How to Write a Mini-Mystery

Main Character

• The best way to create a main character is to base it on yourself! Have the kids pick out a few of their own physical characteristics and personality traits that would work well for the protagonist.

Things to consider…

• Describe your body size and shape, your hair and eye color, and any other physical characteristic that is unique to you. For example your main character might be tall and slim, with short brown hair, green eyes, lots of freckles, and dimpled cheeks.

• Dress your character in your favorite clothes. For example, you might have him wear baggy jeans and a logo T-shirt, or have her wear khaki pants and a tank top.

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• List your favorite subjects in school and what you're especially good at. For example, your character could be good in math, which helps her figure out a puzzle. Or your character could be a great soccer player, which makes him good at running away from bad guys.

• List the things you're not so good at and include them in your character's makeup. For example, if you're not good at science, maybe your character does chemistry experiments that are always going wrong. If you're not so good at paying attention in school, maybe your character misses something important.

Setting

• The easiest way to create a setting is to use a place you know well, such as home or school. For example, you could describe your bedroom, filled with sports equipment or games, and find something mysterious hidden among these items. Or you could set the story at school and discover something missing from the classroom.

Helpful hints

• Name something your character sees, such as her messy desk, the science charts on the wall, or the clock that never seems to move fast enough. In that messy desk, your character might find a clue?

• Name something your character hears, such as the ticking of the clock, the clicking of the teacher's pen, or the whispers of the kids sitting behind you. Maybe the whispers are about something mysterious in the classroom closet?

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• Name something your character smells, such as the bologna sandwich in her desk or the perfume coming from the teacher. Inside that sandwich there might be a strange note?

• Name something your character feels, such as the breeze coming from the open classroom window, or your hair being pulled by the student behind you. Maybe there's something outside the window that seems puzzling?

• Name something your character tastes, such as gum that's lost its flavor, or chalk dust from all the scribblings on the blackboard. That gum could come in handy when you need to hide a note under your desk?

Puzzle to Solve

• Your character needs something mysterious to happen so he can solve the puzzle. For example, the note in the bologna sandwich might be a clue about the missing lunchboxes in the classroom closet. Or the whisperers behind you might be talking about the strange thing outside the window.

Puzzles to get you thinking…

• Something has been stolen from the classroom.• Something is missing from your desk.• Something strange is found on the playground.• Someone has disappeared from the school.• Someone is sending you strange notes.• Something is wrong with the teacher--she's

acting weird.• Something is hidden in the classroom closet.

Build the Tension to keep the suspense

• Have the main character try to solve the puzzle, get close, then fail a couple of times before he finally finds the correct solution.

• Have the main character get into trouble and have a hard time getting out of it.

• Have the main character's weakness interfere with solving the puzzle, such as a fear of the dark.

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• Have several more things become stolen or lost.

• Have more mysterious notes arrive with more clues.

• Have the adults not believe the main character when he's trying to tell them about the mystery, so he has to solve it himself or with his friends.

Thrilling Cliffhangers

• At the end of a scene, have the main character get into some trouble that won't be easy to resolve

Examples…

• The main character is alone in a dangerous place.• The main character has to face the bad guy.• No one believes the main character and he's in

trouble.• The main character is trapped somewhere.• The main character is about to be hurt in some

way.• The main character is going to lose something

important if he can't get out of jeopardy.

Resolution

• Wrap up the story with the solution to the puzzle and have the main character be a hero or change in a positive way.

Examples…

• The main character saves someone.• The main character figures out the puzzle and

saves the day.• The main character saves herself and is

changed by her courage.

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• The main character reveals something surprising about the puzzle that no one expected.

• The main character overcomes obstacles, such as his fears, to solve the puzzle.

• The main character proves himself when he's really in trouble.

Creative Exercises

• Brainstorm mystery topics, such as a theft, disappearance, odd occurrence, falsehood, fraud, mysterious stranger, and so on.

Creative Exercises

• Brainstorm "what ifs" for the main character to encounter, such as "What if he was trapped alone in a dark room

Creative Exercises

• Write intriguing opening lines, such as "Outside the classroom window, Susan saw something strange land in the baseball field