailing and putting in them

    intense personal significance.

    Poetry usually express an attitude, an emotion or an opinion, and is dependent on word

    sounds, as well as on meaning, for its effect (Djoneng, 2009: 10). It consciously use melodic

    devices and a definite rhythmic pattern, both of which distinguish it from prose.

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    CHAPTER TWO

    The Elements of Literature

    2.1 Character

    Most of us are interested in other people. When we meet someone for the first time, we

    notice certain things: how the person looks, speaks, and acts, for example. We make judgment

    according to what we notice. Sometimes, as we get to know the person better, those evaluations

    are affirmed. Sometimes, they are challenged. Interested in other people is more than just idle

    curiosity. We based our most important life decision-whom we will work with, whom we will

    live-on what we learn from observing, talk with, and interacting with other people.

    It is not surprising, then, that then we watch television programs, see movies, or read

    literature; most of us pay attention to the people-the characters-whose lives unfold before us. To

    stay interested in film, a novel, a short story, or a play, we must find the characters interesting in

    some way. Some characters fascinate us by being very different-by living in a distant place or a

    time long past or by being wildly glamorous or consummately evil. Sometimes characters may

    capture our minds and hearts because they are people we can relate to. They may face

    circumstances similar to our own may act in ways that makes us feel as though in a mirror.

    Frequently a character intrigues us by displaying a specific quality or style: a unique sense of

    humor, a gift for the absurd, or a profoundly wise way of looking at the world.

    Writer may want to describe action or ideas. But they must also describe the characters-

    the persons or objects-affected by these actions and ideas. The characters make up the central

    interest of many dramas, and novels as well as biographies or autobiographies. Even a poem is

    concerned with characters (Djoneng, 2008:6). The speaker, or poet, is often the main character of

    a poem. Writers must know their character thoroughly and have the clear picture of each ones

    look, speech, and thoughts.

    2.1.1 Characterization

    Characterization is the depicting of clear images of a person. There are two methods:

    2.1.1.1 Dramatic methods (indirect method)

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    The writer allows us to know the opinions of the characters from what they do and

    say, from their environment, and from what are the characters think of them by

    looking into their dialogue and action.

    2.1.1.2 Analytical method (direct method)

    The author tells us about the characters directly.

    2.2 Plot

    When you tell what happens in a film or in the works of literature, you are describing the

    plot. Plot is the sequence of events that take place. It is also the outline or the frame of the story.

    Most readers begin by describing external actions, those that, through the writers description,

    we can see and hear. For instance, in her response to Butterflies, Lisa Tisico begins by writing

    about the granddaughters starting school and the drawing, she includes in her story of killing

    butterflies. These are external plot action. But Lisa also asks questions that indicate her interest

    in external actions, those events that take place inside the heart and mind. For example, she sees

    the granddaughter does not agree with the teacher; in addition, Lisa wonders why the child

    would want to kill the butterflies. So looking at the external actions carefully led Lisa to think

    about the internal changes that may be happening.

    The sequence of external and internal actions and events in literary work creates its structure,

    the pattern the plot follows. In the most traditional plays and works of fiction. The plot structure

    is something like this: the work usually opens with an introduction that let us know whom the

    action will concern and where the action will take place.

    Next, we are given a complication or a series of complications (small or large problems,

    sometimes comic, sometimes serious). For instance, in the Man in a case, after Byelinkov and

    Varinka greet each other, they almost immediately have a series of small disagreement. He

    claims not to like the apricot; she has received as a gift for him. She offers to return the apricot

    and try to exchange them for a different gift. He responds by attacking the character of the

    woman who gave Varinka the apricots. Furthermore, we will come to the climax. Climax is the

    point of the greatest tension or the turning point. Then, there is conclusion in which the story

    ends. There are two kinds of plot, they are:

    2.2.1 Closed plot. Through the closed plot, the writer revolves or concludes the story for

    the readers.

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    2.2.2 Open plot. The story frequently ends at the climax and the reader is left to decide

    what he thinks the resolution or outcome of the story might be.

    2.3 Setting or Background

    Learning where others were born or grew up or discovering where they have lived or

    traveled help us understand better. In some cases, a new friend comes from a place where

    customs and values are different from ours. From instance, most people in the United State

    believe that not looking another person in the eye indicates shame or deceit. In some cultures,

    however, looking directly at another individual is a sign of boldness and lack of respect.

    In reading literature, it is just an important as it is in daily life to think about time and

    place, the setting of work. Setting is the place and time in which a characters story occurs.

