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Queens Writing Centre
www.queensu.ca/writingcentre/ 613-533-6315 Stauffer Library
Workshops
Credit courses
One-on-one
writing tutorials
Essay wri t ing
Lab report wri t ing
Thesis wri t ing
Grammar
General wri t ing t ips
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HOW TO WRITE YOUR
FIRST UNIVERSITY ESSAY
Communicating through writing
Profs and markers expectations
Thesis statements
Outlining
Paragraphs
Editing
Topics covered
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Q: WHAT IS THE POINT OF WRITING AN ESSAY?
A: To communicate something to your reader that youthink is
significant in some way
The transition from high school to university means that
you become a more independent learner
you discover and develop your own ideas
you convey your ideas to your reader in your own voice
ASK YOURSELF THE FOLLOWING QUESTION:
By the time my reader has read my essay, I want him or
her to have understood what?
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WHAT SHOULD YOUR ESSAY
DEMONSTRATE?
Evidence of critical thinking.
Proof that you understand the material.
Demonstration of your ability to use or apply thematerial in ways that go beyond what you have
read or heard.
An argument that is developed and sustainedthroughout the paper.
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HOW DO YOU COMMUNICATE YOUR POINT
TO YOUR READER EFFECTIVELY?
Understand what you are being asked to do.
Understand the material you are writing about.
Understand what it is that you want to say (what is your
point?).
Understand the conventions of your discipline (thesis in
intro paragraph, IMRAD, MLA style, APA style, etc.).
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MEETING YOUR
READERS EXPECTATIONS,
or,What Profs Want
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1.Your paper should be double-spaced,
between 5 and 6 pages in length, 12-point
Times New Roman font, with normal margins.
This is a typical direction from a professor, intended to keep your paper within
the word limits. Spacing and margins make it easier for your marker to tell if
youre under or over. Be sure to number every page of your essay (save for
the title page) and place your name and student number on every page, as
well.
The following slides are actual directions or statements
made by Queens professors about their expectations
regarding essays.
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2. I mark down for errors in punctuation,
sentence structure, and proof-reading. I
penalize more for recurring errors, and if
they recur more than twice, generally I failthe paper.
Be aware that markers often keep copies of their comments on your
papers on file. Implement the advice given by markers, as they will be
tracking your progress (or lack thereof).
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3. Never use first person in an
academic essay.
Some say never. Other profs may tell you that theyre happy
for you to use first person. However, its obvious that astatement such as The Gaels will prevail is stronger than I
think the Gaels will prevail.
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4. Do not use contractions in an
academic essay.
This is standard advice. Academic writing is formal writing,
and contractions (Im, youve, etc.) are consideredinformal. However, avoid falling into the opposite trap of
writing pretentiously.
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5. Avoid the passive voice.
Your grammar-check program will tell you the same thing.
The passive voice (e.g., Imagery of the sea is used in the poem) is vaguer (who
wrote the poem?), wordier, and weaker than the active voice.
However, some scientific writing may use the passive voice(e.g., The liquid was added to the powder, resulting in a loud bang.).
You can learn more about appropriate writing for the sciences at the Writing
Centres workshop on Tuesday, Oct. 4, 7:00-8:00 p.m., Ellis Auditorium.
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6. Provide references for all
quotations and ideas that are
not your own. Failure toacknowledge intellectual
property constitutes plagiarism.
Plagiarism (academic integrity) charges are scary territory. If you make use ofsomeone elses words or thoughts, reference properly.
The Writing Centre will be offering a workshop on how to use secondary
sources and avoid plagiarism on Oct. 27, 1:00-2:00 p.m., Stauffer Library Rm
121.
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Spend time free-writing.
Create a mind-map.
Develop an outline.
GETTING STARTED:
HOW TO ORGANIZE YOURTHOUGHTS FOR YOUR ESSAY
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A SAMPLE ESSAY QUESTION
In recent years, student street parties have become
synonymous with the student presence at Queens. The
collateral damage and increasing notoriety associated with
such parties have become an issue for the Queens
student body, the University administration, the Kingstoncommunity, and the local Police Department.
Discuss student street parties and their implications for one
of these groups. Focus on the aspect of the issue you findmost significant and develop an argument. Support your
position with evidence from at least three sources.
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THE THESIS STATEMENT
Q: Does every essay have a thesis?
A: Yes. And, while someessays you may write will not require an explicit and
identifiable thesis statement, the major i ty of university essays do.
Your thesis is the central insight or proposition or explication that captures what
you consider to be the most important results of your thinking.
It answers the question or fulfills the assignment set by the instructor.
It presents the argument that seems most significant and most interesting toyou, supported by solid evidence and reasoning.
Your thesis is the BACKBONE of your essay. It is your POINT.
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YOUR THESIS STATEMENT: NOT
NOT a description: In this essay, I will discuss the effects of street partieson the student body. I will examine the issues of Queens reputation andstudent safety as well as consider the long-term implications.
NOT self-evident: Street parties at Queens are divisive.
NOT personal opinion that cannot be argued against: Street parties are great forstudents and Kingston residents should just chill.
NOT a question:Are the effects of street parties significant enough towarrant action?
NOT a broad generalization: The younger generation is always open to newexperiences while the older is more interested in control and order.
NOT a statement of fact: Student street parties have become an issue for theKingston community that has implications for residents, both tax-payers andrenters.
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A THESIS STATEMENT SHOULD ANSWER:
WHAT/HOW/WHY?
