SimilesSimiles are a way of describing something you’re not to sure about.

So you compare it to something that you do know about!

Here are some ofour best ones.

RecipesThe Iron Man causes trouble

for the local farmers and people. He likes

eating tractors.

So we decided we wouldwrite a recipe for a

delicious metal based feast!

How to make a delicious Metal Pie!

Ingredients:• 3 Telephone Posts• Electrical Wire• 7L of Oil• 3 Rusty Engines• 1 Massive

Whiteboard• An oily bucket• 9L of Diesel• 1 Computer

• 97 Rusty Guns• Hot Water• 2 Chewy Tires

1. Pour 7L of oil in a pan, put in 3 rusty engines and mix together. (Edison)

2. Mix the oil and the hot water. Slide in 2 chewy tires and put in the pie. (Charlotte)

3. Bake the biggest 3 telephone posts and a scoop of electrical wire. (Theo)

4. Mix 9 oily litres of diesel with 1 chewy computer in the pan. (Lewis)

5. Put 97 rusty machine guns in with the massive whiteboard. Then serve in an oily bucket. (Dante)

Persuasive LettersThe Iron Man causes troublefor the local farmers and people. He likeseating tractors.

So worried about therelivelihoods the peoplecontact the Army andpolice to persuadethem to help.

Warcop Primary SchoolAppleby-in-Westmoorland

CA16 6NX30/4/15

Dear General SmithI Invite you to see the Iron Man. The Iron Man

is eating everything from every country. (Corey) He is big. He is Scary. His head is as big as a boulder. (Toby)

There is lots of evidence like footprints and half eaten tractors. Come and help! (Charlie) I could see his footprints in the jungle, they are big. (Tallulah)

You have to come right now because it’s super important. This Iron Man needs to be captured. (Alfie)

Yours SincerelyClass 2

Warcop Primary SchoolAppleby-in-Westmoorland

CA16 6NX30/4/15

Dear Chief Inspector JonesYou must help us because the Iron Man

is going to eat all our tractors. He maybe wants to eat everything! (Joe) The Iron Man is eating all the stuff like metal television boxes. (Tiana)

He left footprints up to the cliff. Please rescue us before he eats us! (Marcus) The Iron Man eats tractors. He is big and he stomps. (Eleanor)

Chief Inspector Jones you should destroy the Iron Man because if you don’t we wont have any crops. (Jacob) You could set a monster trap. Or you could destroy him with a heavy hammer. You need to rescue us NOW! (Scarlett)

Yours Sincerely Class 2

A TrapThe Army and the Police decide they

do not believe the local people. So theydon’t help.

Which means the farmerstake matters into their

own hands and build a trap.

But it didn’t work. We designed our own traps, and wrote some

instructions for the people.