    Literary characters, like the persons who read about them, do not exist alone in space. They

    act and react with one another. They also respond to the world in which they live. Setting is

    another way of showing people.

    2.4 Point of View

    Point of view is a way of how a story is told. Point of view is a way and vision used by the

    author as tool to present the figures, the action, the setting and any other events that form the

    story in a fictional works to the readers.

    Everything is presented in a fictional work belong to author, his philosophy and

    interpretation about life. The choice of point of view is very important because it is not only

    related to the problems of style, but it is also related to grammatical and rhetorical problems. The

    grammatical problems are related to how the author presents his writing. Point of view has

    psychological side with the readers. The readers need clear perception about point of view of the

    story.

    A writer may tell a story in the first person (I, and we. Laksana, 2007:107) as though the

    narrator were a major or minor character in it. Or, the writer may use the third person (he or she),

    in which the narrator stand apart from the characters and describe the action. The writer also can

    use second person (you). There are three variants of the third-person point of view: dramatic or

    objective, omniscient, and limited omniscient. (Laksana, 2007: 108-114).

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    2.5 Theme

    Theme or statement is the basic idea expressed by a work of literature. It develops of

    interplay of the character and plot. A theme may warn the reader to lead a better life or different

    kind of life. It may declare that life is profitable or unprofitable, or the crime does or does not

    pay.

    Serious writers strive to make their work an honest expression of sentiment, or true emotion.

    They avoid sentimentality, which mean giving too much emphasis to emotion or pretending to

    feel an emotion. A writer of honest emotion does not have to tell the reader what to think about a

    story. A good story directs the reader to the authors conclusion.

    2.6 Style and Tone

    Style is the way a writer uses words to create literature. It is one following another, and one

    paragraph leading to the next. We can seldom enjoy a storys character or plot without enjoying

    the authors style. The way writers write is a part what they have to say. From the first word to

    the last, a writer must solve problems of style by answering as: what kinds of words shall I

    use?, how shall I present details?, should paragraph be long or short?.

    Meanwhile, tone is a manner of expression in speaking. Tone is related to high tone, low

    tone, soft and strong. Tone is related to intonation, melody, and stressing of the sentences.

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    CHAPTER THREE

    Basic Prose Style and Mechanics

    3.1 Write in the Active Voice

    Unless you have a good reason to do otherwise, always choose the active, rather than the

    passive voice. With the active voice, the agent (the person or thing carrying out the action

    expressed by the verb) is the subject:

    John opened the door.

    There are two types of passive voice constructions. In one, the agent is identified, but the

    person or thing toward which the action is directed (rather than the agent) is the subject of the

    sentence:

    The door was opened by John.

    In the second type of passive voice construction, the agent is not identified at all:

    The door was opened.

    3.2 Avoid Nominalizations

    A nominalization is a noun derived from and communicating the same meaning as a verb

    or adjective. It is usually more direct, vigorous and natural to express action in verbs and

    qualities in adjectives.

    No: Our expectation was that we would be rewarded for our efforts.

    Yes: We expected to be rewarded for our efforts.

    No: There was stuffiness about the room.

    Yes: The room was stuffy.

    3.3 Express Parallel Ideas in Parallel Grammatical Form

    Parallelism is the principle that units of equal function should be expressed in equal form.

    Repetition of the same structure allows the reader to recognize parallel ideas more readily.

    No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.

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    Yes: This could be a problem for both the winners and the losers.

    3.4 Choose Your Words Carefully

    Linguists estimate that the English language includes over one million words, thus

    providing English speakers with the largest lexicon in the world. From this vast lexicon, writers

    may choose the precise words to meet their needs. The list below describes some of the factors

    you might consider in choosing, from among a number of synonyms or near synonyms, the word

    or phrase most appropriate to your purpose. Notice that the distinctions between these factors are

    not always sharp; some might properly be considered subsets of others. For example, tone,

    formality, and intensity might be considered subsets of connotation.

    Connotation: While the literal or explicit meaning of a word or phrase is its denotation,

    the suggestive or associative implication of a word or phrase is its connotation. Words often have

    similar denotations but quite different connotations (due to etymology, common usage,

    suggestion created by similar-sounding words, etc.); hence, you might choose or avoid a word

    because of its connotation. For example, although one denotation of rugged is "strongly built or

    constituted," the connotation is generally masculine; hence, you might choose to describe an

    athletic woman as athletic rather than rugged. Likewise, although one denotation of pretty is

    "having conventionally accepted elements of beauty," the connotation is generally feminine;

    thus, most men would probably prefer being referred to as handsome.