WHAT? The matter at hand
The topic or incident to be examined
HOW? The means by which the topic will be examinedExample, key images, etc. (i.e., the major
discussion points of your essay)
WHY? Interpretation of the events, topic, etc.
Significance of examining the topic from the
angle you have chosen
Conclusions to be drawn (i.e., the SO WHAT?
of your argument
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WRITING AN EXPLICIT THESIS STATEMENT
A SAMPLE THESIS STATEMENT:
What: Street parties effects on community immediate
community of student renters and tax-paying
residents.
How: Property damage, noise pollution, larger sense
of community safety and comfort.
Why: Parties have an unacceptable negative effect on manyresidents in the immediate area.
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The Simple Statement of Position
Student street parties have an unacceptable
negative effect on tax-paying residents and
student renters in the immediate area.
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The Roadmap Thesis Statement
Student street parties have an unacceptable
negative effect on many residents of the
immediate area, including damage to
property, significant noise pollution, and the
overall loss of a sense of community safety.
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The Complex Thesis Statement
While student street parties encourage a sense of
tradition, spirit, and continuity for many Queensstudents and alumni, the damage to property,
significant noise pollution, and loss of a sense of
community safety has an unacceptable negative
effect on the residents of the immediate area.
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YOUR INTRODUCTIONQ: Where should your thesis appear in your essay?
A: It should appear in your introduction the part of the essay thatestablishes its focus and parameters as well as the argument you
intend to make.
Usually a single paragraph.
Includes some opening remarks directly related to the issue your are writing on(not too general avoid Since the dawn of time openings).
Introduces your theory/approach (if youre using one).
Provides any other context that is relevant/necessary for the reader to makesense of the issue and the thesis statement (titles, dates, names).
Culminates with your thesis statement the point you intend to make about the
issue (generally comes at the end of the paragraph).
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STRUCTURING
YOUR ESSAY:
Some classic models
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THE FISHIntro
Conclusion
Body paragraphs
Main line of
argument running
throughout
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THE HAMBURGER
(5-body-paragraph model)
Same elements as the Fish, different imagery. Its the old
high-school favourite, but generally its too simple for most
topics and tasks at a university level.
Intro
1st , 2nd and
3rd body
paragraphs
Your
conclusion
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THE HAMBURGER
(a more complex model)
Infinitely expandable, depending on your task and word limit.
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THE HAMBURGER
(a really complex model)
Can quickly get out of control.
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HONOURS or MASTERS THESIS
Good luck!
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WHY ORGANIZE YOUR PAPER?
Essays written at university are usually longer and more
complex than those written in high school.
The limited format of three body paragraphs may not suityour writing task.
A well-organized essay shows the development of your
argument and is easy to read.
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THE OUTLINE
Begins with a thesis statement.
Is organized in sections, paragraphs, and points.
Contains sentences that express each main point in
support of the thesis.
Indicates where examples or other evidence will be
used.
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A SAMPLE OUTLINE
Thesis statement: While street parties encourage a sense of tradition, spirit, and continuity for many Queens
students, the damage to property, noise pollution, and loss of a sense of community safety have an
unacceptable negative effect on residents of both the immediate area and the larger community.
Section I. Many students, former and current, argue that street parties are an important part of the Queens
experience and a financial windfall for the city.
Paragraph A contributes to tradition, continuity, and spirit
Paragraph B indirectly leads to alumni contributions
1. quotations form alumni at this years party2. stats re: alumni contributions
Paragraph C generates money for Kingston
Section II. However, parties are actually more detrimental than positive, particularly for residents of the area.
Paragraph A cause serious amount of noise pollution
Paragraph B result in mild through extensive property damage
Paragraph C lead to erosion of neighbourhood sense of safety and community
Section III. Finally, there are negative implications for the larger Kingston community as well.
Paragraph A financial burden due to policing costs, clean-up, etc.
Paragraph B further strain on town-gown relations
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WRITING PARAGRAPHS
Applying a what/how/why strategy to paragraph structure may help you stay focused.
.
What?
(the Point)
The main idea to be discussed
(best introduced in a topic sentence,
the introductory sentence to your
paragraph)
1 to 2
sentences
How?
(the Proof)
The evidence used to substantiate the
point or back up the argument:examples, appropriate reference
material, quotations, etc.
2 to 4
sentences
Why?
(the Comment)
Commentary outlining the
significance of the preceding
material.Your explanation of how and why
these ideas fit together: relationships,
contrasts, conclusions, etc.
2 to 4
sentences
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WHY TRANSITIONS ARE IMPORTANT
Transitional words or phrases help your reader to understand how
one paragraph, idea, or sentence relates to the next.
Transitions can signal to your reader a shift to a new idea, an
opposing point, or an additional example.
NOTE:
Transitions between paragraphs should occur at the beginning
of a new paragraph rather than at the end of the previous
paragraph.
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COMING TO CONCLUSIONS
CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH(S) SHOULD
Provide a brief summary of your essays thesis and main
points not a restatement of your introduction.
Suggest the wider implications of your discussion.
Avoid introducing a contradiction.
NOT introduce any new material.
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MAKE USE OF ALL YOUR EDITORS
Never hand in a paper without first printing out a final draft and reading it over, pen inhand. The part of your brain that reads an electronic screen is different from the part
you use when youre reading hard copy. These two areas of your brain will notice
different problems in your essay.
By reading your paper aloud, you bring into play two further editors in your brain
your ears and your mouth.
eyes part of your brainII
part of yourbrain I
earsmouth
your room-mate
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www.queensu.ca/writingcentre/
613-533-6315
Queens Learning Commons
Main Floor, Stauffer Library
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