    Level of Formality: Some dictionaries indicate whether a word is formal, informal,

    vulgar, or obscene; most often, however, your own sensitivity to the language should be

    sufficient to guide you in making the appropriate choice for a given context. In writing a report

    about the symptoms of radiation sickness, for example, you would probably want to talk about

    "nausea and vomiting" rather than "nausea and puking."

    Intensity: Intensity is the degree of emotional content of a wordfrom objective to

    subjective, mild to strong, euphemistic to inflammatory. It is common, for example, for wildlife

    managers to talk about harvesting deer rather than killing them. Choosing a less intense word or

    phrase can avoid unnecessarily offending or inciting your readers; however, it can also be a

    means of avoiding responsibility or masking the unsavory nature of the situation. As George

    Orwell says in "Politics and the English Language": "In our time, political speech and writing are

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    largely the defense of the indefensible. . .. Thus, political language has to consist largely of

    euphemism, question begging, and sheer cloudy vagueness."

    Achieving the appropriate level of intensity is as often a question of choosing the more

    intense as it is of choosing the less intense word. Ultimately, you must rely upon your own

    sensitivity to the language, to your topic, and to your audience to guide you in making the

    appropriate choices for a given context.

    Repetition: Using the same word to refer to the same thing or idea is desirable when it

    contributes to transition and coherence. For example, substituting commands for translators in

    the second pair of sentences below provides a smoother transition.

    3.5 Avoid Overusing Word Modifiers

    Avoid overusing adjectives and adverbs. These modifiers have their place, but in the

    most vigorous prose, action is expressed in verbs, and the agents of that action are expressed in

    nouns. This principle applies to both ornate, pompous modifiers and to such commonplace

    intensifiers as really, pretty, and very.

    One of the best ways to avoid overusing modifiers is to select specific, self-modified

    nouns and verbsones that don't require adjectives and adverbs to supplement their meaning.

    For example, you might replace long black car with limousine or ran very quickly with sped or

    bolted.

    3.6 Clarify the Logical Relationship between Your Ideas

    In order to make your writing coherent and the transitions between your ideas smooth,

    you must clearly express or imply the logical relationships between your ideas. If you fail to do

    so, one idea is simply juxtaposed with another, and readers are left to make the logical

    connections for themselves. In this situation, experienced readers will suspect that you have not

    clarified the logical relationships between your ideas because you don't know what those

    relationships are-or worse, because there aren't any.

    Hodges (2001) lists eight logical relationships and some of the transitional devices that

    may be used to indicate each of them:

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    1. Addition: moreover, further, furthermore, besides, and, and then, likewise, also, nor, too,

    again, in addition, equally important, next, first, second, third, in the first place, in the second

    place, finally, last, etc.

    2. Comparison: similarly, likewise, in like manner, etc.

    3. Contrast: but, yet, and yet, however, still, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary,

    even so, notwithstanding, for all that, in contrast to this, at the same time, although this may be

    true, otherwise, etc.

    4. Place: here, beyond, nearby, opposite to, adjacent to, on the opposite side

    5. Purpose: to this end, for this purpose, with this object, etc.

    6. Result: hence, therefore, accordingly, consequently, thus, thereupon, as a result, then, etc.

    7. Summary, repetition, exemplification, intensification: to sum up, in brief, on the whole, in

    sum, in short, as I have said, in other words, that is, to be sure, as has been noted, for example,

    for instance, in fact, indeed, to tell the truth, in any event, etc.

    8. Time: meanwhile, at length, soon, after a few days, in the meantime, afterward, later, now, in

    the past, etc.

    3.7 Use Metaphor to Illustrate

    Metaphor may be broadly defined as an imaginative comparison, expressed or implied,

    between two generally unlike things, for the purpose of illustration (Laksana, 2007: 138;

    Lukeman, 2003; http://www.novel-writing-help.com/how-to-write-prose.html). By this

    definition, similes (expressed comparisons) are a subset of metaphor. In prose (as opposed to

    poetry), metaphors are most often used to illustrate, and thus make clear, abstract ideas. For

    example:

    Solving the problem was as easy as pie.

    hair felt like silk

    Her skin was as smooth as cream her

    Her eyes were as blue as neon

    Solving the problem was easy.

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    3.8 Use Basic Punctuation

    To be a writer or reader, we must do understand well the use of punctuation, so, what we

    read or write can be understood well. The punctuations are: commas, semicolons, colons, dashes,

    parentheses, ellipsis dots, hyphens, apostrophes, italics, titles, numbers, quotation, question

    marks, exclamation points, and multiple Punctuation (Keraf in Ola, 2006:23-37).

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